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1 just a lil one to keep me entertained on Wed Dec 06, 2017 5:04 am

Fukai

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Genin
Mission name: Malefic Prophet
Mission rank: A
Objective: Quell the threat
Location: Itami Mountain
Reward: A rank jutsu
Mission Description: Receiving visions of an impending doom that threatens the village, Fukai journeys up the great mountain to attempt to stop such a fate.
Mission Details: The visions will guide Fukai up Itami Mountain. At some point, a horde of 100 spirit like C rank soldiers with the equivalent of C rank weapons and jutsu will attack Fukai. Getting to the top and conversing with a spirit will divert the crisis and signal mission complete.

Cheersies


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Buki: SS | Nin: SS | Rai: SS | Fuu: SS
D: 4 | C: 12 | B: 7 | A: 1 | S: 1

2 Re: just a lil one to keep me entertained on Fri Dec 08, 2017 6:32 pm

Destiny

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Just a few issues that need taken care of.

  • Please change the topic title so that it matches the name of the mission itself.
  • This mission is written up to seem geared towards Fukai. As per the new mission rules missions cannot be used for personal plot / personal reasons.
  • I also have an issue with this mission starting as a ‘vision’, please change this up to having come from an actual village via an actual message.
  • What do you mean by spirit like? Please explain this in further detail.


Please bump this once you’ve made the necessary changes.


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Futon: S | Katon: B

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3 Re: just a lil one to keep me entertained on Sun Dec 10, 2017 8:15 am

Fukai

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ima just cancel this then cheers


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Buki: SS | Nin: SS | Rai: SS | Fuu: SS
D: 4 | C: 12 | B: 7 | A: 1 | S: 1

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