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1 Zakuro Clan on Wed Jul 27, 2016 6:22 am

Lumyr



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Clan: Zakuro

Kekkei Genkai: Death's Connection

Elements: N/A

Specialization: Ninjutsu

Location: Scattered

Clan History: The clan's true and accurate origin point has been lost to time, but if one were to dig deep enough they could find records detailing the stories of individuals that claimed to see past versions of themselves from former lives. These individuals could die like any other person, but legends hold true that they would rise once more as another person somewhere in the world who would follow along the same journey of enlightenment.

Nowadays these people are little more than an urban legend, and as it is hard to prove to others of their heritage, they often keep to themselves and hide their bloodline.

When a natural-born Zakuro undergoes the rebirth process, their new body is selected at random rather than literally being reborn as a baby. The soul typically gravitates towards those with issues that could be resolved through a spiritual journey.

These people will not have had a Kekkei Genkai prior to this process and probably will not realize that they've been selected as a Zakuro clan member until they notice the changes for themselves. Their personality will also stay the same, rather than giving way to the personality of their past life.

Kekkei Genkai Description: The primary abilities of Death's Connection is to connect with one's past lives. This can be used to gain information that their past self might know, or gain the ability to learn a Jutsu of their past self and utilize it as well as they could.

With the ultimate Jutsu of the clan that spawned all the legends, the user can put themselves into a state of rebirth in which their soul leaves their current body, essentially killing themselves, in order to find a new body to inhabit. In all ways this is a complete restart.

Drawbacks:

- Members of the Zakuro clan cannot use Genjutsu of any type, as using illusions will weaken their connections to their spiritual side.

- A Zakuro can't transfer their soul to a new body by ordinary means - they need to use the clan Jutsu to do so. Being killed normally will result in the permanent death of a Zakuro.

- For the first life of a Zakuro clan member, they will essentially be treated as not having any Kekkei Genkai as they have no past life to draw upon. Thus the only Kekkei Genkai Jutsu that they'll be able to use is Journey Anew.

- When a Zakuro successfully reincarnates, their new character must start as a D rank.


Members: N/A

Kekkei Genkai Jutsu:

Death's Connection:

Name: Death's Connection
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: E - SS
Type: Supplementary
Element: N/A
Range: N/A
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: 4 posts
Description: The user forms a spiritual connection with their past self. If it's their first time using this Jutsu, they must spend the post interacting with their past self.

During this post, the user can do one of two things. They can either ask their past self for advice pertaining to a situation (of which their past self is limited to whatever knowledge they had prior to their IC death), or they can learn a Jutsu from their past self.

In order for it to work, the user must be capable of learning the Jutsu, and must replace one of their currently existing Jutsus which isn't Death's Connection in order to learn it.

With those conditions met, the user will permanently learn the Jutsu, and permanently forget the one they chose to sacrifice unless they choose to purchase it later.

Myriad Soul Experience:

Name: Myriad Soul Experience
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Element: N/A
Range: N/A
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 4 posts
Cooldown: 4 posts
Description: The user gets in touch with one of their past lives, allowing their personality to temporarily take over. The user will have their negative character traits removed for this duration temporarily, and they will now fight, act and talk as the past life that they allowed to possess them.

Journey Anew:

Name: Journey Anew
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Element: N/A
Range: N/A
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: Once per character
Description: The user enters into a meditative stance of enlightenment, exhaling the very soul from their body. Once this Jutsu has been activated, nothing can stop it. The moment they enter this state, they will be reborn even if they're killed or interrupted somehow.

Feeling at peace, their soul drifts from their bodies, on to find the next individual in need of a spiritual journey.

Rather than be reborn in a brand new body, the user's soul inhabits a random body in need of spiritual guidance. In essence, those chosen by natural-born Zakuro become a part of the Zakuro clan without even realizing it.

The new character must be created as if you were making a brand new character starting as a Genin.

Zakuro Final Technique: Summit of God:

Name: Zakuro Final Technique: Summit of God
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: SS
Type: Supplementary
Element: N/A
Range: N/A
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: Until canceled
Cooldown: 6 posts
Description: The user channels the full potential of themselves and all past lives before them into one single almighty individual with the personality of the current life.

The user gains the ability to use all the Jutsu of their past lives with proficiency equivalent to how proficient that particular life was able to use their own moveset. They will also temporarily remember moves forgotten through the Death's Connection Jutsu.

The user also gains all of the positive traits of all past lives while negating all negative traits of past lives. If positive traits overlap they stack.

As an added bonus, all knowledge across all past lives will also temporarily flood the user's brain, allowing for one to know things they may not know otherwise.

Puppets, contracts and weapons will not be provided to use, however.

This Jutsu can only be used 3 times in a user's life. On the 3rd usage, the user will die at the end of the Jutsu and be reincarnated as a D rank Genin.

2 Re: Zakuro Clan on Thu Jul 28, 2016 8:11 am

Fukai

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Hiya

Lemme just say at the get go that you won't be able to use this clan to stack different kkg jutsu onto one character, if that was your intention. The character will start out as a member of the zakuro clan and every rebirthed character will also be of the zakuro clan.

KKG:

"gain the ability to learn a Jutsu of their past self"
> Add in something along the lines of: 'given that the character learning the jutsu has all the requirements for learning the jutsu such as elements, specialisations, rank and so on'.
From what I've read below, I am guessing that you are wanting to learn these jutsu for free, which I think is ok since you have technically already worked for them on that character.
> Add that the jutsu are free.
> Add in something to the effect of: During the transfer process, create a new character app on a different page so that the previous life is recorded. When putting the new app in for modding, link the previous app as well and add a comment to inform the character mod of the zakuro kkg. Once the mod has approved of this, the original character is confirmed as dead. The jutsu list of previous characters must be kept if the jutsu learning ability is wanted.
Drawbacks:
I would like 1 active drawback.
Jutsu:
Death's Connection

This doesn't really need to be a jutsu, as it seems like just a couple of innate functions of your kkg. Don't really see the need for replacing one of your current jutsu.

Myriad Soul Experience

As some SC's are tied to your body, these can't be removed.
> Add that only appropriate personality SC's can be removed via this method and give an example (foolhardy)
Journey Anew

The way this jutsu is worded, the penalty of death will be mitigated by using it whenever you are in a tight spot. This changes the risk vs reward of real combat situations. However, you may keep it worded how it is if you remove the costless jutsu learning.
> Add that you have a two post preparation where you cannot do anything, even move. The effect will then take place at the start of your next post providing that it hasn't been interrupted.

Zakuro Final Technique: Summit of God

"Duration: Until canceled"
> 'Duration: maintainable'
> 'Cooldown: duration + X' (X being a number for you to input)

> lower rank to S

"The user gains the ability to use all the Jutsu of their past lives with proficiency equivalent to how proficient that particular life was able to use their own moveset. They will also temporarily remember moves forgotten through the Death's Connection Jutsu."
don't really see the point in this part of the description as you can already do all of this without it. Same with: "As an added bonus, all knowledge across all past lives will also temporarily flood the user's brain, allowing for one to know things they may not know otherwise."

"The user also gains all of the positive traits of all past lives while negating all negative traits of past lives. If positive traits overlap they stack."
> add in 'up to a maximum of 3. Which ones activate are at the user's discretion."
each SC removed/added is a potential +1 tier to a stat so there is a lot of potential here.
"Puppets, contracts and weapons will not be provided to use, however."
This is a given and doesn't need to be in there.


A peculiar idea for sure, I'm interested to see what Aya will say ;) 
Make the above changes and post again in modding requests.


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