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1 Seiuchi Clan [Done] on Sat Jul 19, 2014 4:07 am

Erufuun

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Clan: Seiuchi

Kekkei Genkai: Skunk Spirit, Curse of Greed

Elements: Fuuton (Must be main element)

Specialization: Taijutsu

Location: Scattered

Clan History:
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The clan was originally founded by fuinjutsu users who were using themselves as living storage units so to speak covering themselves in seals to allow for things like weapons, puppets, or even animals to be placed within a simple seal on their body some people being covered in them. While this clan did have utility some members born into the clan felt like the clan lacked in actual combat enhancing abilities and wanted the clan to become powerful, members of the clan began to practice and mastered a way of temporarily enhancing themselves with animal properties using fuinjutsu as almost an on and off switch for the augmentation. This adding some time of combat increase to the clan members complaining about lacking power were satisfied and the clan lived on and continued to grow until a single member rose up and wiped out the clan.

A ninja by the name of Lazen Seiuchi born into the clan liked the abilities of the clan but he felt that the clan could be so much more powerful and be one of the strongest clans to exist. Lazen created a theory of manipulating the body further pushing its limits to allow the members to become the ultimate beast by mixing parts from the strongest animals almost like a chimera but was unsure of how to test his theory at first. So hungry on his quest for power Lazen while usually a nice, somewhat shy, non confrontation person became so power hungry his personality completely changed becoming a very nasty person at this point his theory even though he was still unable to test it became something he knew would absolutely work no matter what he had to do.

He began to manipulate members of the clan that he felt were weak willed and easy to take advantage of using them as his test subjects to try to lengthen the duration of the clans beast form and create the chimera that he so often fantasized about becoming. Though he tried many different things nothing worked only causing his subjects to suffer as he mutated and mutilated them eventually dying he would simply bury their bodies and move on to another member and while clan members were unable to prove that he had something to do with the disappearances of the clan they had a feeling that he was playing some part in it the remaining clan members seeing it as him purging the weak from the clan. Lazen was killing the clan on his own in his power hungry attempt to make the clan the strongest he was doing nothing but killing off his own flesh and blood. Lazen managed to get his manipulation almost down to a science to keep himself from being caught and being able to quickly get a new subject without someone seeing him. After multiple successful instances of tricking people into helping him only to fail caused him to eventually make a mistake misjudging someone who quickly reported him to high ranking members of the clan who could now link him to the large number of disappearances.

The clan decided that this would not be tolerated and that this power crazed an must be punished in the most severe way possible, The clan turned the mans seal into a curse that would instead of allowing him to freely manipulate his animal form and switch at any point it would become a painful forced process that would drain him of all his energy in the process. This curse also forced his animal to become a skunk and changed his elemental type to a stinky gas much like that of a skunk naming the mark the curse of greed because of what he had done to deserve this. Along with being marked with the curse of greed lazen was banished from the clan unable to ever return or practice the jutsu known only to the seiuchi. At first Lazen was bitter and angry at the members only wanting to further improve the clan he blamed them for what he had become and wanted nothing more then to get revenge on all of them and wipe out the whole clan.

Lazen was forced out on his own unable to be around people due to his new curse and the rancid smell that would follow him whenever he was able to remain human long enough to be able to travel within distance of the humans. Being forced out on his own and unable to communicate made him realize what he had and that his hunger for power and desire for revenge was simply a waste of time and energy and it was almost as if he changed from his evil self back into the original Lazen overnight though it was now too late to fix the damage that had been done. Unable to mend the wounds that he had created on his power trip at the current time with this curse placed upon him he was forced to train himself on his own and learn to subdue this curse a way to force it down and allow him to live among other ninjas at least for short periods of time the isolation beginning to drive him insane at this point.

He tried and tried to train himself to control the curse to prevent it from transforming him but it was just too strong for him to control on his own he needed a way to keep the curse under control. Knowing he was unable to use his fuinjutsu to help him in this situation he used his medical knowledge to hunt various herbs using multiple different combinations in an attempt to find a way to tame the curse. After many failed attempts and what felt like years of trial and error he managed to find a mixture into a sort of tea that was able to prevent the transformation. He was able to collect and cultivate the herbs and move himself back into a village to live.

Being able to harvest and grow the herbs himself he was able to live a normal life in the village retiring himself completely as a ninja he became a simple villager with a past doing whatever jobs he could to support himself eventually settling down and starting a family an issue arose that no one could foresee. The curse seemed to not only have been placed on Lazen but any of the children he had were born with this mark as well however it would lie dormant until they reach the age of 10 which is when it would begin to transform into a skunk creature much like their father. Lazen continued to make this herbal tea and pass down the recipe to his children as well as teaching them how to cultivate the herbs required so that they never have to be punished for what he has done wrong.

While the original members of the seiuchi have been long dead the clan still passes on the herbal tea to all hosts. The clan originally starting in a small village is now scattered through out the world.

Kekkei Genkai Description:

Skunk Spirit:
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The mark has also infused the hosts with the spirit of a skunk completely taking over their elements forcing them to have fuuton as their main element. The difference between some of their fuuton techniques however is that it allows the host to spray and manipulate very bad smelling gasses that increase in strength as the ninja ranks up the jutsu rank effecting the potency of the stink and what it can do to the ones that inhale it. As well as being able to use the stink release hosts also have an altered aura of charka around their body. Instead o f a normal shaped aura a skunk humanoid made of chakra varying in color towers over them. The skunk spirit also gives the host a more potent smell then a normal person making them smell like old rotten fruits it does make it easier to track however the closer the tracker gets the stronger the scent gets and can cause vomiting to a ninja that is the same rank or lower then the host.


Natami no Butsuyoku [Curse of Greed]
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The curse of greed is a curse placed on the leader that was forcefully passed down from member to member as they are born which completely removes any KKG's that they could possibly gain from their other parent. The curse can be placed anywhere on the body and looks much like a curse mark that appears to be four claw marks on the hosts body, the inside of the cuts are black in color while the lining is green and looks as if it is infected or the flesh is beginning to rot. The mark will automatically active normally however the cursed ninja have created a special herbal beverage that restricts the curse and as long as the beverage stays in the hosts system the curse mark will not activate. When the herbs are not in their system however the mark will begin to replicate and appear all over the body making it look like the host is covered in small infected lacerations. After going through the various stages the host will become a humanoid skunk.

Stage One: On the first stage of the curse the mark with glow a bright white color as the claw marks begin to appear all over the body. During this stage the host will become barbaric and primal not only in the way they fight in the way they act forcefully becoming reckless and aggressive. The hosts eyes will also change in appearance resembling that of a cats eye gem the iris becoming yellow and a black vertical line for the pupil. In this stage the cursed ninja will experience pulsating pain throughout their body for 3 posts, while a ninja that has an endurance rank of C or higher can withstand those that do not will suffer a 1 tier speed decrease for the duration.

Stage 2: After the three posts of pain the hosts body will undergo the transformation phase that the curse forces them through. While the transformation can be stopped at any point in stage one by drinking more of the herbal beverage at this point and beyond there is no stopping the process. The hosts body will become covered in thick fur that varies in color but is most commonly black with one long white stripe that stretches down their backs, a tail is also sprouts from the backside of the host that is long and bushy being the same length as the hosts full body and covered in just as much hair as the hosts body. After the hosts transformation is finished they will become shrouded in a green cloud of stench that follows them wherever they go as well as growing twelve inch long sharp claws and a snout. This whole transformation takes a total of two universal posts and during the first post the user will completely lose their ability to preform jutsu aside from taijutsu as the process begins and once finished becomes a bloodthirsty monster most hosts having no control over their body they are able to however see what they are doing through their eyes but cannot do anything about it. The only thing that the person in this form are able to use is taijutsu or taijutsu fusion techniques losing all other ninja abilities the creature gains enhanced strength and endurance giving the host +1 tier to strength and endurance while losing -1 tier in speed. Being skunk humanoids they also have the same horrible smell that a skunk would have the smell stretching in a 4 meter radius around them and is so strong if the user is around them for longer then a single post the will be disoriented and vomit for a post from the horrible smell. As well as having the scent around them almost like an aura they also can spray it in the form of a horrible smelling oil that will stain clothes and mixing with the oils in the skin not removing itself from the effected area for 2 posts. Once this stage is entered however there is no way to exit it unless the person is knocked out which is when they will return to their human form, the mark drains chakra at double the amount a sustained jutsu that is the same rank as the ninja would for example a genin will lose 10 chakra per post.

Once in this skunk form the user also has these special characteristics stacked onto their own.

Positive Characteristics:
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Name: Mighty
Type: Positive
Description: This individual has an unnaturally large amount of muscle mass. Their physical blows, both Taijutsu and Bukijutsu, are increased by one rank of potency. Anyone who takes this characteristic must take Bulky. Individuals with Mighty cannot take Agile.

Negative Characteristics:
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Name: Numb
Type: Negative
Description: This individual is completely sensationally impaired, and cannot perceive any form of physical stimuli. No item or jutsu can be used to restore 'their own' feeling to this individual. They cannot feel pain, or pleasure in any form, meaning they do not register wounds, or their scale.

Name: Bulky
Type: Negative
Description: Although this individual has large levels of muscle mass, giving them an impressive amount of physical strength, these heavy, bulky muscles slows this shinobi down. They are less stealthy, and move far slower. They move a tier slower than their actual rank. For example, an individual with Bulky of Chuunin rank would move at the speed of a Genin.

Claw Strength

D-rank: 1 Inch Cuts
C-rank: 2 Inch Cuts
B-rank: 3 Inch Cuts
A-rank: 4 Inch Cuts
S-rank: 6 Inch Cuts

Drawbacks: The curse also limits the hosts ability to preform jutsu preventing them from being able to use genjutsu or the fuinjutsu that the clan was originally founded with. While in skunk form or using any techniques that they clan has named stink release that effect their own body the host becomes easier to track.

Members: None

Kekkei Genkai Jutsu:
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Name: Akushū Rirīsu: Kusatta ōratekunikku | Stink Release: Rotten Aura Technique
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: E
Type: Supplementary
Element: Stink
Range: Close [0m-5m]
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: Sustained
Cooldown: 3 Posts
Description: After a quick string of handsigns the user will begin to leak stink chakra from their pores which will effect anyone who gets within a close range of the user or down wind from them. The user has a large visable cloud of green gas coming from around their body during the duration of this jutsu which makes this jutsu very obvious and easy to avoid. If the user manages to trap anyone within the aura their eyes will become irritated and water for a post after exiting.

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[b]Name:[/b] Akushū Rirīsu: Kusatta ōratekunikku | Stink Release: Rotten Aura Technique
[b]Canon/Custom:[/b] Custom
[b]Rank:[/b] E
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Element:[/b] Fuuton
[b]Range:[/b] Close [0m-5m]
[b]Specialty:[/b] Ninjutsu
[b]Duration:[/b] Sustained
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 3 Posts
[b]Description:[/b] After a quick string of handsigns the user will begin to leak foul smelling gas from their pores which will effect anyone who gets within a close range of the user or down wind from them. The user has a large visable cloud of green gas coming from around their body during the duration of this jutsu which makes this jutsu very obvious and easy to avoid. If the user manages to trap anyone within the aura their eyes will become irritated and water for a post after exiting.

Clan Items:
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Name: Herbal Drink
Type of Item: Gourd
Rank: C
Elemental Alignment: N/A
Quantity: 1
Ability/Function: A mixture of herbs and water that is using to prevent the hosts of the curse from beginning the transformation process. The mixture is potent enough so that they only have to drink every other post to prevent themselves from transforming.
Durability: 8 Uses
Appearance:
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The standard canister to store the drink is a normal tan colored gourd but it can be stored in various vessels. The actual drink itself is green in color from the herbs and rather viscous much like a salve would be. The drink slightly sweet taste with a sudden bitter and medicinal after taste.
History: The original mixture designed by Lazen Seiuchi to prevent transformations caused by the curse of greed passed down from the generations to keep those around them safe.



Last edited by Erufuun on Tue Jul 22, 2014 6:24 pm; edited 4 times in total


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2 Re: Seiuchi Clan [Done] on Mon Jul 21, 2014 1:11 pm

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Stink release is not an element.


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3 Re: Seiuchi Clan [Done] on Mon Jul 21, 2014 7:35 pm

Erufuun

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The clan now uses fuuton instead of stink release since it is just bad smelling air after all.


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4 Re: Seiuchi Clan [Done] on Tue Jul 22, 2014 1:17 pm

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- Remove the mention of poison, as it is not something that is allowed on the site yet.

- Being easier to track should be something that's placed in the drawbacks and specified more clearly - ie. giving tracking techniques a +1 against them

Curse of Greed:

- First of all, I want this herbal beverage thing to be written up as an item for this clan, so that people actually know what to app, and how to access it in order to lessen the effects of the curse mark. Use the Item template provided in the Item Guidelines.

- For the drawback of Stage One, are you certain you want a one rank decrease in speed? Normally it's only a -1 tier to a stat - our stat system is separated into ranks, while each rank is split into tiers.

- At Stage Two, specify that the +1 to Strength & Endurance is a +1 tier, not +1 rank - same with the drawback of -1 speed.


Seiuchi Clan wrote:As well as having the scent around them almost like an aura they also can spray it in the form of a horrible smelling oil that will stain clothes and mixing with the oils in the skin not removing itself from the effected area for 2 posts. However this smell is less potent only causing vomiting and dizziness to those that are around the target the target that is sprayed feeling the same effects as well.



I'd like that ^ to be restricted to just the target feeling the effects, as opposed to a small area around the target as well.

- With the forced Special Characteristics, either make those something that a person must start with, or simply SCs that are stacked on top of what the user already has. It doesn't make sense for people to replace their current SCs, as things like "Blind" or "Deaf" cannot be replaced.

- The capabilities of the user's claws need to be specified more - particularly in terms of cutting depth (see Jutsu Guidelines for damage).

Drawbacks:


Seiuchi Clan wrote:The curse also limits the hosts ability to prefer jutsu preventing them from being able to use genjutsu or the fuinjutsu that the clan was originally founded with.


This is worded a bit awkwardly. If this is going to be a drawback, then they need to be completely incapable of having / learning those specializations.

5 Re: Seiuchi Clan [Done] on Tue Jul 22, 2014 6:25 pm

Erufuun

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I have removed and edited like you asked me to and i added the item for the clan.


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6 Re: Seiuchi Clan [Done] on Sun Jul 27, 2014 3:04 pm

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Also putting this out there for the clan's lore. I'm not sure if you intend this skunk spirit to be an actual, supernatural spirit, but if so you'll have to rewrite it as something else. We don't allow things that are so high fantasy into the sagaverse.


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7 Re: Seiuchi Clan [Done] on Sun Jul 27, 2014 4:43 pm

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No it's just because of the effects of the curse itself that the hosts believe they are infused with the spirit of a skunk.


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8 Re: Seiuchi Clan [Done] on Mon Jul 28, 2014 10:45 pm

Erufuun

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Bump.


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9 Re: Seiuchi Clan [Done] on Wed Jul 30, 2014 8:37 pm

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I'm so sorry for the wait. I've been a little bit preoccupied lately. Let's get to business now though.

If there is no actual spirit and it is just a belief, I'd like you to word it so that the app more accurately reflects that. As of now it sounds very much like there is an actual spirit involved.

I'd like them being easier to track due to their smell quantified. It needs to be something measurable. Everything needs to be quantified really.

The immediate vomitting I'm a bit iffy on. Probably shouldn't be instant, especially shinobi of equal rank and strong willed should probably be able to resist it. What you could do is give a proximity to the user where the odor is most potent and have the effects start out as discomfort and then grow as they spend multiple posts within that range.

I'm confused about the transformation stages and these herbs that put it off. How does this play out in a thread?


For the jutsu, what is "sustained" as far as duration goes? And how bad of an irritation are we talking? At E-Rank the effects of the jutsu will be mostly cosmetic, not really functional.


You'll probably need to add drawbacks depending on how this looks after edits.


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