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1 Genko Binsu [Jutsu List Update] on Fri May 09, 2014 2:41 am

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Jutsu Seal: Release ~



E rank (2):

Retrieval seal:

Name: Retrieval seal
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: E,  but the chakra cost depends on the rank of the item. E: 5, D: 10, C: 15, B: 20, A: 25, S: 30
Type: Supplementary
Element: /
Range: Short Range
Specialty: Fuuinjutsu
Duration: instant
Cooldown: 2 posts
Description: This is the jutsu used to summon the 'location' tag, along with the item tagged with it, to the same location as the home tag. The user firstly makes the half-dragon seal with either one of their hands, then place their middle and index fingers on the home tag, in order to summon the location tag.
Derived Sealing Technique:

Name:  Derived Sealing Technique
Canon/Custom:  Canon/Custom
Rank:  E, but the chakra cost depends on the rank of the item. E: 5, D: 10, C: 15, B: 20, A: 25, S: 30
Type:  Supplementary
Element:  N/A
Range:  Short range
Specialty:  fūinjutsu
Duration:  Instant
Cooldown:  2 posts
Description: This technique is similar to the standard ninja skill 'Generic Sealing Technique', which allows a ninja to summon an assortment of items that have been stored using fūinjutsu, but also enables the sealing of living things such as animals. Scrolls are the most common choice for item storage. When needed, the owner will activate the seals releasing their item, living thing or weapon of choice. The jutsu can be used to either store an item in something and to summon it from something.
The sealing scrolls for this technique need to bought in the item shop and users can only seal items/weapons/pets they own.


D rank (2):

Haze Clone Jutsu:

Name: Haze Clone Jutsu (朧分身の術: Oboro Bunshin no Jutsu)
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Element: /
Range: Short (0-5m)
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: Clones initially last 1 post/ -5 per post
Cooldown: 2 posts /+1 post to cooldown for every post maintained
Description: Using this technique, the user can create up to five intangible clones that appear physically identical to the user. The clones have no physical form, and as such cannot attack. These clones are similar to those made by the Doppleganger technique, only they do not instantly dissipate when objects/jutsu with certain strength levels pass through them. It's mainly used to help mask the user, helping them attack an opponent who is superior at dodging. The clones do not disturb the area around them, dont cast shadow, dont have body heat,  and as such experienced ninja can easily pick them out. Costs 10 chakra to create clones. The level of jutsu/items that can pass through the clone before dissipating it depends on the user's rank.

Genin (D rank): 1 C rank, 2 D,

Chunin (C rank): 1 B, 2 C, 3 D,

Special Jounin (B rank): 1 A, 2 B, 3C, 4 D,

Jounin (A rank): 1 S, 2 A, 3 B, 4 C, 5 D,

Sanin (S rank): 2 S, 3 A, 4 B, 5 C, 6 D,


C rank (4):

2_inch slice:

Name: 2_inch slice
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Element: Raiton
Range: Contact (Bladed)
Specialty: Bukijutsu
Duration: 1 post/maintainable for 5 chakra per post
Cooldown: 3 posts (+1 per every post maintained)
Description: Channeling a portion of his raiton chakra into any of his swords, Binsu is able to increase the slicing depth of any bladed weapon ranked C rank or higher by 1 inches (2.54cm) for the duration of the jutsu as well as giving said weapon a defensive defensive ability. It takes 2 attacks of equal rank, and 3 of a rank lower to break the jutsu (this only protects the sword from receiving damage, not the user). For an additional 5 chakra per every additional blade, Binsu can add this same effect to another bladed weapon so long as he maintains physical contact with the blade (max weapons 2 at any given time) but cannot stack this jutsu on the same weapon for an increase in power AT ALL.
Mental Presence:

Name: Mental Presence
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Element: /
Range: <25m radius
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 post/-5 per post
Cooldown: 3 posts + duration
Description: The user makes physical contact with any surface and channels a significant amount of chakra through it and around the it. Once the jutsu's activated, the user is then able to pick up exact locations of all targets moving on or standing on the surface of the area within the jutsu's range, based on the pressure they add to the surface and the vibrations they give off when they move across said surface. The user draws a pitch black, blank canvas in their mind, with one large dot on the centre of the canvas: this large white dot represents their current location. When the user picks up a change of pressure on the surface they're currently working on, within the jutsu's range, a smaller white dot will appear on the user's mental canvas to represent the area where there's a change in pressure on the surface. The user can then use the location of this smaller white dot on the mental canvas to determine where in the real world around their current location, this change of pressure would be. It should be noted that this jutsu can only pick up changes in surface pressure AFTER its activation.


B rank (8):

Lightning Beast Claw:

Name: Lighning Style: Beast Claw [獣爪 - Kemono tsume]
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Element: Raiton
Range: <15m
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: 3 posts
Description: The user first performs the one handed half-dragon seal before opening either their right or left hand palm fully open. Taking advantage over the two basic functions of Change in chakra form and Change in chakra nature the user cloaks their hand with a bright yellow glow of chakra, before giving it raiton properties. The user then shapes this violent build of chakra into a large claw (roughly 3 times bigger than the user's own hand). When used by a highly skilled ninja (Special Jounin ranked or above) this technique can take as little as two seconds to prepare. The user can then choose to either launch the jutsu towards their target immediately or stall for a maximum of two posts before launch (after 3 posts of stalling the jutsu dissipates). The claw travels at 30m/s: if hit targets can expect to be knocked back at least 5m, receive minor 2nd degree tissue burns to any unprotected flesh around an area within 3cm of the point of impact (major 1st degree burns anywhere 3 more centimetres away from the point of impact, where there's unprotected flesh) as well as deep tissue bruising and broken bones at the point of impact.  
Doton Formation:

Name: Doton Formation
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Element: Doton
Range: <2m
Specialty:  Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 Post
Cooldown: 3 Posts
Description: This jutsu allows the user to produce a large amount of mud from their mouth and spit it all out roughly <2m away from themselves within 2 seconds, in the shape they wish it to be, before changing its state into solid rock. The doton structure made by this jutsu cannot be taller/wider than 15m, no thicker than 3m, or have a diameter greater than 15m. The user can suspend this structure in mid air or on the ground for the duration of the jutsu. The user can form a Cubical, Cylinderical, Conical, Pyramid or Spherical-shaped structure. Users CANNOT devide the mud into smaller sections to make multiple structures, but for the same chakra cost needed to activate the jutsu they can form additional structures (maximum of 4 structures can be formed in any one post) with the same properties as the first, in the same post.

It takes: 1 S or A ranked attack , or 2 B ranked attacks (or 1 B ranked ration attack) or 3 C ranked attacks (or 2 C ranked ration attacks) to break these structures. D and E ranked attacks are unable to break these structures.
Hiding like a mole technique:

Name: Earth Release: Hiding Like a Mole Technique
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: B rank
Type: Supplementary
Element: Doton
Range: <20m per post (travelling)
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 post activation /-5 chakra per post
Cooldown: 3 posts
Description: This technique changes earth into fine sand by channelling chakra into it, allowing the user to dig through it like a mole. This effect goes around the body (not just the hands), making it just large enough for a person to move through. The user can pinpoint where they are, despite being underground, by sensing the magnetic forces. They can also sense what is happening on the surface and use that information to launch a surprise attack on the enemy. It also appears that after digging, the ground can be returned to its original state, leaving no trace of where the user entered the earth. One can also hide deep in the ground, escaping to a depth where the enemy can't reach: can go as deep as 20m deep for a maximum of 3 posts per every time activated, before suffocation. Users can remain underground for a maximum of 10 posts before suffocation and their speed decreases by -1 tier whilst partially submerged underground (-2 tiers whilst fully submerged).
Earth Release Mud Clone:

Name: Earth Release Mud Clone
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: B rank
Type: Supplementary
Element: Doton
Range: clones can go up to 50m away from user before dispersing.
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: /-5 chakra per clone per post
Cooldown: 4 posts
Description: This technique creates up to 4 clones made up of mud and physically identical to the user. Since they are made up of mud, they can continue to reform and mold themselves back to their original shape when hit with any attack D rank or lower and are able to each take 2 C rank hits before dispersing. These mud clones however are weak to raiton, and as such: are only able to take 1 C rank raiton attack before dispersing and it takes 3 D ranked raiton attacks to disperse them. After reverting to mud, it can hold the opponent in place for a maximum of 1 post. These clones can physically attack other members with strikes equal to their own ranks and can each wield a sword just like their creator.


A rank (4):

Doton Cannon:

Name: Earth Release: Doton Cannon (Doton Taihou ~ 土遁・大砲)
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Element: Doton
Range: 30 meters
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 post/Maintainable (-10 chakra per post)
Cooldown: 3 posts (+1 per every post maintained)
Description: The user forms a cannon of Doton around their arm and launches high speed rock-bullets from it, at a rate of 3 bullets per post. Each bullet can penetrate up to 3 inches into a target’s flesh, and is capable of fracturing bones and damaging organs, if aimed correctly at the area of impact. The bullets all travel at a speed of 36 m/s. Each bullet is the size on an orange.

Raiton Disc:

Name: Raiton Disc [まとっディスク - Lightning Disc]
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Element: Raiton
Range: <55m
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 2-3 Posts
Cooldown: 5 posts after deactivation
Description: The user builds up a large amount of raiton chakra within the palms of object in their hands, before instantaneously shaping it into the form of a large disc-like object, hollow in the middle and perfectly round with a diameter of 1m. The preparation for this jutsu takes no more than 2 seconds to complete. After the preparation for the jutsu is complete, the user can then launch the jutsu either in the same post as the preparation or the one after (no more than a one post delay). When launched the disc will fly towards the user’s intended target, with the guidance of the caster at speeds matching the jutsu’s rank (36m/s). When and if the jutsu manages to land a hit on said target, it’ll automatically wrap itself around the victim’s body and cause major 2nd degree burns around the bicep areas of the victim’s arms, as well as the lower part of their torso. The target will then be paralyzed for the following two posts of the thread.

Note: the caster can only guide the disc towards targets they can visually see or know the exact pinpoint location of.



Last edited by Binsu on Tue Mar 03, 2015 3:10 am; edited 16 times in total


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2 Re: Genko Binsu [Jutsu List Update] on Mon May 26, 2014 10:26 pm

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2 Inch Slice: Remove the +1 from this. Decrease the increase in slicing depth to 1 inch, and decrease defensive ability to 2 of equal rank, and 3 of a rank lower. As for giving this effect to additional blades … I'd say limit it to two, and increase the chakra cost, unless you decrease the damage / defensive ability even further.

Mental Presence: Change cooldown to "3 posts + duration".

Lightning Style: Beast Claw: Remove the +1. Decrease the speed according to the new jutsu guidelines, and limit the burn damage (a certain area of impact for the second degree burns, and a certain larger area for the first degree burns). Also limit the breaking of bones to direct area of impact.

Doton Formation: I'm not comfortable with the idea of potentially have three structures (although small), to each have full defensive capabilities. I'd recommend just keeping either one structure, or dividing up the amount that it can block against.

Hiding Like a Mole Technique: -1 rank should probably be changed to -1 tier of a rank in speed.

Earth Release Mud Clone: At B rank, they should only be able to shrug off D rank attacks / techniques, or C rank basic strikes. Unless this is made to be a defensive technique, an attack B rank or higher would disperse the clones, as well as two C rank attacks.

Doton Cannon: Decrease the speed according to new jutsu guidelines.

Raiton Disc: Remove the +1 from this. Also decrease the speed.

Electric Shock Impulse: Remove the +1. Decrease all radius ranges according to new jutsu guidelines.

Heavenly Attack: Remove the +1. Change cooldown to "6 posts + Duration". Decrease the speed of the S rank portion to appropriate jutsu speeds, and for C rank, decrease burns to "minor second degree".

Earth Changing Terrain: I honestly think this jutsu is much too versatile. To cover all of the possibilities, each one would need to be specified and have it's own stated damages / defensive ability / miscellaneous usage, etc. I'd recommend limiting this to certain functions.


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3 Re: Genko Binsu [Jutsu List Update] on Mon Jul 21, 2014 3:42 am

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Ty for the review, sorry for the extremely late response, but All Edits Made ~


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4 Re: Genko Binsu [Jutsu List Update] on Sat Aug 16, 2014 1:01 pm

Keiko

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All jutsu libraries have been revamped, please replace any old library techniques you may have with the new ones.

Beast Claw: Replace "shattered bones" to "broken bones".

Doton Formation: It's a little unclear right now. So do you start with 1 structure, and is able to create an additional structure per post for the same chakra cost?

Doton Cannon: The speed is still way too high, drop it down to appropriate A rank speeds.

Electric Shock Impulse: What does it mean when it says it scaled from D-S, but then is capped at A? If it's just up to A rank, then the S rank portions can be removed. Also, edit the radius ranges mentioned in the first paragraph of the description as well.

Earth Changing Terrain: Remove the "Offensive" label for the jutsu type. Decrease defensive properties to two of equal rank and three of a rank lower, as it cannot defend against techniques of a rank higher as a maintainable technique.


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5 Re: Genko Binsu [Jutsu List Update] on Fri Sep 26, 2014 2:35 am

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Edits have been made and more explanation where needed has been provided ~


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6 Re: Genko Binsu [Jutsu List Update] on Sat Dec 06, 2014 2:46 pm

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Retrieval Seal: It kinda says this right in the jutsu...it's Summoning. Or some other form of Space-Time Ninjutsu. (If this is scratched, you'll naturally get to make a new jutsu to replace it, as well as get a refund/equal-rank item to replace the seal.)

Derived Sealing: Limit this to nonhumans. Not that you use it for anything else but your pet, methinks, but still.

Beast Claw: Define 'deep tissue damage'. In addition, since this is a rather balanced technique, I'd like you to have hand seals on this. Not using them usually costs you something.

Doton Cannon: Define the bullets' size.

Raiton Disc: Max speed for the rank, high range, and damage along with 2-post paralysis. It needs toning down in at least 2 of these categories.


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7 Re: Genko Binsu [Jutsu List Update] on Wed Jan 28, 2015 8:30 am

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Retrieval seal: I honestly don't know why this is deny-worthy. I could and will add in a limit to stationery objects only, which will just make it a two-part version of the generic sealing technique but the central idea/concept of it lies within the boundaries of Fuinjutsu.

Derived sealing technique: can we say no live humans, I kinda wanted to use it as a means of transporting corpses aswell (since they might aswell be considered objects)

Claw: edited

Doton cannon: edited

Raiton Disc: edited


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8 Re: Genko Binsu [Jutsu List Update] on Tue Mar 03, 2015 3:11 am

Tenmei

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Alrighty then

Retrieval Seal and Derived Sealing Technique: Are both fine and can be moved back to your list - APPROVED

Haze Clone Jutsu: All good - APPROVED

2 Inch Slice
and Mental Presence - APPROVED

Doton Formation, Beast Claw, Hiding like a mole technique,
and Mud Clone: are all edited to satisfaction and are also - APPROVED

Doton Canon and Raiton Disk: Are also APPROVE worthy


Look at that, you are all done :)
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