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1 Kyoki Clan [rewamp wip] on Fri Oct 31, 2014 8:22 am

Miho

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Clan: Kyouki (jap. きょうき ,  kanji  凶器,  meaning „dangerous weapon, deadly weapon“)

Kekkei Genkai: Seigyoka (jap. せいぎょか, meaning "under control")

Elements: Does not utilize a certain element

Specialization: Bukijutsu and Ninjutsu (no difference which is chosen to be the first, which - to be the second, however only this combination must be chosen)

Location: Kumogakure

Clan History:

Spoiler:
The breakdown at the very beginning

At first, the clan was formed as the one that was keen on making all kinds of weapons from all kinds of materials. The people of the clan were honored as the great artisans from the Kumogakure village. They were providing weapons for others, but rarely used those themselves, because were pieceful people and didn‘t like to fight. As Kyouki clan was increasing in numbers, there were no gap for that many artisans to fit in as the village didn‘t have so many shinobi‘s that were buying the weapons. A lot of skillful clan families were doomed to poverty and hunger, their skills were not used, thus a lot of disatisfaction arose. Some families started stealing, killing people and the clan name gained the name of Villain Kyouki. From that time those things even got worse.

The reign of the Deadly Blade

After a lot of years of hiding and commiting crimes, the future leader of the clan was born into one poor family of Kyouki. That family was no villain, members were trying to work in shops or for land lords in order to get some money and raise the child as a good person. However, the clan reputation was still bad and the child was suffering a lot from the teasing of others. No one knew he would seek out the secret knowledge about the clan techniques and secret powers, that were kept in secret by the ancestors in order not to let the others know, otherwise the whole clan would have been killed because of the fear of their abilities. When the boy grew up and was only in his years of 18, he managed to bring together the group of the members of his clan, he has already obtained the secret technigues of the weapon control. At that time, he was that strong, that could control over 6 weapons at a time. He revealed those techniques to other clan members by making a contract with them that those should be kept in secret until the death. By doing so, the man was elected the leader of the clan and named himself the Deadly Blade. That sounded like a great story of the Kyouki clan rising back from the ashes, but that wasn‘t the case. Kyouki was full of the thirst for the revenge for all those poor years of hiding while others were using the weapons made actually by their skillfull hands. The bloodlust was running though each Kyouki body. The times of shallow ruling and daily killing has started. The clan members were killing all weapon owners, taking those weapons for themselves. That wasn‘t the revenge anymore, that was the grief for power as they were seeking people with most powerful weapons in other villages, killing them and taking those weapons for themselves. Kyouki was a threat to all people, controling the most powerful weapons of the shinobi world, having the most cruel leader of all clans and still increasing in numbers.


The fall of the Deadly Blade

After a lot of years of fear and cruel fighting, the villages formed a group of shinobi, that were the best in genjutsu, ninjutsu, fuuinjutsu and puppetry. They were ordered to seek out the Deadly Blade and kill him after wiping out all of his clan. The project was successful, a lot of members were falling from the skillful techniques of other shinobi, some did hide themselves, but that made just a 2 percent of all clan. When a lot of were killed, the group of anti-Kyouki finally found the Deadly Blade. He was already living in family by then, having a wife and raising a daughter, who was already in her age of 13.  The group didn‘t hesistate to kill the Deadly Blade and his wife, as they were cruel enought to chop off some heads of the group members. However, his daughter was left the one standing from the clan, she was not strong at that point, not even prepared, but she was willing to fight. She managed to kill one man, but the other was even stronger. He could have torn her to pieces in one move of his hand, but he didn‘t. He tooks the girl under his wing as the guy wasn‘t strong enough to fight the feeling that was born that day. When he got back to his authority, he reported that the leading Kyouki family was all killed and the hiding Kyoki left are not a threat anymore as there are too little of them. Thus, the fight with them was over and the villages could enjoy their weapons and piece again. However, an heir of the Deadly Blade is still living somewhere in the village and this is not the end of the story to the Kyouki clan.

Kekkei Genkai Description:  Kyouki’s kekkei genkai is their natural ability to feel and manipulate their own chakra to the perfection. The most special thing is that they can split their chakra and place it into weapons in order to control them from afar without touching them, making any seals, chakra strings or without puppetry. Kyouki can control a weapon everywhere without a real limit other than chakra, One could also control it when it lays more than a mile away.  This is possible, because when chakra leaves the body of a Kyouki and settles down in a weapon, it still works as a part of body chakra. It still remains a living chakra just resides elsewhere and runs in a smaller circulation, thus can be controlled and manipulated by its owner. Once the weapon is infused with chakra, it obeys only to that member of the clan. And only that person can release it by releasing the chakra from it. If one would want to win the weapon over, the only way would be to kill its master or force him to release the weapon. The total control of weapon could be gained only by holding the weapon in own hands and performing secret clan jutsus that are handed down from generations to generations. The weapon obeys the master till the end of his life or that moment when the master decides to release the chakra from it.

Drawbacks: Every weapon that is infused takes chakra points from the chakra poll for good. The amount of taken points depends on the rank of a person and is taken only in lifetime, not per post or thread. Those points are not regained, because that chakra remains in the weapon. The more infused weapons the person owns (not infused with own chakra, just for basic use doesn't count), the less useful chakra he has, thus, the less jutsu he can perform until his limits and gets tired faster. Even if the weapon is released from the control, the chakra never comes back to the owner.

Infused weapons cannot be hidden, because the chakra is inside them and shinobi can sence that as all other chakra they can. That makes attacks more predictable and dodgeable.

Another thing, when applying a character, one must take inheritance as his special characteristic.

The weapons for Kyoki also cost 10% more than to members of other clans.

Members: Miho Kyouki

Spoiler:

Name: Weapon Qonquer Technique
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D-SS
Type: Supplementary
Element: /
Range:   D-rank 20 metres, + 15m with each rank up
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: Chakra points depend on the rank and  is taken per use without any possibility of ever regaining it
Cooldown: /
Description: The person concentrates on his chakra flow and accumulates some chakra in his fingers. Then he takes a weapon into his arms and infuses his chakra into it by simply guiding some chakra out through his fingers. After doing so, he cuts that flow from his natural chakra circulation leaving that accumulation circulating in a weapon away from the body . Being a E rank shinobi can split his chakra once and that costs him minus 5 chakra points for good. D-rank – twice and minus 10 chakra points. C-rank can do it three times and minus 15 chakra points . And this +1 time goes by gaining higher rank, but  minus extra 5 chakra is taken from the chakra poll. This also means that being E-rank shinobi, Kyoki can own a one weapon that is fully under control, at D-rank can own two and so on untill the SS-rank.The speed of the sword using this technique is as fast as the user would be able to normally. The main disadvantage are the not returning chakra.

Name: Weapon Release Technique
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: /
Type: Supplementary
Element: /
Range: 1km
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: /
Cooldown: /
Description: When a person decides that the weapon is no use anymore, he can release the weapon from his control by simply releasing his own chakra from it. That can be done even from the distance of 1km just by making hand signs and guiding that chakra from the weapon to the outside of it. When that happens, the chakra never comes back, it just vanishes. The jutsu does not have the rankink, it remains the same all the time.



Last edited by Miho on Mon Aug 03, 2015 3:44 pm; edited 5 times in total


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[D-rank: 4] [C-rank: 2] [B-rank: 0] [A-rank: 0]
“Who are you then?"
"I am part of that power which eternally wills evil and eternally works good.”


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2 Re: Kyoki Clan [rewamp wip] on Fri Oct 31, 2014 8:25 am

Miho

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Chuunin
Dear Mods, I truly wish to continue using this charater of mine, so apply for my clan to be redone, just need some help from the side. Now all of the things here are same as was before, could someone point out the problematic things in this clan app, so that I could make the changes and make it valid again?


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[D-rank: 4] [C-rank: 2] [B-rank: 0] [A-rank: 0]
“Who are you then?"
"I am part of that power which eternally wills evil and eternally works good.”


Techniques  Character  Locker

3 Re: Kyoki Clan [rewamp wip] on Wed Nov 05, 2014 10:03 pm

Tame

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S-rank
Moved to Clan Updates.

KKG Description wrote:One could also control it when it lays more than a mile away. At D-rank shinobi can control his weapon in the range of 40 metres and when the rank is going higher, additional 20 metres are added to that.

This above part of your KKG description ought to go into your Weapon Qonquer technique's Range. (You can simply put it in the Range: section as "40 meters, +20 meters per rank up".)

However, you should refer to the Jutsu Rules (here) for what the correct range for each rank is.

The speed of the sword should not exceed the speed that the wielder themselves could swing the sword at; I would recommend replacing the 'speed increase +1 with each rank' with 'The speed of the sword using this technique is as fast as the user would be able to normally'.

Just to clarify, the chakra one expends to use Weapon Quonquer is lost forever if the weapon is lost/destroyed, or if you use Weapon Release on it, yes?

4 Re: Kyoki Clan [rewamp wip] on Fri Jul 31, 2015 11:05 am

Taede

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Genin
Weapon Qonquer: We don't have E-rank shinobi.

Also, the +1 speed doesn't make sense. As a comparison to the Puppet Technique, is there any lag in your will and the movement of the sword? Also, it would be wise to detail how fast the weapon can move under your control with this technique (refer to Jutsu Rules, go for low-end speeds).

The updated chakra pool deduction will depend largely on the new capabilities of this ability.

Weapon Release: Can it be done in the heat of battle?


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