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1 "Help!" A Call from the Grave. (A Rank) on Tue May 12, 2015 6:48 am

Hanbei~

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Mission name: "Help" A Call from the Grave
Mission rank: A
Objective: Hanbei returns to Sunagakure alive
Location: Sunagakure No Sato
Reward: 1 A rank jutsu
Mission description: On a worn away notice, faded by sand and time "Missing: Hanbei Guanyin. Last Seen: En Route out of the medical bay after the chuunin exams one year ago. Any news on his werabouts would be appreciated, 300 Ryo to the ninja who brings him back alive, 100 for his remains... other payments can be be negotiated."
Mission details: Hanbei is chained within an underground facility on the third floor down by a bandit troupe numbering 41 in total. Tortured, beaten, and at 1/2 his chakra total, after meditating for chakra after the last number of days and resisting his torture, as he hears commotion enough to distract guards, he will attempt to make his own way to escape from the inside of the bandit facility. The rescuer fights their way to Hanbei, then ninja together will rescue the Guanyin and wipe out the bandits on their way out before fighting the remainder and the bandit leader outside, non conflict is not an option as Hanbei will be too weak to handle all the other bandits on his own or run at meaningful speed.

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Name: Bandit Scum
Age: 19-40
General Appearance: They wear red scarves and turbans, each of them seemed to be armed with scimitars of low quality and they wear little but baggy silken pants made to resist the conditions and woven flax boots. Many of the bandits are tattoed with fuuinjutsu, these marks are not beneficial, brands of servitude the leader can detonate at any time.
Personality: Wrathful, hateful, they hate society and those within it, especially ninja.
Motivations: Greed and Power, they wish to overthrow ninja and eliminate those who use chakra.
Fears: Death, dying, pain, the sands, their leader most of all.
Abilities: All of the bandits are D rank ninja with D-3 Rank stats and D rank Bukijutsu, each of them are well built and armed with C rank Scimitar and daggers which are able to cut their full depth into an opponent. They do not possess chakra, but, there is a VAST number of them in the complex, more than enough to overwhelm ninja who are not careful.
Other: N/A






Name:Bandit Leader
Age: 36
General Appearance: (Pic)
Personality: Brooding and spiteful, he hates ninja since he left the ninja academy and claimed this bandit camp, marking the bandits here with his fuuinjutsu. He loathes the ninja world for killing his friend in the chuunin exams, and has been attempting to cause distopia ever since.
Motivations: Hate, revenge, spite.
Fears: Death, pain, becoming useless, the dead.
Abilities: The Bandit Leader is a B rank ninja with B-0 rank stats. He uses the same weapons as the others, though he has C rank Medical, bukijutsu and Fuuinjutsu as well as C rank Katon which he uses to brand body seals on the other bandits. At any point he can use the bandits as living bombs, erupting them into a 5m radius fireball which expands at 5m per second the jutsu are C rank and deal severe 2nd degree burns on impact. (He was never a very good ninja.)
Other: N/A



Last edited by Hanbei~ on Sat May 16, 2015 8:34 pm; edited 7 times in total


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Hanbei's Skills ~ Hanbei Guanyin ~ Hanbei's Gear ~ Hanbei's Reg

Nin = S ~ Med = S || Fuu = S ~ Rai = S

2 Re: "Help!" A Call from the Grave. (A Rank) on Thu May 14, 2015 9:10 am

Sanosuke

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I don't entirely understand the purpose of this mission. Please explain.


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3 Re: "Help!" A Call from the Grave. (A Rank) on Thu May 14, 2015 11:31 pm

Hanbei~

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It's like "rescue a ninja who was captured" except I'm the ninja that's being rescued... seemed rather easy...


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"I'm the 109th star of Destiny~!"

Hanbei's Skills ~ Hanbei Guanyin ~ Hanbei's Gear ~ Hanbei's Reg

Nin = S ~ Med = S || Fuu = S ~ Rai = S

4 Re: "Help!" A Call from the Grave. (A Rank) on Sat May 16, 2015 11:54 am

Sanosuke

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I will need a number of the bandit/thugs for this mission. What about the layout of the facility? Is there a floor plan? From what point of view must you rescue Hanbei; are you just entering the facility so you must fight through the facility to save him with the Bandit leader being in charge? Or has the ninja managed to sneak intot he facility, and get to Hanbei and now must fight through the facility to freedom? This mission is very broad based on its description; I will need more information before I can review once more.


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Sano's Song | Battle Song | Depressing Song
Missions
D-9, C-6, B-5, A-4, S-6, SS-2

5 Re: "Help!" A Call from the Grave. (A Rank) on Sat May 16, 2015 6:34 pm

Hanbei~

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Edited Holms.


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"I'm the 109th star of Destiny~!"

Hanbei's Skills ~ Hanbei Guanyin ~ Hanbei's Gear ~ Hanbei's Reg

Nin = S ~ Med = S || Fuu = S ~ Rai = S

6 Re: "Help!" A Call from the Grave. (A Rank) on Sat May 16, 2015 7:35 pm

Sanosuke

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Genin
The number of bandit thugs you must fight including fighting the leader is too high for a B Rank mission. Perhaps lower it to 20-30. Alternatively, you can just raise the level of the mission to A Rank.


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Sano's Song | Battle Song | Depressing Song
Missions
D-9, C-6, B-5, A-4, S-6, SS-2

7 Re: "Help!" A Call from the Grave. (A Rank) on Sat May 16, 2015 7:50 pm

Hanbei~

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Sounds fine, change made.


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"I'm the 109th star of Destiny~!"

Hanbei's Skills ~ Hanbei Guanyin ~ Hanbei's Gear ~ Hanbei's Reg

Nin = S ~ Med = S || Fuu = S ~ Rai = S

8 Re: "Help!" A Call from the Grave. (A Rank) on Sat May 16, 2015 7:53 pm

Sanosuke

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Genin
I don't see any changes made


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Sano's Song | Battle Song | Depressing Song
Missions
D-9, C-6, B-5, A-4, S-6, SS-2

9 Re: "Help!" A Call from the Grave. (A Rank) on Sat May 16, 2015 8:30 pm

Hanbei~

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I changed it to A rank.


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"I'm the 109th star of Destiny~!"

Hanbei's Skills ~ Hanbei Guanyin ~ Hanbei's Gear ~ Hanbei's Reg

Nin = S ~ Med = S || Fuu = S ~ Rai = S

10 Re: "Help!" A Call from the Grave. (A Rank) on Sun May 17, 2015 12:44 pm

Sanosuke

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Genin
approved~


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Sano's Song | Battle Song | Depressing Song
Missions
D-9, C-6, B-5, A-4, S-6, SS-2

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