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1 The Shiniki Clan on Fri Jan 23, 2015 7:21 am

Shiniru

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Clan: The Shiniki Clan

Kekkei Genkai: Yoroi

Primary Elements: Katon and Doton
Secondary Element: Suiton

Specialization: Ninjutsu and Taijutsu

Location: Konahagakure

Clan History: The Shiniki Clan are a loving Clan that seeks peace through power. This is their way. They have been around for as long as the Senju Clan and the Uchiha Clan. They were initially an ominous religious cult known as the Shiniki, who once worshipped a deity called 'Shiniru'. Initially, the Shinikis' belief was that 'Shiniru' was an Omnipotent being made of molten lava that craved power for the sake of maintaining peace. These beliefs influenced generations upon generations of members of the cult. The cult had been influenced in such a way, that they even mastered their skills to the extent where they managed to even mimic their deities. As decades past, the Shiniki cult came to be recognized as the Shiniki Clan, and although their ways remained the same and they still sought peace through power, their religious ways dwindled and eventually ceased to exist. 'Shiniru' became a lost legend, that many forgot.

The Shiniki Clan initially had their own village, away from the other Shinobi villages, but had decided to join Konahagakure after hearing how it had formed through a truce, how it had formed through a treaty of peace. The Shiniki Clan was fond of this peace, for it followed their ways, so they stayed and became apart of Konahagakure. For years they have stayed with Konahagakure, and they continue to do so, helping out the village they now consider family in any way they can.

Kekkei Genkai Description: Yoroi is both a complex and simple Kekkei Genkai, using both Ninjutsu and Taijutsu. Yoroi literally means 'Armor' and as it says in the name, what this Kekkei Genkai does is literally form armor over the uses body using both Futon and Doton Ninjutsu. Yoroi can be activated after the user has performed three hand seals, tiger, snake and dragon in that order for 3 points. Once it has been activated, the users body can either be engulfed in fire, or earth, or even both. Although this Kekkei Genkai was designed to be a defensive technique, it can too be used an offensive, which is where the Clans skills in Taijutsu can come into play. Only members with either Katon or Doton as their primary element are able to use this Kekkei Genkai.

Drawbacks:
Hesitant (Elemental):
Name: Hesitant (Element)
Type: Negative
Description: This person has a comfort zone that he/she doesn't like to venture out of. Learning a new field of techniques can be scary, and this ninja puts it off, or ignores it entirely. This is mainly due to generations upon generations of their Clan using the same elements, so members of their Clan wouldn't dare stray from their ways. This individual cannot have a fourth element, and can only learn their tertiary element at Jounin rank. (this is a clan drawback and cannot be counterbalanced.)

The Curse of Yoroi 1:
Name: The Curse of Yoroi 1
Type: Negative
Description: If Yoroi is overused, the users body begins to take a toll. If it is used for more than 2 turns, the users body will begin to suffer due, either from the heat of the flame, or the jaggedness and weight from the rock. The user will begin to lose -10 Chakra for each turn it is now used, and the user will begin to take severe damage from the technique, either suffering first degree burns or severe flesh wounds dealing -10 damage each turn it is used after overusing it. The user will begin to bleed out if not treated with medical treatment by their 4th turn with Yoroi active, and the result can even be death if it is continued to be used without medical treatment by their 5th turn.

The Curse of Yoroi 2:
Name: The Curse of Yoroi 2
Type: Negative
Description: Due to the significant weight of the armor, when Yoroi is active, the users Speed is decreased by -5 points.

Members: Shiniru Shiniki

Kekkei Genkai Jutsu:
Yoroi - Saisho:
Name: Yoroi - Saisho
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Element: Doton
Range: The users body
Cost: 30 Chakra Points
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: It can be used for as long as the user is able, however, after Yoroi - Saisho has been used for over 2 posts, the user will begin to lose Chakra by -10 points for every post, and they will suffer severe flesh wounds, which become more severe the more posts it is active. The user will begin to bleed out severely by the 4th post, and will die by the 5th post if not medically treated.
Cooldown: 5 posts
Description: Yoroi - Saisho will allow the user to create armor made entirely of jagged rock around their body by using Doton Ninjutsu. Although Yoroi - Saisho is designed to be a defensive technique, when used with Taijutsu it can also be used as an offensive technique, increasing the users Strength by +2 points and the users Endurance by +2 points. Yoroi - Saisho can defend against Taijustu, Bukijutsu and Ninjustu techniques below Rank C, any higher and the armor can be shattered within 2 posts with any offensive technique.

Yoroi - Daini:
Name: Yoroi - Daini
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Defensive and Offensive
Element: Katon
Range: The users body
Cost: 30 Chakra Points
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: It can be used for as long as the user is able, however, after Yoroi - Daini has been used for over 2 posts, the user will begin to lose Chakra by -10 points for every post, and they will suffer first degree burns, which become more severe the more posts it is active. The user will begin to bleed out severely by the 4th post, and will die by the 5th post if not medically treated.
Cooldown: 5 posts
Description: Yoroi - Daini will allow the user to create armor made entirely of flame around their body by using Katon Ninjutsu. Although Yoroi - Daini is designed to be a defensive technique, when used with Taijutsu it can also be used as an offensive technique, increasing the users Strength by +2 points and the users Endurance by +2 points. Yoroi - Daini can defend against Taijustu and Bukijutsu below Rank B, any higher and the armor can be cut through within 2 posts using Taijutsu and Bukijutsu. Suiton Ninjutsu will extinguish the flame instantly.

Yoroi - Saigo:
Name: Yoroi - Saigo
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: A
Type: Defensive and Offensive
Element: Katon and Doton
Range: The users body
Cost: 45 Chakra Points
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: It can be used for as long as the user is able, however, after Yoroi - Saigo has been used for over 2 posts, the user will begin to lose Chakra by -30 points for every post, and they will suffer second degree burns, which become more severe the more posts it is active. The user will begin to bleed out severely by the 3rd post, and will die by the 4th post if Yoroi - Saigo is not removed. Medical treatment will not faze the user while Yoroi - Saigo is active.
Cooldown: 5 posts
Description: Yoroi - Saigo will allow the user to create a powerful armor made entirely of molten rock and lava around their body by using Katon and Doton Ninjutsu. Although Yoroi - Saigo is designed to be a defensive technique, when used with Taijutsu it can also be used as an offensive technique, increasing the users Strength by +6 points and the users Endurance by +6 points. Any who are struck by the user while Yoroi - Saigo is active will suffer first degree burns due to the heat. Yoroi - Saigo can defend against Taijustu and Bukijutsu below Rank A, any higher and the armor can be cut through within 2 posts using Taijutsu and Bukijutsu. Suiton Ninjutsu will extinguish the flame instantly if it is above Rank C.

Shirushi Yoroi:
Name: Shirushi Yoroi
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Element: Katon and Doton
Range: 20m
Cost: 70 Chakra Points
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: This technique is instant
Cooldown: 10 posts
Description:  Shirushi allows to user to be engulfed entirely in molten rock and lava, as if forming armor as usual. However, this time it is different, as instead of the armor remaining, it explodes outward from the users body, scorching any within a 20m radius with first degree burns if 20m away, and scorching any within a 10m radius with second degree burns. Although this this technique is devastating for the victim, it can also be devastating for the user, dealing first degree burns all over the users body.

2 Re: The Shiniki Clan on Tue Feb 10, 2015 4:02 am

Ayakashi

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Hello, I'm the New clan mod, >.> Again. So, without further adieu.

KKG Description:

You Say Futon, while meaning Katon. Katon is fire, Futon is wind.

I would also ask that you read your KKG description aloud to somebody. Some of it does not make sense in its sentence structure.

You also mention something about 3 points... Of which I am confused what you mean, we don't really have a point system here. You could be talking about how much chakra the jutsu costs, but, that would entirely depend on the rank of the armour, or, you could mean 'posts' but the armours seem maintainable.

Jutsu:

Yoton (Lava release.) Is the advanced element release which allows a person to 'control' molten rock by combining Katon and Doton chakra. Similar to Hyouton (Ice release) and Mokuton (plant release) Lava release is clan locked, and you cannot use it, i am sorry. So, lava techniques would need to be removed. I'm sorry, though there are likely other ways you could combine these two elements. Perhaps have the rock armour (in combined mode) bound together with katon? The less solid Katon would create gaps in the armour, but make it lighter, and while it would not have the same offensive capabilities as full fire, it would have more than full rock. (So, it would be like the happy medium.)

Also, in the duration, you would only say how long the user can have them on for. In these cases, only one word is necessary. "Maintainable." The downsides you can put in the description.

Saisho: Additional chakra losses for use of this technique over 2 turns you would need to say are additional to the normal cost of maintaining these techniques, (which is 5 per turn normally for a C rank)

You're going to need to state the depths of the wounds over the body. Like 1/2 inch? 1/4 inch?

Okay, now, here's a crux. A PURELY defensive technique can standardly block, 1 jutsu of 1 rank higher, 2 of equal rank, and 3 of one rank lower, as well as make basic attacks negligible, unless they're 2 ranks higher. A PURELY stat buffing jutsu at C rank can give you +1 tier to a single stat, but must incur a negative effect to compensate.

You both have a higher defensive capability and +4 tiers on this C rank jutsu, which, is way too much. I would like to see this jutsu, and the others brought down to these standards please~



Last edited by Ayakashi on Tue Feb 10, 2015 5:48 am; edited 1 time in total


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3 Re: The Shiniki Clan on Tue Feb 10, 2015 5:07 am

Ayakashi

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Oh, and can you say you can't balance Hesitant with a positive SC? please~


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