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1 S rank jutsu update on Sun May 14, 2017 3:39 pm

Lamya

Lamya



Just need to remove/replace these two jutsu because they're both incredibly weak and have been overly nerfed by past jutsu mods that they even pale in comparison to library jutsu.

Originals:

Earth Release-Yamata no Orochi's crown:

Name: Earth Release-Yamata no Orochi's crown
Canon/custom: Custom
Rank: S
Type: Defensive/supplementary
Element: Doton
Specialization: Ninjutsu/medical ninjutsu
Range: 5 meter radius
Duration: 4 posts
Cooldown: Can only be used once per battle
Description:
*must have sage-mode active to use this jutsu

After making a certain set of handseals (Ox-Ram-Snake-Boar-Tiger) The user slams their hands on the ground, creating a 5m wide, 2.5m high and 3m thick, rock dome around themselves covered by a layer of visible chakra. This dome has about four dozen (48) 1m long and 0,5m wide spikes all over its surface, these spikes can cause lacerations up to 2 inches deep and pierce up to 3 inch deep, causing moderate tissue damage and fracture bones.

The Dome itself can withstand 4 A rank jutsu, 2 S rank jutsu or 1 SS rank jutsu before it breaks.

When inside the dome, the visible chakra which is attached to the outside, can act as an amplifier for sage-mode. In other words, when using this jutsu in conjunction with sage mode, the user will be able to sense and react to everything outside of the dome, as if it wasn't even there.

Sage art-Three headed serpent god:
Name:Sage art- Three headed Serpent God
Canon/custom: Custom
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Element: Doton/suiton/fuuton
Specialty: Senjutsu/ninjutsu
Range: 50m
Duration: /
Cooldown: can only be used once per battle
Description:
After making the Tiger-Yin-Snake handseal combination, The user slams the ground with both hands, after which a massive 50m long, 3 meters thick snake rises from the ground with three heads consisting out of fuuton, doton and suiton.

It takes 1/2d of the user's chakra as its own and has all base S rank stats.

Based on which head, it can fire a choice of 3 jutsu with A rank properties, but only one of these can be fired per post.

Doton: Fires off a mass of about a dozen rocks which travel at a speed of 40m/s and can deal major bruising and broken bones. the max range of this jutsu is 40m and costs the equivalent of 1 A rank jutsu.

Suiton:Fires off a 1m wide, high-pressurized stream of water, travelling at a speed of 40m/s and capable of shredding through flesh with a depth of 3 inches and shattered bones. the max range of this jutsu is 40m and costs the equivalent of 1 A rank jutsu.

Fuuton: Fires off a pinpoint 3 inch wide stream of high pressurized air, travelling at a speed of 40m/s and capable of piercing straight through a person. the max range of this jutsu is 40m and costs the equivalent of 1 A rank jutsu.

This snake can be destroyed by 1 S rank or 2 A rank jutsu. To disperse this jutsu and regain the remaining chakra: 1 post to prepare the disperse in chich the snake can't use any of its chakra and in the next post it will disperse.

Desired revamps:

Yamata no Orochi:

Name: Yamata no Orochi-Eight Branches Technique
Canon/custom: Canon
Rank: S
Type: Offensive/defensive/supplementary
Element: none
Specialization: Ninjutsu/senjutsu
Range: Self
Duration: N/A
Cooldown: Can only be used once per battle
Description:
*must have sage-mode active to use this jutsu

After making a certain set of handseals (Ox-Ram-Snake-Boar-Tiger) Lamya's snake hair will start to grow to tremendous size of 50 m long (with the heads rising up to 30m in height) snake with eight heads and a massive spiked crown on the center of its body.

Each head of this massive snake can deliver powerful bites thanks to its long fangs that are equal to any S rank weapon, easily capable of crushing bone, puncturing entire bodies and ripping through any armor up to A rank.

Each head can only be destroyed by an A rank or higher jutsu.

Only when all but one head is destroyed can lamya choose to revert to her Original form free from all wounds she had gotten prior to the use of this jutsu and use other jutsu again (this also dispells sage mode)

If all heads are destroyed, Lamya is forcefully reverted to her Original form, but retains all previous wounds (this also dispells sage mode)


White Snake Technique-Divine Serpent's Protection:

Name:White Snake Technique-Divine Serpent's protection
Canon/custom: Custom
Rank: S
Type: Offensive/defensive
Element: none
Specialty: ninjutsu
Range: 45m radius
Duration: /
Cooldown: 6 posts
Description:

After making the Yin-rat-tiger-snake seals, Lamya simply has to slam her hands together to  have a massive dome of shimmering white scales surround her.

This jutsu can withstand up to 3 A rank jutsu, 2 S rank jutsu or 1 SS rank jutsu. In addition, if Lamya uses Sage mode while using this jutsu, she can effectively sense what is going on beyond the dome and interact with the outside through her jutsu.



Last edited by Lamya on Wed May 17, 2017 5:13 pm; edited 3 times in total


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2 Re: S rank jutsu update on Mon May 15, 2017 7:26 pm

Maigo

Maigo



Eight Branches Technique:
-When you say retains wounds, do you mean the damage done to the heads or all of the heads? Or only damage done to Lamya? In the case she isn't encompassed by the jutsu?

Divine Serpent Protection:
-Small bit, it's 3 A rank, 2 S, and 1 SS rank jutsu, otherwise good to go afterwards~ (may also want to put [Optional] next to your senjutsu and such, for clarifications sake)


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3 Re: S rank jutsu update on Mon May 15, 2017 7:30 pm

Lamya

Lamya



-It's damage received prior to the transformation, raised break effect on armor to A rank. (edited that)

-edited the breaking requirement to a withstand amount and removed senjutsu from required specs, since the description specifies its an added benefit WHEN using sage mode. (otherwise it would have the senjutsu boost which turns it into an SS rank jutsu xD)


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4 Re: S rank jutsu update on Sun May 21, 2017 10:56 pm

Maigo

Maigo



Lamya wrote:
Yamata no Orochi:

Name: Yamata no Orochi-Eight Branches Technique
Canon/custom: Canon
Rank: S
Type: Offensive/defensive/supplementary
Element: none
Specialization: Ninjutsu/senjutsu
Range: Self
Duration: N/A
Cooldown: Can only be used once per battle
Description:
*must have sage-mode active to use this jutsu

After making a certain set of handseals (Ox-Ram-Snake-Boar-Tiger) Lamya's snake hair will start to grow to tremendous size of 50 m long (with the heads rising up to 30m in height) snake with eight heads and a massive spiked crown on the center of its body.

Each head of this massive snake can deliver powerful bites thanks to its long fangs that are equal to any S rank weapon, easily capable of crushing bone, puncturing entire bodies and ripping through any armor up to A rank.

Each head can only be destroyed by an A rank or higher jutsu.

Only when all but one head is destroyed can lamya choose to revert to her Original form free from all wounds she had gotten prior to the use of this jutsu and use other jutsu again (this also dispells sage mode)

If all heads are destroyed, Lamya is forcefully reverted to her Original form, but retains all previous wounds (this also dispells sage mode)


White Snake Technique-Divine Serpent's Protection:

Name:White Snake Technique-Divine Serpent's protection
Canon/custom: Custom
Rank: S
Type: Offensive/defensive
Element: none
Specialty: ninjutsu
Range: 45m radius
Duration: /
Cooldown: 6 posts
Description:

After making the Yin-rat-tiger-snake seals, Lamya simply has to slam her hands together to  have a massive dome of shimmering white scales surround her.

This jutsu can withstand up to 3 A rank jutsu, 2 S rank jutsu or 1 SS rank jutsu. In addition, if Lamya uses Sage mode while using this jutsu, she can effectively sense what is going on beyond the dome and interact with the outside through her jutsu.


Revamps Approved~


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