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1 Tsuchiki Clan on Sat May 30, 2015 5:30 am

Ryu Tsuchiki

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Clan: Tsuchiki

Kekkei Genkai: Kaminari no ​​Buraddo (Blood of Lightning)

Elements: Raiton

Specialization: Bukijutsu (Kenjutsu), Ninjutsu

Location: Scattered

Clan History: The Tsuchiki clan originated vaguely in the land of Iron, where a where the soon to be head of a small samurai clan decided to leave the land to embark across the other nations, trading his honor for adventure. Along his way out of the country, the samurai met a Ronin and they fell in love. To which they founded a clan that clashed the two life styles together, now known as the Tsuchiki clan. Upon creation, the two immediately moved out of the land of Iron to wonder the world. They gave birth to three children, which all strangely inherited the vibrant purple eyes of their mother. They where taught by their mother to wield chakra while being trained in the arts of the sword by their father. Later on in their lifes, they discovered that they all had an affinity for Raiton that was deeper than first thought of as they couldn't use Futon as it actually damaged their coils. During the third great shinobi war the clan decided to take up arms with Konohagakure, which they followed loyally until the break of the war, despite the lose of both the founders. Given permission to stay in the land of fire as a Ronin clan, the three ninja set up to build their clan to its farthest potential. These ninja where known as Renja, Kano, and Ryuudo Tsuchiki. Given lands a few mils outside of the village along with their guaranteed protection to build up their clan. It became established that all their offspring had the same issue as them with their affinity towards Raiton and the exact same vibrant purple eyes. After some years, which includes after they assisted in defending Konoha in its sieges before the forth shinobi war, the Akatsuki and allies declared war on the shinobi world. They along with many others jumped to join the shinobi alliance in an effort to defend their homelands and long time friends. The clan showed their use in many battles and became a renowned clan for their deadly control of Raiton and their original sword style Sandāsuu~eiku, which combined the fluidity of their katana with the power of Raiton, forming many kata's that is required for members of the clan to learn and that few outside of the clan have yet to be basic in due to its high level of control over raiton needed. After the defeat of the Akatsuki, the Tsuchiki clan allowed their shinobi to assimilate into the ranks of Konohagakure until it was fully repaired and recouped after the heavy fighting. Even though there are still some shinobi of Tsuchiki origin that are in the Konoha's ranks, most of the Tsuchiki's stay and are trained inside their own compound, which has grown vastly over the centuries of their founding. Though most of the clan is Ronin currently, a few individuals get additional training at the academy in Konoha and become one of their shinobi.

Kekkei Genkai Description: The Kaminari no ​​ Buraddo alloys the user to gather and mold chakra to an extent of their own power in the form of Raiton energy without the use of handseals. This can be anything from folding out small sparks of energy along the skin to creating walls of chaotic and powerful bolts of lightning that run rampant. Because of how strong their bodies are bonded to Raiton, they can not mold anything Futon based and have a very strong weakness to the element, and have trouble picking up and using other forms of energy.

Drawbacks: Because of their extreme affinity to Raiton, they cannot perform any kind of Futon jutsu, and suffer a +2 rank of damage of such a jutsu attacking them. They receive a penalty of -5 penalty cost of extra chakra usage when performing a jutsu of any other affinity.

Members: Ryu Tsuchiki

Kekkei Genkai Jutsu:
Raiton touch:

name:Raiton touch
Canon/custom: Custom
Rank: E-A (scalable)
Type: Offensive
Element: Raiton
Range: 0-10m (generally applies just above skin unless it's A or above)
Specialty: none
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: 3 post
Description: The Raiton touch is a simple jutsu that all members of the clan are required to learn, it allows the user to tap their Kekkei Genkai and manipulate Raiton to the degree if how much chakra that is pumped it, to multiple type of uses. This can range from an E rank use of a few points of chakra to create a few sparks in a punch, to tapping an A rank amount of chakra to generate a small bolt of lightning that piece the nearest target in its general direction. All of the uses of this technique do not require  hand seals, and cost the base amount of chakra per the level rank of the technique that is about to be used. And aplications of this go as follows:

E rank: a few sparks of electricity that jolt around a small area of the skin (2 inches) that can cause small contractions of the muscle to an exposed area of skin but not burn it

D rank: the electrical elements being applied are now noticeable and can applied to a larger region(5 inches) whilst also being able to cause the contractions to exposed skin and can cause minor 1st degree burns on said exposed skin with prolonged contact.

C rank: The electricity is now large enough to be considerable and applies to a larger area (one foot) that can contract an entire section of muscle on exposed skin and cause 1st to minor 2nd degree burns on contact, with the it leaning towards 1st degree but can move on up to 2nd with prolonged contact or multiple hits to the same area. It can also now extend slightly around your feet and hands ( 2 inches above skin in region), that only causes minor first degree burns within those 2 inches unless contact is prolonged(being within the radius of those 2 inches), then it increases by one degree for every 2 seconds exposed.

B rank: The user is adept at Raiton energy and the kekkei genkai, the electricity is chaotic and bolts sometimes move off the body to connect with the ground. The user can cover entire limbs in Raiton energy that can damage nerves on contact areas, destroying them with no more then 3 second prolonged contact, as well as cause 2nd to minor 3rd degree burns on exposed skin and minor 2nd degree burns under light coverage, also leaning towards 2nd degree but can increase in degree with prolonged contact and multiple hits around the same area. It also extends the radius that the Raiton can reach out by 5 inches, making it 7 inches that can cause minor second degree burns on contact from 7-4 inches within the radius and 2nd degree burns 3-1 inches within, that increase in degree for every 2 seconds of prolong contact within that radius of affect, and the extension applies to arms and legs as well as hand and feet, however it will only cover an area of a 10 inches on the user.

A rank: The user is a master at the usage of Raiton energy and their Kekkei Genkai to the point of being able to control the once chaotic bolts to fire off in a general direction of their choice for 10m at speeds of 40 meters per a second. They can also alternately chose to cover two or even three limbs with Raiton energy at the same time as well as well that will damage nerves rather than contract them on exposed areas, even so much as destroying them under a 2 seconds of contact or a another hit in the region and contract muscle groups under light to moderate coverage. It also cause major 3rd degree burns on contact on exposed areas of skin and major 2nd degree burns to covered areas of skin after a few seconds of contact or multiple hits in the same region, that can permanently damage muscle tissue varying in degree with 1 second being light repairable, 2 secs near irreparable, and 3 and up being destroyed tissue.
Kaosu hifu:

Name: Kaosu hifu
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Type: Defensive
Element: Raiton
Range: 0m (affects just above the skin)
Specialty: none
Duration: Maintainable
Cool down: Duration + 2
Description: The Kaosu hifu transfers Raiton energy over the skin to provide greater protection against taijutsu and bukijutsu attacks and can deal minor to severe burns (depends on the duration of time that the energy is in contact with the opponent and how exposed or conductive that contact is 1st degree burns on contact that gain a degree every 2 seconds that it stays in contact with them) and also grants them a tier higher reflexes, while also extends contact with metals as contact with skin. While active the user can not cast jutsu without first breaking this technique in a post and suffers a 30 chakra loss if the technique is broken by an enemy jutsu, the user also can not run while the jutsu is active. The technique cost 5 chakra per a post to maintain and 20 to activate.
Kaosubāsuto:

Name: Kaosubāsuto
Cannon/Custom: Custom
Rank: A
Type: offensive
Element: Raiton
Range: 10m
Specialty: none
Duration: one post to charge, one post to release
Cooldown: 8 posts
Description: The Kaosubāsuto lets the user Spike out a wave of Raiton energy in a sphere into the surrounding area. This energy can knock over opponents of a strength rank of C or below and can create any where from 1st to even 4th degree burns and tissue damage based on how close the target was to the user, minor 1st degree burns occurring at the farthest distance off with the least affects on the body being minor pain and muscle contraction, and 4th degree burns being the closest which is within 4 meters with the most affects on the body being heavily damaged tissue and destroyed nerves, and the affects gain/lose severity by every 1.5 meters in distance (example of a person at a 6 meter distance would experience 3rd degree burns with large amount of pain and muscle convolutions and travels at a speed of 40 meter per second. The Jutsu can also be fired in an orb around you for up to 10 meters, or can be controlled in a 30 degree cone in a chosen area that can extend up to 20 meters, this changes the affects slightly as more power is being directed into one location, making the most severe affects within a 8 meter distance that gain/lose severity every 3 meters. This jutsu takes one post to charge up and another to fire out. It costs 25 chakra to use. If the user is attacked before the jutsu is finished the jutsu stops, still using the same amount of chakra and the user suffers a single tier reaction time penalty
Kami no yubi:

Name: Kami no yubi
Cannon/Custom: Custom
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Element: Raiton
Range: 80m
Specialty: none
Duration: up to 2 posts
Description: Kami no yubi is an attack that super charges Kaiton  energy into almost plasma, and then combines at the hands to fire off into a beam of super heated Raiton energy around half a meter thick. This beam can turn stone, sand, dirt, and other earth based things into glass. when it comes in contact with skin, causes 4th degree burns and damage up to total disintegration of particles, not including the lightning that sparks off in a small radius of half a meter around the blast point that fires out excess Raiton energy that can cause permanent nerve damage along with 2nd to 3rd degree burns. It can be used one turn for for 30 chakra, and up to two with an additional 60 chakra add onto that. The Jutsu travels out at 65 meters per second. The user can not move from his position once the technique is active, and exiting the technique cause the user to suffer from fatigue, and can not use jutsu of B rank or higher for another 2 turns.



Last edited by Ryu Tsuchiki on Tue Jun 09, 2015 1:50 am; edited 8 times in total

2 Re: Tsuchiki Clan on Sat May 30, 2015 6:44 pm

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just popping in to say that when this is ready to be modded, post in the clan req's thread stickied at the top of the clan section :)


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3 Re: Tsuchiki Clan on Sun May 31, 2015 6:11 pm

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KKG

Seems okay, I'm assuming that the lightning powers described is in their jutsu list.

Drawbacks

okay, just some wording stuff here, can't use fuuton is fine, double the damage, we tend to work in ranks here, so, saying they receive +1 rank of damage from fuuton techniques, or +2 if you want their weakness to be huge. As for the last one, 20% could get interesting, as the site mostly works in multiples of 5, so, saying non-raiton techniques cost -5 additional chakra, would be about the same. :)

Jutsu

1/ I'd like this to be B rank, and I would like you to describe what the burns you can do are, and how quickly they escalate? Is it first degree at a touch, then an additional degree of burn every 2 seconds of contact? For example. Also, chakra costs are largely set in stone, you don't need to state them :) (unless they're higher.)

2/ the maximum damage of burns at B rank is minor 3rd degree. You'll quickly find that the EMP is not needed, and you could remove it. It also needs a speed in which it projects outwards. Also, can you place it anywhere or is it around you? If so what is the size of the orb?

3/ this looks fine, but you need a speed on the beam,

if you're unsure on anything, check the jutsu rules here:

http://www.narutosaga.com/t11745-jutsu-rules


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4 Re: Tsuchiki Clan on Sun May 31, 2015 6:25 pm

Ryu Tsuchiki

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Ayakashi wrote:KKG

Seems okay, I'm assuming that the lightning powers described is in their jutsu list.

I was thinking it could also have other uses, for example putting alittle bit of raiton energy into a punch that could cause the enemy to contract muscle involuntary. Is this allowed, and do I have to list it in the kekkei genkai jutsu or not?

5 Re: Tsuchiki Clan on Sun May 31, 2015 6:30 pm

Ayakashi

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Ryu Tsuchiki wrote:
Ayakashi wrote:KKG

Seems okay, I'm assuming that the lightning powers described is in their jutsu list.

I was thinking it could also have other uses, for example putting alittle bit of raiton energy into a punch that could cause the enemy to contract muscle involuntary. Is this allowed, and do I have to list it in the kekkei genkai jutsu or not?

No, those are somewhat generic raiton jutsu, just remember that you would need to app them as jutsu, :)


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6 Re: Tsuchiki Clan on Sun May 31, 2015 6:36 pm

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KKG & Drawbacks

seem fine

Jutsu

1/ seems fine

2/ "or can be controlled in a 45 degree cone in a chosen area that can extend up to 65 meters." No. either reduce the range to the radius rules for an A rank jutsu, or remove this entirely. Also, you didn't add a speed. 40mp/s would be fine. (meters per second.)

3/ still no speed added 60mp/s would be fine here.


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7 Re: Tsuchiki Clan on Sun May 31, 2015 7:32 pm

Ryu Tsuchiki

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Ayakashi wrote:KKG & Drawbacks

seem fine

Jutsu

1/ seems fine

2/ "or can be controlled in a 45 degree cone in a chosen area that can extend up to 65 meters." No. either reduce the range to the radius rules for an A rank jutsu, or remove this entirely. Also, you didn't add a speed. 40mp/s would be fine. (meters per second.)

3/ still no speed added 60mp/s would be fine here.

I added the general usage as a jutsu, along with its scalable degrees. And the speed for the last jutsu is at the end. Sorry for making the process long

8 Re: Tsuchiki Clan on Sun May 31, 2015 8:32 pm

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Its fine, but that jutsu is REALLY hard to read with that broken coding, can you fix that please?


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9 Re: Tsuchiki Clan on Sun May 31, 2015 9:19 pm

Ryu Tsuchiki

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Ayakashi wrote:Its fine, but that jutsu is REALLY hard to read with that broken coding, can you fix that please?
Fixed it, sorry I was on my phone when I did that. Does this mean its a go for my character profile and the clan is good?

10 Re: Tsuchiki Clan on Mon Jun 01, 2015 8:07 pm

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Hiya, me again, first off with raiton touch, You're unable to have 2 S rank techniques on a clan, so, now you have to make the choice between the S rank application of this, and the S rank jutsu you have last. Remove one of them please?

With many of the burns you give two damages, which is fine, i would simply like you to state a condition for the light and the more severe. simple as saying 'deal' (light damage here) on contact and up to (heavier damage) with prolonged contact or repeated hits. Nothing too annoying, can you do this for each rank of the scaling jutsu please?

A rank: You say adapt not adept >.>

the rest seems okay, i will re-evaluate again when these changes are done.

Almost there, i promise <3


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11 Re: Tsuchiki Clan on Tue Jun 02, 2015 1:07 am

Ryu Tsuchiki

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Bumping with deleting the S level and adding extra info to all the other levels

12 Re: Tsuchiki Clan on Wed Jun 03, 2015 7:34 am

Ayakashi

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Potentially last thing,

the earlier thing you say (2 inches and 5 inches) when it comes to the electricity of your jutsu, that's describing the area it covers on 'you' correct? before it covers say your entire hand or foot.

I'd just like you to make that clearer.

Kaosu : B rank jutsu cost 20 to activate.

basuto: " and can create any where from 1st to even 4th degree burns and tissue damage based on how close the target was to the user, " at what ranges cause what damage? within the first four meters is it 4th? then decreasing by a degree for each 2m after that?


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13 Re: Tsuchiki Clan on Wed Jun 03, 2015 2:38 pm

Ryu Tsuchiki

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Ayakashi wrote:Potentially last thing,

the earlier thing you say (2 inches and 5 inches) when it comes to the electricity of your jutsu, that's describing the area it covers on 'you' correct? before it covers say your entire hand or foot.

I'd just like you to make that clearer.

Kaosu : B rank jutsu cost 20 to activate.

basuto: " and can create any where from 1st to even 4th degree burns and tissue damage based on how close the target was to the user, " at what ranges cause what damage? within the first four meters is it 4th? then decreasing by a degree for each 2m after that?

I made the edits, and I stated that it extends off the body that distance at the same it covers your hand or foot or portion of a limb, and I made other changes to add more detail. All in all I am learning to just add as much detail as possible in jutsu

14 Re: Tsuchiki Clan on Fri Jun 05, 2015 12:15 am

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