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Mission name: First Dance // Baroque of Bracken Bone
Mission rank: S (Criminal)
Objective: Kill the First Assassin
Location: Kirigakure
Reward: 3k Ryo
Mission description:

Bao Sanniang, the youngest but most loyal of Zhuge's Assassins managed to find a way to pry free of the technique which had long drugged her to the will of her lord. Using this chance to defy his edicts in a bid for attention and favor, she's rallied the united armed force Under the feudal lord in a desperate attempt to ambush Ayakashi and end her once and for all, taking an entire forest village hostage to draw out the Mizukage and her thralls. However, due to her reliance and addiction to the control, Sanniang has made herself psychologically vulnerable, though unbound. Having not felt pain for half a decade and the deterioration of her emotional state, she will likely not back down, but be a far more powerful opponent.

Mission details:

Aya and those with her will receive a distress note from a dying courier, relaying that a fortress townage of Sp. Jounin in the forest had been overrun by strange warriors dressed in red, led by a mysterious young girl who moved faster than any of them could see.

Attacking the village, it will look like a spider had struck at it, covered with wire threads as Bao had set the stage with her deadly vortex spinners, an ensuing fight with Bao and her many, many minions (100) will ensue where Aya and others will have to both rescue hostages that Bao and her men will attempt to execute as distractions to divide the party.

After her minions are dealt with, Bao will empower herself with a chakra state similar to sage mode, giving her and all her jutsu the same bonuses as senjutsu techniques for the remainder of the fight, increasing any stats under SS-2 to SS-2 and her specs and elements increase in power by 1 rank as well as giving her a borderline ludicrous boost in overall power to an almost legendary extent. After she is eliminated, reinforcements will arrive, forcing the party to flee, but finally with a success under their belt as the tides begin to change.

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Bao Sanniang:
General Information:

Name: Bao Sanniang
Alias: Doomspinner
Age: 23
Gender: Female
Sexuality: Saddist
Birthplace: Across the Sea

Physical Appearance:

Age Appears: 20
Clan: N/A
Rank: SS
Height: 5'4"
Weight: 49.4kg
Physique: Incredibly slender and lithe in an acrobatic sense with very little body ft on her person, making her look more like a girl than a fully grown woman. Her athletic body creating a juxtaposition to some of her more feminine features, accentuating them more to the eye than normal. Has Ace Eye and Frail.

Hair: Mid length brown hair done up with a floral hairpin in the style of a lotus sutra
Eyes: An elegant garnet red which resonates dimly in pale moonlight, looking more like a pink than a red, though that begins to change to a more royal red when she is angered. However like all her countrymen, in daylight, her eyes are dim and black.
Skin: Natural, fair, pink skin not pallid white but touched by the caress of sunlight
Scars: One very large scar across her back from right shoulder to left hip.
Other: N/A

Abilities:

Techniques: Having a greater range than many of the other assassins, though not quite as powerful, as the other 5. Her techniques usually surround large bladed gusts of wind, waves or electricity and enchanting her weapons with a range of techniques, all which move at 40mp/s and are A rank. Lastly, her focus on techniques with her death-spinners uses A rank suiton to hide them from sight, or raiton to electrify the webs and fuuton to guide the shurikens to fly where she wants them before pulling on the anchors, turning ninja into cut cheese. Her three signature techniques share a common scene, creating a huge 10m radius cyclone of either water or wind, and enchanting it with Raiton to create either a storm tornado or a raiton cyclone, she can move these two jutsu at 15mp/s at will. These A rank techniques on contact cause rapid heavy 3rd degree electrical burns before throwing ninja out at speeds capable of breaking bones. Throwing weapons and ninja within 10m of either cyclone who are not using supernatural walking practice are dragged into the tornadoes.

Elements: Fuuton (S) // Raiton (S) // Suiton (S)

Specializations: Taijutsu (SS) // Bukijutsu (SS) // Ninjutsu (SS)

Strength: A-3
Endurance: A-3
Speed: SS-3
Reaction Time: SS-3
Perception: SS-3

Equipment:

Tatsumaki & Arashi: Two 2m long legendary SS rank bladed war fans with the unique capability of combining into a single massive fan all of which with edges capable of cutting through ninja. Separate, at 10 chakra per turn, the fans are able to launch a chakra projectile as a ranged basic attack with each swipe of their bladed edge at 40mp/s for up to 20m. Together however, with 30 chakra and a single swipe of the weapon, the bladed projectile is colossal, launching a huge scythe of fuuton chakra in a 180 degree radius up to 100m in range at the same speeds. The wind-force around the combined wind scythe capable of breaking bones and throwing ninja if they're even within 5 meters of the blade.

Lastly, if thrown, these fans act as boomerangs.


Vortex Death-Spinners: Possessing seemingly and infinite number of these small steel, A rank windmill fans. Though, each of these seemingly interesting shuriken have a secret in the form of a wound wire which links to them (making them more like a yoyo.) ending in a small anchor. When thrown the projectiles spin, leaving the wire behind them tightly potentially leaving fields of razor sharp wire capable of cutting through a ninja. Each spinner can have up to 30m of mono-filament steel wire come from it, making them lethal trapping tools, able to make lethal webs which can cut nina, trees, and other things to ribbons.

Modus Operandi: Bao used to be a wondering monk and a capable adviser to others in spiritual needs. Though, when she was tainted by the control of the Sleeping Dragon Zhuge Liang, she discovered a deep seeded lust within herself for causing the torturous pain in others, while the medication numbs her body from her own. One of the few which serve Zhuge willingly now, she still enjoys the free feeling of not being in control, and is addicted to the drugging technique which is cast on her. She's coy, and known to enjoy playing with her victims as much as possible, preferring to maim them and break them down slowly over time rather than eliminating them quickly, like a cat to a mouse. To the unknowing onlooker, one would say she's a very happy girl of her age enjoying life, none being the wiser to the brutal truth.






Bao's Soldiers:
Name: Zhuge Conscripts
Age: 22-45
General Appearance: Men wearing plate-mail covered shades and long red cloaks with red undergarments, every one of them has a bizzare tattoo on the back of their neck and wields and assortment of weapons. The men are unshaven and shaggy, like they have been kept in a storehouse until now, to the point of even having dust on them. These soldiers come across more as items than people, and have lifeless expressions.
Personality: They are devoid of life, pure tabula rasa taking orders from Bao Sanniang to the letter with what appears to be little more than cold logic before it. These men and women have no free will, but carry the brands of former criminals and even the marks of followers from the army that served under Seven bells in the seven day war.
Motivations: To follow the whim of their lords.
Fears: None, as they are all under the direct control of the Feudal lords' Adviser Zhuge.
Abilities: These men and women are all considered A rank ninja with A-1 rank stats. They each have S rank Bukijutsu and A rank Ninjutsu with the ability to use Suiton and Katon. Each of these ninja are able to use all academy techniques as well as all techniques from the ninjutsu and elemental libraries that they would be able to use within their ranks.
Other: Each of these men carry an assortment of weapons, All A rank, including:


  • A single hand-crossbow with 15 standard bolts (45mp/s || 50m range),
  • A Katana and Wakizashi
  • A Yari Spear. (all which deal standard Damage for their weapon ranks.)
  • A rank heavy Body-Armour (Standard Defensive ability)
  • A rank armoured Shade (Heavy armour / standard defense.)
  • A pack of 5 Kunai, 10m of wire, 1 paper bomb & 2 flash bombs.



Last edited by Ayakashi on Tue Aug 08, 2017 6:34 pm; edited 9 times in total


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~ Jutsu List ~ Aya's Stats ~ Item Lockup ~ Jutsu Rej ~
Theme Song
Taijutsu SS-Bukijutsu SS-Senjutsu S || Fuuton SS-Suiton SS-Hyouton SS

EP: 5

Nozomi

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1/2 approval


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Missions
[D Rank] 2 | [C Rank] 0 | [B Rank] 4 | [A Rank] 1 | [S Rank] 1 | [SS Rank] 0

Mitsuo

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Approved~


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Mitsuo

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I'm pulling this quickly, as going through it again I realized that this isn't a SS Ranked mission. It should be difficult for a SS Ranked person to complete, but it's not even close. I want you to make the NPC more powerful, she shouldn't only have A Rank specs and elements, that is ridiculous. I'd also like you to increase her endurance and strength to S-3.

As for the minions, they again are too weak. They should each have S Rank specs and elements at A Rank and be carrying A-S Rank weapons. This would make it much more realistic for a SS Ranked mission. It should be something of world changing import, and as it currently stands, it is something that any S Rank on the site could easily solo.

I'm sorry I didn't go through this better earlier. I made a mistake of just seeing the 1/2 approval and not reading it. I won't make that mistake again.

Make the recommended edits, and I will re-approve.


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Ayakashi

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Fixed


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~ Jutsu List ~ Aya's Stats ~ Item Lockup ~ Jutsu Rej ~
Theme Song
Taijutsu SS-Bukijutsu SS-Senjutsu S || Fuuton SS-Suiton SS-Hyouton SS

EP: 5

Mitsuo

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I can point to several S Ranks who could kill 100 A Rank ninja~

That said this looks better, thank you.

Approved~


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Ayakashi

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Altered to S rank.

Seeking approval


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~ Jutsu List ~ Aya's Stats ~ Item Lockup ~ Jutsu Rej ~
Theme Song
Taijutsu SS-Bukijutsu SS-Senjutsu S || Fuuton SS-Suiton SS-Hyouton SS

EP: 5

Mitsuo

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Approved~


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Bokuden

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S-rank
Revoked.

Daimyo and other national level political characters are considered site NPCs. Anything involving them or that would influence that sphere of the world is completely off-limits to member manipulation and must come directly from the administration. If you have something you'd like to propose, submit something in writing to the admins and we'll discuss it internally. Applications coming from members breaching this area of the geopolitical landscape will not be permitted.


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Character Bio | Jutsu List | Item Locker

Bukijutsu-SS|Ninjutsu-SS|Fuuinjutsu-D|Medical-D||Raiton-SS|Suiton-SS|Katon-S|Doton-D

Mission List: D:12 | C:4 | B:3 | A:6 | S:2 | SS:0

Ayakashi

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This plot-line was approved by Andrea a LOOOONG time ago, and it's been no secret moving forward on site in almost 20 threads for over the past year and a half in kiri... so feel free to confer with her about this one, cos it's a bit late to stop the ball now... In the end, it does little to effect the geopolitical landscape of the country as it all resets itself nicely at the end of the intended arc. If you would like to talk to me about this in person, feel free to PM me about the subject and I will happily give you the in depth details of the plot-line and how it is intended to be resolved.

-Aya :)


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~ Jutsu List ~ Aya's Stats ~ Item Lockup ~ Jutsu Rej ~
Theme Song
Taijutsu SS-Bukijutsu SS-Senjutsu S || Fuuton SS-Suiton SS-Hyouton SS

EP: 5

Ayakashi

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In the mean time, removed any and all reference of the Daimyo, instead replacing it with a feudal lord who is within the village, whom is not a national level NPC, thus addressing your concerns.


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~ Jutsu List ~ Aya's Stats ~ Item Lockup ~ Jutsu Rej ~
Theme Song
Taijutsu SS-Bukijutsu SS-Senjutsu S || Fuuton SS-Suiton SS-Hyouton SS

EP: 5

Ayakashi

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~ Jutsu List ~ Aya's Stats ~ Item Lockup ~ Jutsu Rej ~
Theme Song
Taijutsu SS-Bukijutsu SS-Senjutsu S || Fuuton SS-Suiton SS-Hyouton SS

EP: 5

Sayuri

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This is being Approved~ as an S-Rank Criminal Mission, the payment for which will follow the current guidelines which is 3000 ryo.


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Ninjutsu S-Rank | Bukijutsu (Kenjutsu, Kyuujutsu) S-Rank | Medical Ninjutsu C-Rank | Raiton S-Rank | Fuuton S-Rank
Missions
D-1 | C-3 | B-3 | A-1 | S-0
Socials: 3 | Missions: 0

Sero

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http://www.narutosaga.com/t23815-baroque-of-bracken-bone-the-first-dance-ss-mission-plot-invite-only
Part 1 of the mission
2322

http://www.narutosaga.com/t25002-baroque-of-bracken-bone-part-2-the-first-dance-ss-mission-plot-invite-only
Part 2 of the mission

6165

total of 8487


6250/6250 for the 3000 pay out

2237 left over

Using 2200 for an extra 1,100

Requested pay out of 4,100


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LOCKER | JUTSU | SERO | BATTLE SONG

Missions:| D: 2 | C: 0 | B: 3 | A: 3| S: 2 | SS: 0
Specs:
Ninjutsu SS - Bukijutsu SS - Fūinjutsu S - Senjutsu B
Elements: Katon S -Suiton S - Boil S

Sayuri

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Sero wrote:http://www.narutosaga.com/t23815-baroque-of-bracken-bone-the-first-dance-ss-mission-plot-invite-only
Part 1 of the mission
2322

http://www.narutosaga.com/t25002-baroque-of-bracken-bone-part-2-the-first-dance-ss-mission-plot-invite-only
Part 2 of the mission

6165

total of 8487


6250/6250 for the 3000 pay out

2237 left over

Using 2200 for an extra 1,100

Requested pay out of 4,100

Approved~


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Ninjutsu S-Rank | Bukijutsu (Kenjutsu, Kyuujutsu) S-Rank | Medical Ninjutsu C-Rank | Raiton S-Rank | Fuuton S-Rank
Missions
D-1 | C-3 | B-3 | A-1 | S-0
Socials: 3 | Missions: 0

Sayuri

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Sayuri wrote:
Sero wrote:http://www.narutosaga.com/t23815-baroque-of-bracken-bone-the-first-dance-ss-mission-plot-invite-only
Part 1 of the mission
2322

http://www.narutosaga.com/t25002-baroque-of-bracken-bone-part-2-the-first-dance-ss-mission-plot-invite-only
Part 2 of the mission

6165

total of 8487


6250/6250 for the 3000 pay out

2237 left over

Using 2200 for an extra 1,100

Requested pay out of 4,100

Approved~

PAID~


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Ninjutsu S-Rank | Bukijutsu (Kenjutsu, Kyuujutsu) S-Rank | Medical Ninjutsu C-Rank | Raiton S-Rank | Fuuton S-Rank
Missions
D-1 | C-3 | B-3 | A-1 | S-0
Socials: 3 | Missions: 0

Mitsuo

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Ayakashi has been paid~


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Nozomi

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http://www.narutosaga.com/t23815-baroque-of-bracken-bone-the-first-dance-ss-mission-plot-invite-only

http://www.narutosaga.com/t25002-baroque-of-bracken-bone-part-2-the-first-dance-ss-mission-plot-invite-only#208217

The completed missions TWC: 6131
1100*50/100= 550 extra ryo

Crime Mission Payout: 3000 + 550 = 3550 + Hunternin Captain bonus of 30% (1065) = 4615 Ryo reward


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Missions
[D Rank] 2 | [C Rank] 0 | [B Rank] 4 | [A Rank] 1 | [S Rank] 1 | [SS Rank] 0

Izumi Karisuma

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B-Rank
Nozomi wrote:http://www.narutosaga.com/t23815-baroque-of-bracken-bone-the-first-dance-ss-mission-plot-invite-only

http://www.narutosaga.com/t25002-baroque-of-bracken-bone-part-2-the-first-dance-ss-mission-plot-invite-only#208217

The completed missions TWC: 6131
1100*50/100= 550 extra ryo

Crime Mission Payout: 3000 + 550 = 3550 + Hunternin Captain bonus of 30% (1065) = 4615 Ryo reward

Approved for 4615 ryo! Please see the Admin Thread for payment.

Ayakashi

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Izumi Karisuma wrote:
Nozomi wrote:http://www.narutosaga.com/t23815-baroque-of-bracken-bone-the-first-dance-ss-mission-plot-invite-only

http://www.narutosaga.com/t25002-baroque-of-bracken-bone-part-2-the-first-dance-ss-mission-plot-invite-only#208217

The completed missions TWC: 6131
1100*50/100= 550 extra ryo

Crime Mission Payout: 3000 + 550 = 3550 + Hunternin Captain bonus of 30% (1065) = 4615 Ryo reward

Approved for 4615 ryo! Please see the Admin Thread for payment.

PAID


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~ Jutsu List ~ Aya's Stats ~ Item Lockup ~ Jutsu Rej ~
Theme Song
Taijutsu SS-Bukijutsu SS-Senjutsu S || Fuuton SS-Suiton SS-Hyouton SS

EP: 5

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