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1 Myugan on Sat Jan 03, 2015 10:10 pm

Bunshichi

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Clan: Myugan

Kekkei Genkai: Natural Drunk

Elements: N/a

Specialization: Taijutsu/Bukijutsu

Location: Scattered

Clan History: People can be born to be natural drunks,and the Myugan clan can become drunk using their chakra. The first clan leader Myugan Myugan found this out while wasted to a whole new degree. His chakra was different, even though he drank and drank he could never get as stupid as his fellow ninjas and felt that something was wrong with him. After a few days of meditation he felt woozy, unable to stand. All of sudden it made sense, he was drunk and he could feel a new found power surge through him. He told the closest person, his twin brother and together they changed the Myugan clan to become able to use this ability in combat. Quickly learning how to master this new found power (Aka there is no master just the flow) they quickly spread their name throughout the country.

Myugan Myugan eventually married and had many children, but it seemed that the males were the only ones who could become drunk off nothing. Even though it seemed like a disadvantage women got drunk really quickly in the family. Sips of sake would get them to the belligerent stages of drunk. Myugan proceeded to build a bar in the middle of Suna where he lived happily with his family.

His family bar quickly attracted many people as a bar in a desert land would, and they settled around the bar, for his drinks became legendary. It ran in his blood, to drink and make drinks. This has been the way since then and no matter how many people attack they end up sharing a nice drink with everyone and even forgetting why they came

Kekkei Genkai Description: Those of the Myugan clan have a what many would call a "Tainted" chakra. Their chakra having characteristics very similar to alcohol. Taking in the chakra of a Myugan will often cause a state of inebriation, even to the Myugan themselves. All of the Myugan clan also has a perfect tolerance to drinking alcohol, never becoming even slightly inebriated from drinking any amount of alcohol.

A Myugan can convert their chakra into a potent and flammable alcohol usable in place of water for any Suiton jutsu where water is created within the user's body. This requires Suiton to be trained one rank higher then the jutsu the alcohol is being used with, C rank Suiton jutsu needing B Suiton to use alcohol with it. Alcohol once ignited, causes progressively worse burn.

First post - Light burns, no different then touching a hot stove for an instant.
Second post - First degree burns
Third post - Light second degree burns
Fourth post - Deep second degree burns
Fifth post - Third degree burns and also extinguishes itself.

Drawbacks: With an alcoholic chakra, those of the Myugan clan have a more resilient body to outside medical care, thus all clan members must have Pharmacophobia as a negative characteristic that cannot be balanced out with a positive characteristic.

Members: Kaguza (Deceased), Bunshichi

Kekkei Genkai Jutsu: Inebriation
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C-S
Type: Supplementary
Element: N/a
Range:Self
Specialty: Taijutsu/Bukijutsu
Duration: Constant till unconscious or cancelled.
Cooldown: 4 posts
Description: By utilizing the alcoholic nature of their own chakra, the Myugan becomes inebriated. While inebriated the Myugan lose mental clarity at lower ranks and gain the Hemophilia negative characteristic. While inebriated the Myugan also gains physical attributes that varies dependent on the rank of the jutsu.

C rank = +1 Tier Endurance, Drunk Special Characteristic
B rank = +1 Tier Endurance
A rank = +1 Tier Endurance
S rank = +2 Tier Endurance

All Myugans under this jutsu can only perform jutsu with Taijutsu or Bukijutsu in their specialties.



Last edited by Bunshichi on Sat Jan 24, 2015 2:35 am; edited 5 times in total

2 Re: Myugan on Tue Jan 13, 2015 11:51 pm

Tenmei

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Your KKG description and drawbacks are fine but your jutsu needs work.

Inebriation
-First things first, you need to change your ranks to tiers. Keep it uniform.
-Next thing is that you need to decide whether you want this to be a jutsu which give you buffs which would mean you would have to abide by the jutsu buffing rules and lower your numbers.
ie. C rank gives you +1 tier with drawback. B + 1 without drawback etc.

Or you stick to just switching a tier for tier which then you would need to even our your numbers and have some form of drawback on top.
ie. +2 tiers strength -2 tiers reaction time and a drawback on top to pay for the change.

Fix this and then we can move on.

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Myugan Special
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First I want a definite duration. Either make it maintainable or give it some numbers.
-I want you to also increase the cool down a little
-Next I want to know how much damage this technique does if ignited.

Bump once these changes have been made.

3 Re: Myugan on Thu Jan 22, 2015 6:53 pm

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Made "Myugan Special" part of the Kekkei Genkai with damage and requirements.

Altered the buffs of Inebriation.

4 Re: Myugan on Fri Jan 23, 2015 3:58 pm

Tenmei

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Alright this is looking pretty great.

I would like you to specify that you have to take Pharmacaphobia and it can not be balanced by a positive.

Also with your jutsu, if you wish, you can make it a little stronger and say that it gives you +2 tiers with a drawback at A rank and +3 tiers with drawback at S rank.

Once you have made those changes, you should be good. So bump for approval when you're done.

5 Re: Myugan on Sat Jan 24, 2015 2:35 am

Bunshichi

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Bump

Gonna pass on adding a drawback to the justu. The idea is that they are no longer inhibited by the drunkenness with the higher ranks, so this is about as good as it'll be with this system.

6 Re: Myugan on Sat Jan 24, 2015 3:22 am

Tenmei

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I see nothing else wrong here. Great job!

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