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1 Kamizuru Clan on Mon Jan 27, 2014 5:33 am

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Clan: Kamizuru

Kekkei Genkai: Honey Bee Style

Elements: Any though Only one

Specialization: Ninjutsu/ Summoning

Location: Iwagakure

Clan History: Many many years ago they attempted to lead an invasion force into Konohagakure, only to be repelled and largely killed by the more experienced Aburame clan. They had lost so badly that they lost their status and respect in the village and their numbers began to fall to the few remaining members left. Apparently, the First Tsuchikage was one of its members.
Throughout the years the members of this clan had brought their numbers up but had barely gotten their name known at much as it used too.

Kekkei Genkai Description: The members of this clan are able to summon and command bees and wasps, reminiscent of the Konoha Aburame clan, though the bees are not housed within their body and have to be summoned, though not in the usual fashion for the small bees.
They can also generate honey and bees wax or use their bees to generate it.
The members of this clan do not use the generic hand seals used for the Summoning Technique. Instead, they stick their right thumb into the palm of their left hand.

Drawbacks: Members of this clan cannot learn Katon or Raiton.
Any jutsu that are not Bee or Wasp based take 10% more word count then they normally would.

Members: None at the moment.

KKG jutsu:
Kekkei Genkai Jutsu:
Name: Honey Bee Summoning
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: D-S
Type: Offensive
Element: None
Range: Within 20m of user
Specialty: Summoning
Duration: Maintainable (D,C 5 per post) (A,B,S, 10 per post)
Cooldown: 2 times the duration
Description: The user does the signature summoning jutsu handsign of the clan, and then summons forth a number of Bees or Wasps dependent on the rank of the jutsu, these bees can be killed by jutsu at least of a rank lower, though normal taijutsu and bukijutsu can not hit them hard enough to actually do damage to them due to their size and exoskeleton. The bees can not do jutsu themselves but are able to use their stingers to attack foes, and they are only slightly bigger than normal species.

D- Can summon up to 6 bees or wasps, these insects stingers can cause up to .5 inch puntures that become swollen and painful when hit. 10mps
C- Can summon up to 12 bees or wasps  these insects can cause 1 inch puntures that become swollen and painful. 20 mps
B-Can summon up to 17 bees or wasps  these insects can cause 1.5 inch puntures that become swollen and painful. 30mps
A-Can summon up to 22 bees or wasps  these insects can cause 2 inch puntures that become swollen and painful. 40mps
S-Can summon up to 30 bees or wasps  these insects can cause 2 inch puntures that become swollen and painful. and can move at 50mps

Name: Bee Honey Technique
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: C-B
Type: Offensive
Element: None
Range: 20m
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 3 posts
Cooldown: 7 posts
Description: The user infuses their bees with honey, and once the bee are killed the honey is released and sprayed all over the enemy, each bee that is filled with the honey is filled with a compressed amount of honey, and the glob is around 12 inches by 12 inches.
C- The honey is very sticky and is more of a nuisance then something that stops movement, it can be taken off with C level strength but is very sticky and will take a full post to take off, this can only be done to 2 bees. -1 to reaction time. This must be done of the same post as making the bees.
B- The honey is so sticky that that is can stop movement where ever it hits, and takes B rank strength to move any limb that it hits though at a much slower speed, -1 speed if they can move it, this can only be done to 3 bees. The speed negative doesn't stack, but if they are hit in another spot with the Honey they that limb is also immobilized unless B rank strength. This must be done of the same post as making the bees.

Name: Thousand Bee Stings Technique
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Element: None
Range: 20m
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: One post
Cooldown: 3 posts
Description: The user makes the Tiger seal and makes all bees summoned by the "Honey Bee Summoning" technique shoot stingers at the target.
The stingers cause 1.5 inch puncture wounds only as wide as the stingers, and cause swelling where ever they are hit and are very painful. the stingers move at 40mps due to the jutsu being generally weaker then normal B rank ninjutsu.



Last edited by Wolfgang on Wed May 07, 2014 5:35 pm; edited 2 times in total


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2 Re: Kamizuru Clan on Thu Jan 30, 2014 12:11 am

Wolfgang

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Bump


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3 Re: Kamizuru Clan on Sat Feb 01, 2014 5:23 am

Wolfgang

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Bump


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4 Re: Kamizuru Clan on Tue Feb 04, 2014 2:37 am

Gi

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the KKG description and what not are good.
As for jutsu: Your speeds are more or less all a bit high for the rank boundries outlined in the jutsu guidlines, to the point where at some levels you are nearly doubled the speed, please be so kind as to bring thes numbers more in line. Cut back on the number of bees summoned at lower ranks. 10 bees, which are already agile and self guding, are going to be nearly impossibly to dodge already. having a swarm of them is a bit over kill for a D rank.

For the honney jutsu. At C rank what does the honney actually do, besides require C rank and a post to get off, and is annoying? Any reduction to speed, or reflexts or anything?
Also in general does the honney stack from multiple bees, and how?

For the last jutsu: yes they are weaker than a normal B rank, but you are also going to be launching a great deal of stingers at once, probly around 15 if not more. The speed range should be more in the 70s than 80s.

You are more than welcome to get a second opinion on these jutsu. Summoning isn't my forte


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5 Re: Kamizuru Clan on Tue Feb 04, 2014 2:50 am

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Fixed it, and i assumed since the bees are normal bee sized that D rank summon more then one so i clicked each on down on numbr and speed


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6 Re: Kamizuru Clan on Thu Feb 06, 2014 3:18 am

Gi

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Genin
approved


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7 Re: Kamizuru Clan on Wed May 07, 2014 2:49 am

Keiko

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Requesting edits made to the clan jutsu for revamp.

Honey Bee Summoning: To be honest, three times the duration is quite insane for the cooldown. This can be decreased to twice the duration.

Kamizuru Clan wrote: though normal taijutsu can not hit them hard enough to actually do damage to them due to their size and weight.

^ Clarify this. What is it about the size and weight that makes it hard to do damage? Also specify that the speeds you've given are how fast the bees can fight and decrease the speeds to 10 m/s, 20 m/s, 30 m/s, 40 m/s, 50 m/s respective to rank.

Bee Honey Generation: Change the decrease to reaction time according to the new rules, only integers, no 0.5s. Also specify that the infusing of honey must be done in the same post that the bees are created, assuming that these bees are created by another technique.

Thousand Bee Stings Technique: Decrease the speed of the stingers to 50 m/s.


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8 Re: Kamizuru Clan on Wed May 07, 2014 5:35 pm

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I belive i have fixed the jutsu


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9 Re: Kamizuru Clan on Tue May 13, 2014 2:04 am

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Bee Honey Generation: There's a decimal point on your -1 to reaction time for the C rank, please remove that. C rank needs a drawback if you're going to cause a -1. Additionally, for both ranks, having the required strength should be enough to move their limbs, and shouldn't be limited to only a certain number of bees.


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10 Re: Kamizuru Clan on Tue May 13, 2014 3:25 am

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Could you explain what i need to change, XD i misunderstand


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Suiton-S    Ninjutsu-S
Katon-A     Summoning-B
Futton-A  
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11 Re: Kamizuru Clan on Thu May 15, 2014 4:04 am

Noriko

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D-Rank
Bee Honey Generation: There's a decimal point on your -1 to reaction time for the C rank, please remove that. <---Exactly what it says. On one of your "-1"s, it is a "-.1" and that is all.

C rank needs a drawback if you're going to cause a -1. <---you cannot cause a 1-tier debuff at C-rank unless the jutsu has some sort of drawback.

Additionally, for both ranks, having the required strength should be enough to move their limbs,<---She's saying the 1 post to take off should be nixed.

and shouldn't be limited to only a certain number of bees.<---I think she misunderstood, as I think you meant you can only use this technique on 2 bees (rather than having the entire bee colony explode into honey on someone).


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