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1 Tsutomu Clan on Sun May 24, 2015 7:25 pm

Rin Tsutomu

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Clan: Tsutomu Clan

Kekkei Genkai: Medical Ninjutsu & Taijutsu (Strength)

Elements: N/A

Specialization: Medical Ninjutsu & Taijutsu (Strength)
Location: Suna (Scattered)

Clan History:
The Tsutomu Clan is a clan that is a part of Suna’s modern history. They had been fairly unknown before the Third Shinobi War, having been hiding in the midst of war speak. During the war, however, they had become known for their extensive strength and usage of medical ninjutsu. Throughout the war a large portion of the clan had been killed off, mostly due to Genjutsu users, only a few remaining members survived the war. They scattered throughout the nations, although the main branch of the family having stayed in Sunagakure. The Clan grew stronger in recent years, and have contributed to a vast majority of the medical herbs, plants, and more for Sunagakure. They are now well known in Suna, being some of the most advanced medical ninjas in the village hidden by sand.

Kekkei Genkai Description: The Tsutomu clan possess the ability of intense Chakra Flow, making them some of the best Medical Ninjutsu users in Sunagakure. With their knack for Taijutsu as well, they are able to focus their chakra to different parts of their body to increase the strength and impact of the blows. They receive a +1 to Strength and a +1 to Medical Ninjutsu and Taijutsu.

Drawbacks:

  • +1 to Genjutsu users who are using it against them.
  • Must take Hesitant (Element) SC, not allowed to be balanced.
  • When applying for a character, clan members are required to have Taijutsu (Strength).
  • Required to take the negative characteristic Bulky and not allowed to be balanced.


Members: -

Kekkei Genkai Jutsu:
KG Jutsu:
Name: Chakra Fists
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D - A
Type: Offensive
Element: N/A
Range: Supplementary
Specialty: Medical Ninjutsu & Taijutsu
Duration: Instant
Cooldown: 3 posts
Description: The user of this jutsu focuses their chakra to their hands, enhancing the strength of the punch that is to come. The focused chakra in the user’s hands allows a steroid of sorts, giving them +1 strength while using the jutsu. The chakra is visible around the user's hands, and when the hand collides with the user it does a specific amount of damage.
D - C ranked : The area in which the user's hand touches becomes numb and is unable to move for a single post, the chakra stunning the area yet also bruising it.
B - A ranked : The area in which the user's hand touches becomes numb, and the chakra flow is halted for a single post meaning any jutsu currently in use starts it's cooldown.


Name: Lethal Barrage
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Element: N/A
Range: Supplementary
Specialty: Medical Ninjutsu & Taijutsu
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: 6 posts
Description: The user focuses their chakra to their feet and all throughout their arms, enabling the areas to become lethal weapons. The user sprints toward the opponent, attacking them with punches, elbow jabs, kicks, etc. Due to the focused chakra the attacks are +2 tiers in strength. Damage is determined by user's strength stat. The user only uses this jutsu if they are losing, because it takes -35 chakra instead of the average -25.



Last edited by Rin Tsutomu on Mon May 25, 2015 2:01 am; edited 1 time in total

2 Re: Tsutomu Clan on Mon May 25, 2015 1:44 am

Noriko

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D-Rank
KKG Bonuses
+1 to Strength, and +1 usage to Tai and Med techniques. Undisputable.

Drawbacks
First drawback (required specs) is pretty much not a drawback. You were planning on doing this anyhow.

Weakness to genjutsu is fine.

Replace the element drawback with an un-balanceable "Hesitant (Element)" SC.

Unable to learn Genjutsu is not a drawback, as per the first.

The fourth (mandatory Strength taijutsu focus) probably also falls into this category.

Mandatory Bulky (if it was unable to be balanced) is alright.

Replace your drawbacks with ones that are limiting.

Focus Fist: A +2 only starts at A-rank with a drawback; you'll need to rework this jutsu entirely. However, I'm confused. Jutsu do their own damage; how does this jutsu supercede that? Or did you mean "basic attacks" (unaugmented taijutsu strikes)?

Lethal Barrage: A 1-post barrage of attacks; pretty solid. Keep in mind that this attack is limited by your own speed. Otherwise, it's fine. However, the damage is determined by the user's own Strength stat (+2, of course).


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3 Re: Tsutomu Clan on Mon May 25, 2015 2:04 am

Rin Tsutomu

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KKG Bonuses : Fixed

Drawbacks : Fixed

Focus Fist: Edited and a replacement jutsu was created in its spot, with a +1 strength (not tier)

Lethal Barrage: fixed



4 Re: Tsutomu Clan on Wed May 27, 2015 2:21 am

Ayakashi

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Hiya, as for your jutsu, D rank jutsu are unable to increase stats, that begins at C but must have a drawback, B rank can be-rid of that drawback, A rank can give a +2 with a drawback and S can have +2 without it. please change the jutsu to reflect these. :) (So the D rank cannot have a +1 or stun. the C rank can't stun, the B rank, as a stun and a +1 makes the jutsu strong, it would need a considerable drawback, such as additional chakra costs or - stats after the jutsu ebbs. are all ok.)

Jutsu #2: "The user only uses this jutsu if they are losing, because it takes -35 chakra instead of the average -25." you don't need to say that you can only use this when you are loosing, but that's up to you :)


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5 Re: Tsutomu Clan on Wed May 27, 2015 2:55 am

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Didn't catch; the +1s to Medical and Taijutsu need to be to usage (so you can use jutsu of 1 rank higher).


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