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Suutei

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The sun had arisen and it was a warm day in Konoha and it citizens were going about their daily routines.  Shopkeepers attempted to call out to the potential customers, in a competition about who had the lower prices and better specials.  Children ran around in the streets playing tag, hide & seek, and other games they enjoyed playing to past the time.  Suutei awoke earlier that day for his daily exercise and was just about to finish up, ending with the usual three hundred handstand push-ups.  Pushing forcing himself to work hard, as each drop of sweat, rolling from his chin to the floor.  
Suutei squinted as the sweat got into his eyes and started to burn.  While his arms began to bulge as his muscles gained more definition but remained thin, his navy hair hanging straight down touching the floor after every rep.  Suutei wore his exercise attire, blue harem pants with a black sash around the waist, his Konohagakure headband tied around his upper right arm.  

”Two hundred ninety-seven...ugh...two hundred... ninety-eight...two hundred...ninety-nine...COME ON...THREE HUNDRED!”  Suutei fell onto his back, breathing heavily he tried to bring himself to his feet shaking his head rapidly side to side to release the sweat from his hair.  ”Ah, that was a good workout.”  Suutei stepped into his bathroom, staring at himself in the mirror his face glazed with sweat, his crystal blue coloured eyes gave off a look that could steal someones soul, his thinly arched blue eyebrows perfectly tailored, his short now messy hair needing to be washed.  Suutei stepped over into the shower stripping off his clothes before he turned on the hot water, scolding himself a little he quickly turned the cold water on.  The showerhead releasing the water warm water, that made Suutei's body glisten.  The water gave him a vibrant feel as he began to cleanse himself from the odour he received from his workout.

By the time Chopper was up and hungry as always, Suutei was on the roof snapping pictures of the citizens roaming the village, but only those who stood out.  "Suutei!!! Im getting hungry!!!  When are we going to eat?!?!"  Suutei ignored Tony but couldn't leave him hungry, he'd just get more bitchy so he decided to take out a granola bar and tossed it back to him.  Suutei took a look at his film, it seemed he was almost out but needed a few more pictures.  Walking through a well nurtured rooftop garden Suutei sat by a row of vegetables, looking through his bag for more film.  Without looking, he could overhear Tony crunching on the granola bar he'd given him.  Suutei rummaged through his backpack, only to find a change of clothes and other useless things at the moment.

Suutei decided that he would go to the bath house for a much needed relaxation day.  "Hey Chopper, you wanna go the bath house today?" Suutei threw his camera into his bag and walked down the side of the building.  "Suutei wait up!"  Tony ran off of the edge and fell off before Suutei grabbed him by his backpack.  "Dammit Tony!  Won't you be more careful!"  Suutei reached ground level and convenient enough would arrive at the bathhouse, within 50 meters.  Chopper tried his hardest to keep himself atop Suuteis head.

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Yuzu Ren

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He woke up early that morning wearing a loose torn vest and some sleep shorts as he yawned raising up his blanket hissing like a vampire, as the sunlight went through the window hitting him in the face. Covering his eyes a bit to block out the sun with his hand he got up very slowly, sitting on the side of the bed swinging his feet back and forth as he began to wonder what to do today. He scratched his head and felt it was really dirty so he slid down softly as his one foot touched the ground, followed by the second foot which he carefully placed as well. He walked step by careful step as he looked around, searching with his eyes for any threats to his life and then he looked next to the bathroom door. His five beautiful swords still there as he remembered he forgot to remove the string from his wrist as he broke it off quickly. He entered the shower as he was half way removing his shirt as his one hand grabbed hold of the tap and turned it he suddenly stopped, the water was not running as he pulled his shirt back on and noticed that the water was not coming out. He looked up at the shower head but nothing, not even a drop. He then noticed a sign on the wall, the sign said 'Water and Lights will be down for maintenance, sorry for the inconvenience'.

This was rather annoying as he needed a bath really badly, but he also needed to do it in peace as he stepped outside barefeet, not even caring about the dangers that may run into him as he yawned again and walked outside. Some children were running in the streets and one of them tagged his back and said he was it, he chased after them playfully as he ran passed and noticed this strange older kid with spiky blue hair who did not seem to notice how weird his hair looked. He then actually crashed into one of the other kids as he was staring confused at the kid doing handstand push ups on the roof. To make it even worse that big kid was wearing some of the weirdest clothes he had ever seen. The young boy could do that too, not that well but at least he could do handstands as good as any genin or any normal kid for that matter. He began to wonder whether he was still asleep when the one kid pushed him off as he fell on his back and was still staring, the other kids looked and then one kid said. "That big kid over there is weird, stay away from him".

Afer that brief encounter they were playing hide and seek, sadly the young boy forgot that hide and seek is suppose to be fun and he sort of hid so well the other kids all gave up and left. He realised they were gone and yawned a bit more as he was bored, he noticed he was sweaty and he forgot all about his bath as he looked around he finally decided to make his way towards the baths.

As he was walking he noticed a flash and hid away as he looked up and he saw that same weird big kid taking pictures of people just walking in the street, but it looked a bit suspicious like he was picking his snap targets. Was that weird kid some kind of assassin marking his targets or maybe some weird guy who likes taking pictures of people walking beautifully in the street. He took a closer look as he kept watching the weirdo, the boy seemed to be looking through his bag. Was this kid searching for a weapon, he began to get a bit angsty then he took a sniff and scratched his hair as he watched all the dirt fly out. "I really need to wash my hair", he had started getting into the habit of talking to himself sometimes, this was mainly due to loneliness and other issues like home sickness.

He forgot about the weirdo as he made his way to the bath, he did not like the guy's section since it was full of all these guys showing off muscles which he did not have. He was strong, but most of his muscles did not show so he looked plain weak regardless of how much he trained. As he entered the bath house he gave the impression of a tomboy as the one lady at the counter looked at him, she was a bit confused not sure if he was a boy or a girl as she just said. "Do you need a towel?", he just nodded softly as she gave it to him, he entered the girls section after quickly changing in the changing room corner he had recently begun reserving for himself, then he stepped out with a towel covering his chest till just above his knees. There was nothing other than his hips not being as wide as most girls to indicate he was male, then again other than experienced Medical Shinobi or people who actually know him there was no way to tell. He did not really care much about his gender but he got offended sometimes, and other times he just did not care about it at all. In the end he was Yuzu and that was all that mattered. He slowly sat down into the spring for the girls all alone, seems the other girls had not gotten there yet, but the men on the other side got restless as they heard someone enter the females side. Who knew what would be in store for the young boy this day.

Training Words = 970


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Suutei

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After departing with Chopper at a barbecue restaurant Suutei had come to the bath house, only to find the male side overly populated.  Suutei felt uncomfortable when around a large group of males, and the fact they all were nude did not assist the cause.  Suutei soon would take matters into his own hands he exited the bathhouse and proceeded to the side behind a bush.  Peeking his head through the bush it seemed no one noticed him, and he proceeded with his plan.  "Well I didn't attend the academy for nothing.  Here goes...TRANSFORM!"  Instantaneously a puff of smoke appeared and quickly faded away, the transformation was a success.  Suutei had every feature of a female and was no where near close to being recognized as a male.  Suutei got a dirty thought as he slid his hands down his womanly figure, below the naval and between his thighs.  He blushed slightly and carried on inside of the bathhouse, vowing to never attempt that again.  The bathhouse was still a sausage fest as Suutei maneuvered through the hordes of men who gave him uncomforting looks, The sooner I change back the better...these guys are freaking me out...  A woman at the counter looked at him, she was a bit too perky for his liking as she greeted him and asked. "Do you need a towel?", he just nodded softly as she gave it to him, he entered the girls section after quickly changing in the changing room corner he had recently claimed for himself, then he stepped out with a towel covering his chest till just above his knees.  Playing ethe part of a girl perfectyl, There was not one flaw in his Transformation that indicated he was a male.

Transformation:
 Suuteis attire remains the same, just not any of his male features.

Walking through the door way of the springs Suutei was about to release the Transformation, until he saw a head full of blonde hair.  Shit...  Suutei thought to himself as he approached the water that emitted steam to set a relax mood.  Suutei would simply play it cool as he dropped the towel, he got chills around his breast shortly after.  He would have never imagined a girl could freeze her nipples off, Suutei covered himself as he stepped into the water.  Suutei now submerged in the water about chest deep greeted the girl in the water with her, something was familiar about her though.  "Hi my name is Suu...er...Suzuki.  Almost blowing his cover he brought his slender right hand from within the water for a shake with the other girl.  Hopefully small talk would get him threw this awkward sitting with the girl.  The girl was peculiar though she had green eyes, and subtle feature she had to have been a year or so younger than Suutei.  Suutei's muscles began to loosen as the water now was setting in, and his body became limp.

Word Count: 1085
Chakra: 145/150


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Yuzu Ren

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He knew it was too good to be true as he was relaxing beautifully in the bath, a girl he had never seen before entered with familiar blue hair. He began to wonder if blue hair was part of some kind of Blue Hairy Clan where all their hair is blue, as he imagined a hairy man looking like a blue bear and a hairy woman looking like a wooly mammoth. His imagination was out of control thanks to the steam of the hot springs. The girl just dropped the towel as he blushed sinking deeper with only his eyes sticking out, and his blonde hair floating on the surface of the water. He found it weird that she did not cover herself before entering and also wondered why she was covering up with her sexy body that she had. She introduced herself as Suuzuki, with an emphasis on the Suu, he introduced himself as he said in his somewhat girl like voice which made it sound like he was a tomboy, "I am Aura from Naka Riveria Estate" , which was currently the name he took while here, the estate being a bandit mansion which was his current base for infiltrating the main bandit leaders. The girl did something really suspicious though, she just opened with a handshake out of nowhere, what kind of girl does handshakes.

"Sorry, i do not do handshakes", as he looked to the side wondering why she did not do a better job of covering up like he did. Holding his towel up just incase the water made itself more clear. He noticed her body become limp as he leaned forward nearing her face and asked, "Are you okay?" The worry as his cute beautiful blue eyes were staring into hers. He was beginning to think she was a lesbian, which was a word he learnt in Konoha meant that a girl likes girls more than boys, which he thought was stupid because you are who you are, what you are does not even matter.

Words = 970 + 349 = 1319


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Suutei

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Suutei or now taking on the identity of Suzuki had withdrew his hand from the other girl.  Once his body had gone limp he closed his eyes, he had never felt so rejuvenated before ever in his life.  Their was nothing he would rather do to enjoy this bath, Suuteis eyes quickly shot opened when the other girl asked if he was okay.  The girl had features of a tomboy though Suutei found himself attracted to tomboyish girls.  Suutei gazed into the girls bright blue eyes after she approached him, checking to see if he was okay.  Maybe to see if he had fainted, or maybe the girl had some sort of attraction to girls as well.  Suutei thought she was rather pretty her blonde hair had rather gotten her attention.  Suutei lost in thought barely remembered her name, which was Aura from the Naka Riveria Estate.  Suutei rembered seeing the estate before while out in the wilderness, it was a lovely home.

"It must be a very nice place to live.  Wow it really is getting hot in here huh?"Suutei began to blush not sure if it was the stimulation from the heat, or the fact this girl was so close.  Still up close with the girl he had the sudden urge to kiss her, was it weird that he did she was a girl nothing weird about her.  Maybe it was because they just met but then again, nothing could stop the both of threm.  Suutei leaned forward slightly touching her forehead with Auras' and accidentally lost his balance. Suuteis' lips met with Auras' as they kissed each other unexpectedly.

Word Count: 1358
OOC: No offense but I kinda want this to escalate xD


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Yuzu Ren

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Suzuki had withdrawn his hand from her in reply to him not shaking her hand, which was sort of his fault. He hardly shook hands, and he was more of a hugs kind of kid. She seemed a bit startled when Yuzu asked her if she was okay, he was wondering how long it would take for her to respond since it felt like forever. After an unknown eternity she finally replied with the words that he stays in a nice place and mentioning that it was hot. Stating the obvious seemed to be something everyone liked to do, like we all live in this world where everyone is so stupid that they have to repeat how stupid they are for it to sink in. He noticed her start to blush as he looked down for a moment into the water making sure he was still covered up. He began to feel breathing on his face as he felt her forehead against his, the slip scared the young blonde shinobi as he ended up ducking under as she kissed his nose, due to the electricity flowing through his body in his confused state he shocked her. It appeared strange that she looked like someone just kissed her as he looked at the face she was pulling. He began to think that he might have gone a bit overboard, however there was something else that occured.

It was unclear how long it took for either of them to realise the situation, with the electicity now moving around. His left hand firmly on her round fruit as he squeezed it for a bit, he began to think for a bit then finally asked her. "Suzuki are you there?", he squeezed a second time to check if she was still conscious. He had not really touched these before, but they seemed wrong and he could not figure out why. His other hand was rubbing the lip mark off his nose, as he felt like he could sneeze at anytime. What was the girl thinking leaning so far forward in the first place, and she seemed rather clumsy so she was probably an ordinary girl.

Words = 1319 + 361 = 1680
Chakra = 330/340


Raition Hiraishin:

Name: Lightning Release: Lightning Rod (雷遁・避雷針 ~ Raiton: Hiraishin)
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Element: Raiton
Range: Short (Contact)
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: Instantaneous
Cooldown: 3 posts
Description: The user gathers a large amount of lightning at the tip of their fingers which then travels down throughout their body, shocking anyone in direct contact with them. The raiton charge is relatively weak, causing only 1st degree burns and is mainly used to cause a person to release their grip on you or break contact. This jutsu does not require hand signs.


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Suutei

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Suutei felt electrified literally his body was given a shaking pattern, he blinked and instantly his eyes shot open.  Suutei had watched the other girl grab his breast and squeezed it, and it sent an almost arousing yet slightly painful sensation through his body.  This girl was a bit touchy, not that there was a problem with that Suutei could also be touchy as well.  This girl had a certain touch that Suutei liked, and had no complaints.  Aura squeezed his breast again and this time it started burning, like he was touched by a hot iron.  Suutei grabbed Auras shoulders trying to push her away, shaking her head.  "I'm sorry Aura I am a klutz.  I'm fine now thanks for asking, but could you let go of my boobs now."  Suutei could not hold out much longer this girl was beginning to arouse him, and he grabbed a bucket of water from the side.  Suutei poured the water over the girls head as a joke, and started to laugh.  "Haha!  Come on lets enjoy the bath Aura!"

Suutei threw the bucket to the side, and started to push his hands forward simultaneously splashing Aura.  Suutei needed to keep his girlish personality up, but that sensation he felt from Aura touching him almost made him lose control of the transformation.  Suutei thought about what Chopper may be up to, he gave him a lot of money he hoped he did not spend it all.  

Chopper now on his tenth rack of ribs at the barbecue restaurant, and belched loudly.  A crowd of people swarming around his table, he began devouring each bone.  "I want that Ryo!!!  Gaaaah!!!"  Gripping the last rib bone, he tore the last piece of meat off the bone and held it up high. "The 10 rack challenge was no match for Tony Chopper!"  Chopper received a slip for 700 ryo for completing the challenge, he grabbed the slip thanking the owner for allowing him to participate and left the restaurant.

Word Count: 1694
Chakra: 140


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Yuzu Ren

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He wondered why the girl seemed to make strange noises, and she seemed to be enjoying herself until she grabbed his shoulders and tried pushing her head while shaking her head. He realised she was asking him to stop as he let go of her precious area. She apologized and said that she was okay now and that she was thankful he asked. She also told him to let go of her breasts as he wondered why she still said it when the head shaking already told him that. She then grabbed a bucket of water and poured it over the poor little blonde's head as his hair became flat for a moment before he shivered and shook his head as it returned to its usual unkempt appearance.

She began to laugh and told them to enjoy the water as she proceeded to toss the bucket one side and began splashing him with water which hit him in the face, he did not get it but decided to splash back with one hand hitting the same water back at Suzuki. He then looked down as if something was bothering him as he held his towel up and then stood up, "I have something to tell you, but just promise not to freak out okay?" As the blonde stood holding the towel tightly around his body, as he wanted to tell her something of such great importance that the blonde had a seriously sad look on his face. A few tears seemed to flow from the blonde kids face, but it was mostly the water from his hair dripping down. What could it be that he could not tell her out loud without asking her to be calm first.

Words = 1680 + 289 = 1969
Chakra = 330/340


OOC Comment : Thought a nice cliffhanger would do us some good, hehe...


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Suutei

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After their short lived splash fight, Suutei could see something troubling Aura.  Almost a look of disappointment, Suutei felt strange when Aura decided to get out of the bath and stood outside the bath.  Somehow she was having trouble explaining something to her, perhaps trying to inform her of something important.  Then she asked him to promise to remain calm why would he not remain calm, was it something that he did.  Suutei began calculating all the possible things it could be, maybe she had some sort of birth deficiency.  No that couldn't be it she seemed perfectly normal, like a regular ole tomboy.  Suutei could see tears begin to roll down her cheeks, or maybe it was water from her hair.  Suutei grabbed a towel from the side and stepped out of the water covering himself from his chest to knees.  Suutei walked over to Aura and hugged her tight not tight as squeezing the life from her, but in a comforting way.  "I promise Aura  I will not freak out."  Giving her a reassuring tone so she would just tell her, though she was a bit skeptical about what it may be.

Suutei noticed one thing about Aura, even though she was a girl she had the flattest chest ever almost like a boy.  The steam became to intensify and it got hazy, as Suutei stood holding Aura in his arms.  At this moment he began wondering what Chopper was doing, hopefully he got home safely.

Chopper indeed was in trouble after being chased by a pack of small children and out of panic crashed into a fruit stand due to him not being aware of his own surroundings.  Chopper ended up not returning home but indeed running from others, usually how he spends his afternoons for being so clumsy.

”Sir, Im sorry I didn’t mean to destroy your stand!  AH!  Please don’t hurt me!”

”Oh You’ll be sorry you brat!”

Chopper was still being chased by the fruit vendor who still was incredibly pissed that Chopper single handedly destroyed his fruit stand.  He could onlt imagine how angry Suutei would be when he found out, in the mean time he needed to return home.  He would take the shortcut through the outskirts and through the trees to their home to the south.

Word Count: 2083


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Yuzu Ren

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He wanted to tell her without scaring her away, but the beautiful girl Suzuki placed her towel on herself properly then she promised she would not freak out. She did something unexpected and which was normally dangerous for the most part if he new the truth about Aura. He sniffed and gulped as he turned his head to look into Suzuki's eyes. He whispered softly so that only she could hear him. "I am a bandit, those men on the otherside all work for our leader, and she sent them to watch over me. So when we leave i have to take you outside as a hostage"

He only realised those men were there for him after he remembered seeing them guarding the mansion. The Naka Riveria Estate was a mansion belonging to some noble bandits from the Konoha region, who had been infiltrated by Yuzu earlier who went under the name Aura. In this situation they were not just there to watch over him, but also to make sure he was truly one of them. He was sad because he might have to kill his new friend as he looked down really really sadly. "Sorry, I got you involved, i should have told the lady not to let anyone else in here, but i figured the other girls would never come here with all these men around. I hate these guys, but they here to protect me"

Words = 1969 + 245 = 2214
Chakra = 330/340


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Watching the other girl gulp, as her lips quivered trying to form the words to speak.  Suutei wondered if Auras' would really be that bad.  Gazing into the girls beautiful crystal blue eyes, as she turned to also look Suutei in the eyes.  "I am a bandit, those men on the otherside all work for our leader, and she sent them to watch over me. So when we leave i have to take you outside as a hostage"  Suutei eyes widened as he let the girl out of his grasp and began to clinch his fists, he really was in a bind that he wasn't sure he could get out of.  The way he saw it there were four possible outcomes, all with unpredictable consequences.  Suutei would really need to think things over and fast before Aura did anything but, he couldn't attack her.  Nor could he escape when the place could possibly be surrounded, if Chopper were here he could help him escape.  "Sorry, I got you involved, i should have told the lady not to let anyone else in here, but i figured the other girls would never come here with all these men around. I hate these guys, but they here to protect me"  Suutei began mulling over his options now, they would be immediate life decisions.

Alright so if I transform Aura would probably freak out herself, then we maybe would end up fighting maybe as well as being reinforced by the Bandits.  One person was enough even three, but over 60 men with killer instincts and a girl who must be pretty decent as a ninja if she is apart of the bandits...

But if I don't transform, she may take me back to their hideout and I doubt those men care much about how old a girl is.  This form was now becoming controversial, the men certainly could attack him.  Maybe even worse, I can only fathom the terrible actions they could do to me in this form.  And even then I still could not end up maintaining it, then I certainly would be brutally mauled...

Fighting was clearly not an option, he was obviously outnumbered and to fight to death would not be an option either.  Aura alone could possibly kill me all by herself, and I couldn't bring myself to killing a girl.  Would never live it down...

Or maybe I could help her, maybe fight off all the men together if it takes all of them to watch just one girl it shouldn't be so hard.  This is such a controversy right now I really don't know what to do, I could actually die!


After coming up with a unanimous decision, he would let her take him hostage maybe she would end up helping him and they fight together.  The ball was no longer in his court and things were going bad really quickly. "Okay Aura take me if you must..."  A tear rolling down his face, as he held onto his towel.  This is the end of the line for me I guess...  Suutei began crying but still remained strong, he turned and face the exit of the bathhouse waiting for Aura to escort him outside.

Word Count: 2625/2625
Chakra: 135/150



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He looked down as he spoke to Suzuki very softly as he appeared behind her careful and took hold of her arm softly. "For a girl you sort of give in really easy, just do whatever they say or bad things might happen" as he looked down sadly he pulled harshly on Suzuki's are dragging her towards the exit, however instead of taking her that side he ripped off her towel and shoved her inside a secret closet. The closet lead into a trap door as the floor beneath Suzuki seemed to vanish as she fell down what seemed like a slide. The sounds of other girls screaming could be heard on either side of Suzuki as it was dark, whatever option she chose then would decide her fate. Should she decide not to reach the bottom of this path, there might be traps set in place that could be far worse then what awaits her at the bottom. She would have some time as it would take a full thirty or forty seconds to complete the sliding fall.

Meanwhile upstairs in the hot springs the young little blonde met with the leader of the men who grinned. "Good girl Aura, you nabbed your first girl you are now officially one of us haha!!" as the young boy looked down the one man reached closer towards him. "I know you belong to madam, but i want to have a nice look please". The child blushed before looking away as the man was reaching out his hand as the kid was about to cry the leader shouted out. "Watch what you doing!! Do you know how many lives it will cost to pay for any harm we do to her, I will not give you another warning". As the girl looked down she then said. "May i go home please?", the man grinned and agreed. "Sure, just remember i am not responsible for you when you leave". The young little kid nodded and went off.

Back in the fall of Suutei if things went fine he would hit the ground hard and would feel a small little piece of paper hit him on the head that glows in the dark. The letter would glow with the words, 'Sorry i had to give you away i had no choice, but i asked my cousin to go help you out. His a strong swordsman so be patient and do not fight those guys. There are more of them down there then up here, just do what they say and try not to get hurt too much until he gets there, love Aura'
Then further down on the other side of the paper if Suzuki decided to turn it the message, 'you have bird poo in your hair' was written.

Finally at the bottom Suzuki would be exposed to the deep underground of the Bandit Society as they all celebrated. "Hell Yeah!!! Today we have some of the sexiest ladies of all, some of them are cute, some are cool, some are hot, and some are positively beautiful to the point that we know you can not resist getting your hands on this great merchandise. As per usual, ten lucky people will get a chance to sample each of the merchandise here today. We have Melani, she is a beautiful four year old girl with a pony tail. We know some of you do not like kids, but we cater for everyone so shut up with your society rules, we are Bandit Society and will soon fight against Kazuma's damn noble bandits. Bandits are not noble, we are evil and we do not care what you say!!" As the crowd shouted out loud they were so exstatically happy.

"Then we have TinTin, this beautiful boy is around seventeen and has been travelling the world, he also comes with some of the most beautiful shaggy brown hair, and we are not just talking about his head. If you know what i mean. Not as young as some would like, but who cares he snuck into the girls hot springs and now he will be treated like a girl here too. We know you hungry men out there, and women too. Unlike the little girl earlier, his old enough to take anything you can put inside him. From using broad swords to long swords, from beating him with a branch to beating him with a little twig. Do what ever you feel is fun with this one"

Then finally lights shined down on the girl and boy as the man grinned, "Thanks, but that was too late!" An arrow was shot as the man who dealt with the lights died and fell down only to be replaced by the next bandit. "Remember to light this one up nicely okay!" as he waved his hand towards the third section the light shone on what should be Suzuki. The man began the introduction, "A gift from the so called Noble Society as a sign of peace between our groups. The virgin maiden Aura who is worth over five million ryo for her beautiful silky soft skin and cute body, not to mention her tight figure has brought us this beauty with blue hair and surprisingly nice pair of boobies!!"

As the crowd went loud the other two were given small mension as the last two were an old lady, which seemed to be a thing for some of the people and the last one was another beautiful girl. As the event went along the people did not get to touch the little girl much since a bandit with maternal instincts paid up and adopted her straight away, meanwhile the poor tintin was being ravaged in ways that should never be seen in public. You could here his cries of pain, but he deserved what he got, all those years peeping and showing off to the girls with his big bushy hair, now he was getting a taste of his own medicine.

Suzuki was now exposed before close to a thousand attending bandits from Bandit Society, as they all looked at her hungrily things were getting far worse for Suzuki. There was also an old man who was glaring at the girl as he looked at her intensely as the one man touched the poor Suzuki's nipple the old man slapped his hand with a stick. "Do not touch that thing, she could be anything. This is why you hired me and i can tell you right now, she could be a man, or maybe she is still a woman but my sensory jutsu will not lie. She is using a jutsu of some kind and to be nice i will give you one chance to reveal what you truly look like, if not I will enjoy myself with you". The man grinned revealing a large object that he pulled out of his pants symbolically which turned out to be a bludgeon hammer.

Meanwhile as Aura was walking away being tailed by the hundred men as the leader then blocked her path. "I am sorry, but we just can not let you leave young miss Aura. You are just too tasty for me to let you go!!!" The man stopped dead in his tracks as his head began sliding off his head. The young girl then looked down before turning to face all of them with a glare. "I am not Aura, I am Yuzu" he dashed through them as he slashed up the one man's leg, followed by a spiralling drill stab through the one, followed by a whirlwind like slash that took out roughly five or more of them as they began screaming. "Aaahhh!!!, let's get out of ..." as the man felt a sword pierce the back of his neck and through his throat. He proceded to continue as he was beginning to get soaked in the blood of his enemies, slashing, stabbing, cutting and all round killing everyone like it was nothing. When it came down to the last one he stopped then said, "Take me to the hide out or die, you have five seconds to answer." as he pointed his sword at the frightened man.

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Suutei

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It appeared things took a turn for the worse, Suutei had no choice but to give in there was no other way.  Obeying them was one thing, but he refused to become someones sex slave.  Suutei felt the cotton of the towel grind across his body, as he was now exposed to all who could see.  Being dragged by Aura and thrown into a closet, he took one last look at Aura before the door closed and the floor disappeared from beneath his feet.  The drop was not a fatal one in fact, the fall turned out to be a downward spiraling slide, Suutei could hear the shrieks of girls in both sides of him.  Their was no lighting on the ride and the breeze became unbearable, but before he knew it he reached the bottom and fell on his rear hard.  Naked and afraid Suutei found the courage to stand to his feet, and he could see that their was a crowd of maybe thousands chanting and howling.  Suutei looked around to see other girls, and guys alike standing nude in front of the crowd.  Suutei threw the pieces together only to discover that this was a slave auction, he was going to be someones slave after all.  Feeling a piece of paper hit his head he heard someone on the microphone speak to the crowd.  

"Hell Yeah!!! Today we have some of the sexiest ladies of all, some of them are cute, some are cool, some are hot, and some are positively beautiful to the point that we know you can not resist getting your hands on this great merchandise. As per usual, ten lucky people will get a chance to sample each of the merchandise here today."

Merchandise?  To these people Suutei was property, and in this current form it surely attracted the wrong attention for him.  Suutei cursed himself for taking on this appearance just to take a bath, all he could think about was if Chopper was okay.  If Keigo could somehow find him and save him from all of this.  Suutei took the piece of paper that bounced off his head into his lap from above, and it was from Aura.  Suutei was confused if Aura was giving him away, why did she also give him a note.  Suutei opened the paper a bit reluctant to read it, but looked anyway.

Sorry i had to give you away i had no choice, but i asked my cousin to go help you out. His a strong swordsman so be patient and do not fight those guys. There are more of them down there then up here, just do what they say and try not to get hurt too much until he gets there,

Love Aura


Suutei gripped the paper and almost came to tears after the information relieved him, but how long would her cousin take to get here.  Was he already here?  Maybe he was disguised as another Bandit?  Or would come in and kill the bandits and leading him to safety?  This was the longest Suutei had ever been completely nude, he could practically call himself a nudist.  How would her cousin know who he was sure he told her his fake name, but what if he took to long and his transformation would disperse.  Suutei crumpled the piece of paper in his hand and looked out for anyone who could possibly be his alleged rescuer.  The auctioneer began to display the next victim, and it was a very young girl hardly the age of six.  Suutei fought the urge to provoke anyone in the area, as it was to his suspicion all of these people could possible kill him.  Suutei just stood and watched as the light shined on the little girl.

We have Melani, she is a beautiful four year old girl with a pony tail. We know some of you do not like kids, but we cater for everyone so shut up with your society rules, we are Bandit Society and will soon fight against Kazuma's damn noble bandits. Bandits are not noble, we are evil and we do not care what you say!!"

The crowd was in uproar after the announcement of the girl, and a second light was shined on the second option.  Suutei looked next to him and it was a boy, just a little older than him.  Nothing really interesting about him other than his unkept brown hair.  Suutei wondered how he got caught in this as well, but the way he saw it he was in for the worse.  The auctioneer came back on to the mike to share the boy.

"Then we have TinTin, this beautiful boy is around seventeen and has been travelling the world, he also comes with some of the most beautiful shaggy brown hair, and we are not just talking about his head. If you know what i mean. Not as young as some would like, but who cares he snuck into the girls hot springs and now he will be treated like a girl here too. We know you hungry men out there, and women too. Unlike the little girl earlier, his old enough to take anything you can put inside him. From using broad swords to long swords, from beating him with a branch to beating him with a little twig. Do what ever you feel is fun with this one."

Nearly going into shock Suutei moved his leg back, he couldn't wait any longer if he stayed and found out his real identity he would end up just like this boy.  Suutei saw a man guarding an exit ahead, then someone came to the door apparently wanting access.  The guard then stepped out with the person out the door for a few short minutes and returned back to his post.  Suutei sighed, wishing the man stayed outdoors just so he could run.  The moment of despair had arrived little did he know.  When the auctioneer signaled to kill the lights operator a new one arrived to shine the light on Suutei.

"A gift from the so called Noble Society as a sign of peace between our groups. The virgin maiden Aura who is worth over five million ryo for her beautiful silky soft skin and cute body, not to mention her tight figure has brought us this beauty with blue hair and surprisingly nice pair of boobies!!"

So now he was a gift, Suutei hated this so much and clinched his fists tighter blushing he lowered his head to hide his face.  The crowd was going wild as they moved on through the auction, including an old woman in the mix.  A large man approached Suutei and pinched his nipples.  He winced until an elderly man approached and slapped his hand away, still exposed to the crowd he could feel their intensity throughout the room.  His eyes shot open when the man referred to him as a thing.  What could he possibly mean thing?  This man had a high sensory skill and could see through the transformation, or so Suutei thought.  This man was some con artist, their was little to no chance of him identifying the transformation.  In fact this man had no chakra signature at all, he was a simple person but they did not know that.  Suutei did a simple trick he learned in the academy, to suppress his chakra making him seem normal like the man in case someone there did have a sensory technique.  The man threatened Suutei to reveal his true self or he would satisfy himself, anticipating the man to reveal his personnel he instead pulled a bludgeon hammer out of his pants.  Before he could make a move all of the lights had went dark, and a scream of terror from a man could be heard.  The lights cut back on only to reveal the man that was before him, with the hammer shoved down his throat and his neck cut.

Suutei was a bit shocked to find the man brutally punished but by whom?  Suutei looked ahead to find the guard he saw earlier was gone, the large man who tried to impose on Suzuki grabbed him by his breasts and began to pinch and twist his nipples.  Suutei hated this man the most right now, the man was having his fun with him and another man walked to the side of with intentions of his own fun.  Seeing him rubbing himself approaching one by one more approached.  Suutei let out a scream when they all began to surround him with a look of lust and violence, as they drew closer the man released his breasts and joined the other men who surrounded him.  Suutei let out a loud scream as the lights again went black and visibility was impossible.

Word Count: 3434/4109
Ninja Art: Senbon Surprise - 675 due to Quick Learner



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The frightened man began to guide the young boy who began to change his clothing as they walked, he was dressed differently as his cloak had his clan symbol at the back. He held out his sword to his side then spoke no words. As they headed towards the location he informed the ANBU to go ahead of him to deal with the threat.

The ANBU took some time to get there and were told to protect all the hostages, even though they sadly came too late to help the poor ravaged Tintin, they cut the lights in order to take out an old man who had been causing trouble in the underground lately. The poor girl Suzuki was in trouble as her nipples were not only pinched but twisted as well, causing some intense pain probably. With the way girls were this could go either way, but as poor Suzuki was there more and more men appeared gathering around her. The lights had gone out again as the ANBU finally got the back up generated, they managed to secure the small little girl and the old lady, the ravaged one was left behind as the ANBU began making preparations to ditch the location and eliminate all the witnesses.

The poor girl Suzuki was in the darkness which may have been saving her, but one of the men managed to stumble onto her as he pinned her down with his muscular body, breathing heavily on her as he whispered in her ear. "Hope you like it rough". As the man grinned about to do something unthinkable as then a soft groan was heard as some warm liquid fell on Suzuki's back followed by the man falling to the side of her as the light came back due to a flare. The bloody red liquid on Suzuki's back showed just how fresh the wound was as the man was coughing with a big stab wound in his gut as his pants was down. The man was going to commit a grave sin as the small foot that looked so gentle stepped near the body and a blade could be seen as the cloak blew through the air. It gave the impression of a Kage standing guard over his village, but when looked at clearly you could tell the person was short as he turned to face the young girl Suzuki. "Are you okay?" as he extended his hand out to her while carefully stabbing the man between his forbidden area leaving him in excrutiating pain as he missed the man's heart on purpose to let him suffer. He did not take lightly to anyone hurting his friends as he knew the time would come when they would need to escape as the ANBU were going to destroy this entire place as you could see figures running frantically as the place was being blocked in and some strange smoke was in the air. How long they had left was unclear as it was now up to Suzuki to take the hand of her savior so they could get out of this mess.

Words = 3590 + 526 = 4116
Training A-Rank Jutsu Daibakufu = 2000/2000
Training A-Rank Jutsu Hahonryu = 2000/2000

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One of the men brought Suutei to the ground after stumbling once the lights flashed off again.  On top of him the muscular man, pinned him down, man whispering in his ear.  Feeling the mans heavy warm breathing on his neck, he whispered "Hope you like it rough".  The man feeling empowered and satisfied but before he began his unthinkable action, a soft groan was heard as warm liquid could be felt on Suuteis back.  Followed by him collapsing to the ground as he heard a soft thud beside him, when before the lights flashed on.  by the man falling to the side of her as the light came back due to a flare.  The crimson red liquid seeping from the stab wound in his gut coughing in pain, with his pants down. The man was going to commit a grave sin until a small foot of grace stepped near the body and a shimmering blade with blood running from the tip, could be seen as the cloak blew through the air.  It gave the impression of a nostalgic Kage standing his ground against a army of ten thousand, protecting his village.  Though if the person felt this way it was short lived, because looking at the savior clearly you could tell the person was a young boy as he turned to face the would be damsel known as Suzuki.  "Are you okay?" His rescuer asked extending his hand out to Suutei while cautiously stabbing the man below his pelvis in his forbidden area leaving him in agonizing pain as he missed the man's heart on purpose to let him suffer.  This boy obviously meant business and was nobody people should mess with, nor take lightly. The time was now when they would need to escape as the ANBU were appearing to destroy this entire place as people ran frantically and exits within the arena were being blocked, and some strange smoke was in the air.   How long they had left was undetermined, Suutei quickly took the boys hand as he got to his feet.  Following the boy to safety.

Words: 3785/4460
Chakra: 130/150


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As soon as she took hold of his hand he said only two more words, or more likely three. "Hold on tight", as he pulled her against him not even slightly bothered about Suzuki's chest being against his face as he was performing the difficult task of using a two handed jutsu while trying to hold on to her, so he embraced her with a hug as that he could put his two hands together, her chest was really in the way but at least it was hitting his hair nicely, he had a thing for having his hair ruffled as he began the jutsu and whispered. "Suiton : Suishoha!" as he pushed them with the jutsu using less damaging force than usual as he forced them up the tunnel she went down earlier as the waters kept pushing them upwards, while what ever clothing she had got lost in the process they finally broke through a hidden entrance on top as the water over flowed as he accidentally dropped her as he positioned to begin pushing the water back down.

A person heard a massive explosion as you noticed a barrier around the entire hot springs in order to conceal the sound keeping everything confined to this area. As the water was sent down knocking back preventing the explosion from returning up the tunnel as you heard some muffled screams and certain body parts flew through the air as the entire men's section and two other sections of the hot springs were completely destroyed. As he stood there finally having calmed the situation he blushed slightly as he looked at the naked woman, he thought about it for a bit then took off his cloak and threw it over her. "Are you okay Suzuki, you did not get hurt did you and nice." He paused for a moment and then just spoke honestly, "I know girls like to hear about how sexy they are, but you just beautiful to be honest", the compliment may have come about wrong but he was trying to learn to be more manly which had been failing on a regular basis for him.

Words = 4116 + 360 = 4476
Training Words Left = 116 + 360 = 476


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Hurting physically and a bit relieved from the awful, unfortunate events that occurred today.  Suutei looked at his rescuer taking his cloak off, laying it over his bare body.  Suutei stood up and his insides began to hurt to much to continue on with his transformation, and at the moment was no longer necessary.  Realizing that the rescuer was Aura and was not a girl but in fact a boy, Suutei shocked by the event he lost focus of his transformation.  With a large puff of smoke that subsided, Suutei was back to his normal self.  "Alright maybe I should explain a bit, but first I just really wanna get out of this place.  If you want you can come with me to my house, I can explain it all there."  Hoping for a good answer he dashed to the girls changing area to get himself dressed, and hurried back to where Aura was.  If he hadn't left if he didn't he would thank him for saving him, and if he did not beat him to a pulp he would take him out for Ramen.

Suutei really did owe the guy an apology he did play his knowledge for awhile, but at the same time he also did play tricks on Suuteis' mind leading him to believe he was a girl.  With no other way but up, Suutei would owe Aura one way or the other.  Chopper sure would get a laugh out of this, and it would be even more difficult explaining to him.  Though he did think Aura looked kind of cool with his sword, maybe he could ask him to show him a few sword skills...maybe.  Aside from the frantic events, today would be a day he would much rather forget.  Secretly he still would cherish the day, because it was the day he met The Gender Confused Aura.

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Word Count: 100/4750
Trained Thus Far...
Dragon Rage Bullet 2250/2250*
Senbon Surprise 675/675*
Endurance D ~> C 1700/1700
*Quick Learner is Active



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There was a large puff of smoke as his heart began racing as he looked at his friend become the weirdo he saw when he was playing outside. He spoke about explaining, but what was there to explain, they were clearly both shinobi, all that they could do was lie to protect themselves. As the guy wanted to get away from there really quickly inviting him to his house. He dashed into the girls changing area which scared off the girls which happened to be in there changing as they screamed as the guy got dressed and before they could attack he was gone, as they chased after him having been scared by the explosion earlier the girls were no longer scared and were filled with a rage. This boy who they recognised from the village as they ran out screaming with shoes, weapons and one girl had a giant hammer as they chased after the man who stopped by Yuzu.

He was thanked and as he went into hiding, or more like he hid under the water to continue his bath as he had already tossed his clothes one side. Hiding until his friend passed him by. As he raised his head the beautiful girls running passed as they shouted. "We lost them, that stupid weirdo Suutei!! Thought he was just a weirdo, but now he is a perve too?" As the ANBU already begun with the memory erasing and the make shift repairs so that no one would know what had happened today.

"Suutei?" as he looked up into the sky

Words = 4476 + 263 = 4739
Training Words = 739
Training Strength B to B1 = 700/700


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