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1 Kuroka, Gin [Jutsu List Update] on Thu May 08, 2014 8:57 pm

Gin

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C Rank Jutsu




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Name: Heaven Style: Flash of Light
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Element: -
Range: 5m Radius
Specialty: Kenjutsu, Ninjutsu
Duration: 2 posts
Cooldown: 3 posts
Description: A flash of light extends from the tip of Gins finger, temporarily blinding the people within a 5m radius. As her opponents are blinded, Gin quickly appears in front of her opponent and stab her blade through a persons limbs up to 1 . The attack is mostly aimed towards slicing through muscle tissue and tendons in order to make movement harder. The attack itself lasts for one post. The blindness lasts for two.

Name: Wind Style: Solid Air
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Element: Fuuton
Range: 20 m
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: -5 chakra per post.
Cooldown: 6 posts after it is cancelled.
Description: A jutsu that essentially allows the user to walk on air for a certain period of time. The shinobi gathers wind around his legs and concentrates chakra in the soles of his feet to stabilize it, creating a solid surface for the person to stand in the air. The maximum height that the user can reach is 20m in the air.






B Rank Jutsu




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Name: Lightning Style: Shockwave
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Element: Raiton
Range: -
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: 4 posts
Description: Gin sends a direct shock though her nervous system, causing enough pain to snap herself out of a genjutsu up to A rank, assuming that she is aware that she is trapped in one. As a result, however, she is left in acute pain for one post and is disoriented for two more posts.


Name: Heaven Style: Vector Plate
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Type: Defensive/Supplementary
Element: -
Range: 5m (span of the plate itself) 10m (range of the effects)
Specialty: Fuuinjutsu
Duration: 6 posts
Cooldown: 7 posts
Description: This seal takes on a very simple form a black arrow. The arrow itself spans five meters long, but affects both objects and people that go up to 15m above it. They are also able to push forward and repel jutsu that are B rank or below. Once the arrows are placed, whatever approaches them is propelled towards the direction in which the arrow is pointing. Hence, it is able to give a brief boost in speed (35 m/s) for up to 30 meters in the direction where the arrow is pointing. The same happens to items, people and same/lower rank jutsu that are heading towards the arrow: they are launched backwards in the direction where the arrow is pointing at 35 m/s. Two seals can be placed at the same time, with each one after the first draining -5 chakra.







A Rank Jutsu



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Name: Heaven Style: Void Seal
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: A
Type: Defensive/Offensive
Element: Wind
Range: 25m
Specialty: Fuuinjutsu
Duration: 3 post
Cooldown: 6 posts
Description: Gin places a seal within her mouth infused with wind chakra. Once it is released, a strong current of wind draws everything within its surrounding 25 meters towards it in a current of wind that blows at 45 m/s. Whatever is drawn into these winds and reaches Gin's mouth are sealed within the initial seal that Gin placed there. Of course, this technique has a limit to the type of things that it can absorb. It can consume ninjutsu, items and weapons B rank and below. The wind can draw people towards Gin and cause damage because of its rapid currents, including shattered bones, 5 deep lacerations and concussions. It also makes breathing very difficult, thus causing those caught in it to become lightheaded, nauseated or even faint if they remain within the vortex for all three posts that it lasts. Nevertheless, the seal is unable to absorb living beings.


Name: Heaven Style: Holy Seven
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: A-rank
Type: Supplementary
Element: -
Range: 60m
Specialty: Bukijutsu
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: 5 posts
Description: Gin concentrates a large amount of chakra in her legs and arms, making it flow at a very high speed so that she can move forward at 35 m/s. Holding her sword, Gin will slice at her opponent a total of seven times, each time from a different angle and at a spot of her choice. Each cut is 4 deep enough to cut through the victim's muscle tissue producing a large gash that can incapacitate a person's limbs by slicing through his or her ligaments. It can even slice through bone.




S Rank Jutsu


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Name: Heaven Style: Holy Purge
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Element: Fuuton, Raiton
Range: 50m radius
Specialty: Kenjutsu, Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: 5 posts
Description: Up to five, small bolts of lightning extend from the tip of Gins finger. These are small and thin slivers of lightning that are hardly perceptible by the naked eye. Once they come into contact with the target, they affect his or her perception of time, making them lose 2 tiers in this category. Gin then proceeds to rapidly slice her opponent 2 times and from different angles, aiming to either decimate organs or sever limbs. She finishes the jutsu by returning to her initial place and swinging her sword around her to create a ring of cutting wind that extends in a 30m radius around her. This burst of air is capable of slicing through bone, though will not sever limbs or any other part of the body. It moves at 45 m/s.


Name: Heaven Style: Searing Inferno
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Element: Katon
Range: 30m
Specialty: Bukijutsu
Duration: 5 posts
Cooldown: 10 posts
Description: Gin concentrates a large amount of katon chakra onto her weapon. However, instead of manifesting in the form of fire, the energy manifests in the form of radiant heat. Gin channels it to the front of the weapon, thus keeping herself safe from this jutsu's effects. For up to the following 5 posts, said heat emanates from the weapon, thus causing additional burning damage to people within 5m of the weapon itself. The heat is projected in the shape of a cone that is facing away from the user at all times by adapting to the sword's movement in order to keep him from being injured. The immense heat aura is capable of causing third degree burns to anyone within that range. Direct contact with the weapon causes the affected area to be instantly incinerated. Prolonged exposure to the proximity of the weapon (2 posts) also causes the affected area to incinerate. Liquids become highly sensible to the heat and thus begin to boil within one post and evaporate within the next if they are still in proximity of the weapon. Direct contact causes the liquid to evaporate instantly. Thus, organs made up of mostly liquid and exposed to the surface (such as the eyes) are susceptible to this type of damage. The jutsu can be cancelled at any point if Gin so desires.



Last edited by Gin on Wed Jun 25, 2014 5:44 am; edited 2 times in total


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2 Re: Kuroka, Gin [Jutsu List Update] on Sat May 10, 2014 1:44 am

Daraku

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Genin
Clan jutsu will be dealt with in a clan update.

Library jutsu are fine, just be sure to update them when their respective libraries are updated.

Flash of Light is fine.

Solid Air - Lower the range to 20 meters, increase the cooldown to 6 posts.

October is fine.

Path of Training - I personally don't like the idea of this technique. I'd rather not approve it, so if you want to get it checked over, have another mod do so. Sorry. Word count discounts are usually clan-based or event prizes, and very rarely, high-ranked items, but the fact that this is a reusable jutsu with no drawback that can be used on yourself and others to apply the discount is problematic to me, personally.

Vector Plate - Either limit the number of seals that can be created per use to 2 or lower the speed to 20 m/s.

Void Seal - Lower the range to 25 meters since this is a radius technique and you already have an additional effect on it, and increase the cooldown to 6 posts.

Holy Seven - Take out the part about being unable to be seen by the naked eye, increase the cooldown to 5 posts, and clarify that you can only move forward in one direction when you're using this.

Purge - You're giving a -2 to perception and slicing up the opponent and sending out full speed wind that can slice through people. Too much, even for an S-Rank. Either take out some of these effects or lower their potencies.

Searing Inferno - Either lower the severity of the contact burns (from instant incineration to 4th degree burns) and speed of the beam (from 70 m/s to 50 m/s) or just take out the beam thing entirely; you can't have both at full power. Increase the cooldown to 10 posts.

Bump when you've made the edits.


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3 Re: Kuroka, Gin [Jutsu List Update] on Sun Jun 15, 2014 5:52 am

Gin

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Edited!

As for the training aids, it reduces speed by a considerable amount as a stated drawback and I'm willing to add more drawbacks if that's what it takes.


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4 Re: Kuroka, Gin [Jutsu List Update] on Tue Jun 24, 2014 7:26 pm

Mikage

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C-Rank
Shockwave: Specify that the user must be aware that they are under a Genjutsu.

Path of Training: I'm going to agree with Jerad for this one. Word count reduction jutsu kind of goes against our training systems, and would be restricted to high ranked items or rare event prizes. Feel free to replace this with an equal rank technique though.

Holy Seven: Decrease the damage to 4" cuts.

Holy Purge: Decrease the radius to 30m radius or decrease the speed to 45 m/s.

Searing Inferno: Increase the cooldown to 10 posts as requested. Is the heat emanating from the weapon just in one direction, or a radius (potentially including the user)? Clarify this.

5 Re: Kuroka, Gin [Jutsu List Update] on Wed Jun 25, 2014 5:45 am

Gin

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Edited! I'll app the B rank separately and link this to my jutsu app when I do to show that it's meant to replace this one.


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6 Re: Kuroka, Gin [Jutsu List Update] on Sat Aug 16, 2014 12:36 pm

Keiko

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Holy Seven: I'd like the range to come down to at least 45 m, as you're moving at A ranked speed with A ranked damages.


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7 Re: Kuroka, Gin [Jutsu List Update] on Tue May 19, 2015 2:51 am

Noriko

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Bumpity-bump so Andrea-dear knows this still needs some attention.~


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