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1Akako, Daisuke [Jutsu List Update] Empty Akako, Daisuke [Jutsu List Update] on Thu Dec 31, 2015 4:52 am

Daisuke

Daisuke


D-rank
Name: Blinding Light
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: E
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Element: None
Range: 5 meters
Specialty: Kenjutsu
Duration: Instantaneous
Cooldown: ~
Description: The user tilts his blade or other reflective edge so that the light from the area reflects from it.  Depending on the amount of light in the area, the light could temporarily blind the victim in an instant if it were to hit their eyes, or it could be used to provide a light source for a dark area.

Name: Chakra Cutting Draw
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Type: Defensive
Element: ~
Range: Length of Blade
Specialty: Kenjutsu (Iaido)
Duration: Instantaneous
Cooldown: 5 posts
Description: The swordsman swings his blade, slicing at an incoming jutsu (B rank or lower) with such a precise accuracy and speed (30 m/s), that it severs the ties of the chakra that hold the incoming technique together, seperating it through the middle, leaving the Iaidoka unharmed, but the remains of the jutsu flying on behind him(Should it be a ranged attack.) If this is used offensively, it is simply a swing of the blade in an extremely swift manner.

Name: Dashing Flurry
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Element: None
Range: 1-20 Meters
Specialty: Kenjutsu
Duration: Two posts
Cooldown: 5 posts
Description: On the first post, the user uses the sprinting burst of speed according to their speed stat to launch themselves forward at the enemy in a sprint. On the second post, after reaching their target, they draw their blade and begin to slash in all 8 cardinal directions on this target, repeating this twice and finishing with a powerful jab toward the heart of their enemy.  Upon finishing the assault, they launch backwards to their original position. If this move is to be blocked or parried, it will knock the user off balance.



Last edited by Daisuke on Sun Mar 27, 2016 12:11 am; edited 4 times in total


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2Akako, Daisuke [Jutsu List Update] Empty Re: Akako, Daisuke [Jutsu List Update] on Fri Mar 25, 2016 5:54 am

Sujin

Sujin


D-rank
Blinding Light: Don't really see how this needs to be a jutsu. But since you're going to pay for some chakra just to have this: State it temporarily blinds them in the instant the reflected light hits their eyes.

Chakra Cutting Draw: "in an extremely swift manner" please specify a speed to how swift this is.

Dashing Flurry: Change out all the speed stuff to just say "uses the sprinting burst of speed according to their speed stat". (Again, this jutsu could be done RP-wise but I can understand why you'd want to put this as a jutsu)


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3Akako, Daisuke [Jutsu List Update] Empty Re: Akako, Daisuke [Jutsu List Update] on Fri Mar 25, 2016 2:29 pm

Daisuke

Daisuke


D-rank
Edits made.


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4Akako, Daisuke [Jutsu List Update] Empty Re: Akako, Daisuke [Jutsu List Update] on Sat Mar 26, 2016 5:57 pm

Sujin

Sujin


D-rank
Blinding Light: The range will have to be dropped down to max 5 meters.

Daisuke wrote:Name: Chakra Cutting Draw
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Type: Defensive
Element: ~
Range: Length of Blade
Specialty: Kenjutsu (Iaido)
Duration: Instantaneous
Cooldown: 5 posts
Description: The swordsman swings his blade, slicing at an incoming jutsu (B rank or lower) with such a precise accuracy and speed (30 m/s), that it severs the ties of the chakra that hold the incoming technique together, seperating it through the middle, leaving the Iaidoka unharmed, but the remains of the jutsu flying on behind him(Should it be a ranged attack.) If this is used offensively, it is simply a swing of the blade in an extremely swift manner.
APPROVED

Daisuke wrote:Name: Dashing Flurry
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Element: None
Range: 1-20 Meters
Specialty: Kenjutsu
Duration: Two posts
Cooldown: 5 posts
Description: On the first post, the user uses the sprinting burst of speed according to their speed stat to launch themselves forward at the enemy in a sprint. On the second post, after reaching their target, they draw their blade and begin to slash in all 8 cardinal directions on this target, repeating this twice and finishing with a powerful jab toward the heart of their enemy. Upon finishing the assault, they launch backwards to their original position. If this move is to be blocked or parried, it will knock the user off balance.
APPROVED


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5Akako, Daisuke [Jutsu List Update] Empty Re: Akako, Daisuke [Jutsu List Update] on Sun Mar 27, 2016 12:17 am

Daisuke

Daisuke


D-rank
Fixed.


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6Akako, Daisuke [Jutsu List Update] Empty Re: Akako, Daisuke [Jutsu List Update] on Mon Mar 28, 2016 12:39 pm

Kensei~

Kensei~


D-rank
Daisuke wrote:Name: Blinding Light
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: E
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Element: None
Range: 5 meters
Specialty: Kenjutsu
Duration: Instantaneous
Cooldown: ~
Description: The user tilts his blade or other reflective edge so that the light from the area reflects from it.  Depending on the amount of light in the area, the light could temporarily blind the victim in an instant if it were to hit their eyes, or it could be used to provide a light source for a dark area.

Approved.


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