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1 Kochitsu Clan-Finished I hope on Sun Aug 03, 2014 12:53 am

Mitsuko

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Clan: Kochitsu Clan

Kekkei Genkai: -

Elements: Gaton Release-Glass Style (Must Be Primary or Secondary)

Specialization: Ninjustu, Bukijutsu

Location:Primarily Iwagakure, But expansions are being discussed.

Clan History:A rather secretive clan, that is quite young to say the least. Just nearly 90 years ago Kago, the leader of the clan and the Great Grandfather of Mitsuko, was a mere boy when he had discovered and come across an astonishing gift. He was able to turn glass into jutsu and summon it at will and practically do whatever it is he saw fit with it. Once mastering this art he excelled through the academy and even became a genin far before anyone in his class. Gaton Release definitely helped him against ninjas who used doujutsu’s such as sharingan and byakugan, in a way it obscured their vision making them unable to either see, or copy his moves. Once he had the abilities of glass mastered he thought it would be best to expand this power, thus Kaodo Kochitsu created the Kochitsu clan. The clan will expand and when it does it surely will be famous in the eyes of many.  

Kekkei Genkai Description: -  

Drawbacks: It is nearly impossible for them to learn any form of taijutsu, punches and kicks are fine but anything beyond that cannot be learned nor taught, it’s in their blood.

Members:
Kaodo Kochitsu (NPC)~Leader
Mitsuko Kochitsu ~Member

Kekkei Genkai Jutsu:
Gaton Release-Gako no kikemone:
Name: Gako no kikemone
Canon/Custom:Custom
Rank: Ranges from C-A (grows with the user its best to learn asap)
Type: Defensive
Element:Glass(Gaton)
Range: Close range. At most 5 meters is as far as it can go.
Specialty:Ninjutsu
Duration:Stays on the field. Until Broken by 2 c rank jutsus, or until broken by 1 B-SS Rank jutsu’s.
Cooldown: Two Posts
Description: With this jutsu, the user creates a wall of glass to protect himself. The wall is rather durable being five inches thick, standing at ten feet in height and spreading seven feet in width. The barrier can be created in any position: To the front, behind, under, even above the user, making it an extremely versatile, though stationary, defense.  A tricky ability of the barrier, though, is that with a single surge of Chakra via physical touch by the user, the side opposite to the user will produce an intense glare.  However, this expends the duration of the Shine Wall and destroys itmmediately afterwards. This can only be done once per thread, no matter how many Shine Walls are created.
Gaton Release:
Name:Hari Kuchukasou
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Element: Gaton
Range: Self
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 6 posts
Cooldown: 8 posts
Description: The user forms a layer of glass beneath his or her feet, coating it with a small amount of Chakra to reduce the friction so that it's as if the user is skating on ice when on regular ground. What makes this a handy jutsu is that it gives the user a 12% speed boost of their natural speed making it easier for them to evade attacks.
Gaton:
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Canon/Custom:Kagirinai Hyou
Rank:A
Type:Offensive
Element:Gaton
Range: Within a Reasonable 40 meters
Specialty:ninjutsu
Duration: After being created it stays until broken by a jutsu or move of greater power.
Cooldown: 4
Description:  Glass has sometimes been described as 'unmelting ice', in other words, 'eternal ice', exactly from which this technique claims its name. After completing the seals and slamming a palm against a solid surface, a giant spike of glass will burst from whatever patch of that surface the user can see with his own two eyes, typically underneath an opponent. A rumble and cracks from the ground indicate when and where the spikes will emerge. Also the spikes can stretch to 15ft in the air at most.
Gaton Release:

Name: Amatsu-ou no Tenjoukai Ensei
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Element: Gaton
Range: 5 mile radius
Specialty:  Ninjutsu
Duration: 8 posts if used off the bat 5 post if used as a last resort.
Cooldown:Can only be used once
Description: This kind of jutsu has only ever been used once, ages ago, so many years past that only scrolls depict the nature of the technique. Few people know how to use it, and even fewer people have actually used it for most fear the awesome, earth-altering effect of the jutsu. Using up the majority of his Chakra, the user will slam both palms to the ground. A ripple of Chakra is sent out in all directions for a hundred and fifty feet and after a few moments, everything becomes glass. Trees, animals, buildings, everything short of Shinobi (because of their own Chakra, which retards the initial wave that was sent out by the user) is frozen within glass into an eerie tranquility. Of course, the power of this jutsu is that it blocks off an opponent's access to his own element, affecting those based on the earth most heavily. The glass itself is impenetrable and hard to walk on without slipping (though training through Kinobori/Kabenobori does help significantly). The effects of the jutsu wears off after several posts however to the person it was used on it feels like years; civilians caught and suspended are awoken and feel as if nothing had ever happened, never aware of the fact that they'd been imprisoned for all that time.



Last edited by Mitsuko on Sun Aug 03, 2014 10:55 pm; edited 2 times in total

2 Re: Kochitsu Clan-Finished I hope on Sun Aug 03, 2014 5:08 am

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I'm a bit confused. This isn't an advanced element, is it? It's more like a special technique afforded to the clan through their kkg? Like the Kaguya's bones? If so, it wouldn't be an element onto itself, just your kkg.

You can remove training requirements from all of your jutsu. Training requirements at rank are standardized and you don't need to change the template for jutsu creation.

Gako no Kikemone: This needs a cooldown. Also, this needs a specific size and what specifically it can defend against. A good place to start would be the Jutsu guidelines for what you are looking at for relative power. Also where does the wall come from? Does it just jut out of the ground?


Hari Kuchukasou: For range you can just put "self". While on these skates I'm assuming the user moves at their usual max speed since it says nothing about a speed boost? Also, the muffling of noises needs to be quantified in some way. The Cooldown should be longer than the duration.


Kaginari Hyou: The cooldown for an A-Rank jutsu should be significant and cooldowns should remain unchained by the user's rank. For duration just put "Instantaneous" and mention that the spike will remain on the field until broken. The jutsu needs set damage capabilities and the mechanism shouldn't just be where you look, they should be physically sending chakra through the ground. Also, there needs to be some kind of indication that the technique is coming to allow for counterplay.


Amatsu-ou no Tenjoukai Ensei: SS-Rank jutsu are not allowed to be taken as clan jutsu.




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Bukijutsu-SS|Ninjutsu-SS|Fuuinjutsu-D|Medical-D||Raiton-SS|Suiton-SS|Katon-S|Doton-D

Mission List: D:12 | C:4 | B:3 | A:6 | S:2 | SS:0

3 Re: Kochitsu Clan-Finished I hope on Sun Aug 03, 2014 3:21 pm

Mitsuko

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I decided to take down the Kekkei Genkai and left the clan with a Unique Advanced element, that Being glass, I hope that is okay.

Second Off I altered a few of the jutsu's and I hope that is okay as well, aside from all of that I hope this is all better now.

4 Re: Kochitsu Clan-Finished I hope on Sun Aug 03, 2014 8:30 pm

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I see this more as a clan specialized discipline than an advanced element. As an advanced nature it begins to encroach on crystal release.


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"Good and evil are just words. It is not my place to judge their worthiness."

Character Bio | Jutsu List | Item Locker

Bukijutsu-SS|Ninjutsu-SS|Fuuinjutsu-D|Medical-D||Raiton-SS|Suiton-SS|Katon-S|Doton-D

Mission List: D:12 | C:4 | B:3 | A:6 | S:2 | SS:0

5 Re: Kochitsu Clan-Finished I hope on Sun Aug 03, 2014 8:33 pm

Mitsuko

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What would u Advise I do?

6 Re: Kochitsu Clan-Finished I hope on Tue Aug 05, 2014 11:06 am

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Something similar to the Kaguya clan or Gaiso clan perhaps? Have them take doton as their primary and maybe katon and just give them the ability to work with amorphous minerals? That would give them the ability to work with glass.


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"Good and evil are just words. It is not my place to judge their worthiness."

Character Bio | Jutsu List | Item Locker

Bukijutsu-SS|Ninjutsu-SS|Fuuinjutsu-D|Medical-D||Raiton-SS|Suiton-SS|Katon-S|Doton-D

Mission List: D:12 | C:4 | B:3 | A:6 | S:2 | SS:0

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