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1 Nisshoku Clan on Sat Dec 16, 2017 2:11 pm

Itsuko

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Clan Name: Nisshoku Clan.
Location: Scattered.
Specialization: Taijutsu.
Elements: Yin–Yang Release.



Clan History: The Nisshoku is a clan created after first Great Shinobi War; founded by Daru Nisshoku a man from the land of waved with an incredible ability to amplify his physical attributes with a technique known as chakra burst by taking pain and converting it to Chakra as fuel to boost there speed among other things. As time pass the clan be came known threw out konohagakure, Iwagakure, Kirigakure, and Sunagakure; many men and woman from the clan became exceptional shinobis but known where known as heros a clan known by there ability and there speed.

Members:

    [•]Daru Nisshoku ~Dead
    [•]Okami Nisshoku ~Dead
    [•]Asuka Nisshoku ~Alive
    [•]Itsuko Nisshoku ~Alive




Kekkei Genkai Name: Chakra Burst

Kekkei Genkai Description: Upon receiving pain the users converts the sensation of pain that passes threw the nerve fibre with dopamine then amplifies the amount of dopamine the user gets and increases the users physical attributes. The attributes that are affected by the chakra burst are Speed, & Reaction Time. For the ability to take place the user just take direct damage and live threw it to get the amp. Masters of the ability are able to hold a chakra burst once he has experience several Chakra Burst within 5 difference encounter (5 topics) the user can have up to 3 chakra burst within each encounter and can only maintain two within a 2 post.

    [•]C-rank Technique boost Speed, Reaction Time, Perception by 1-tier for 3 post.

    [•]B-Rank Technique Boost Speed, Reaction Time by 2-tier for 3 post.

    [•]A-Rank Technique Boost Speed, Reaction Time by 2-tier for 2 post.

    [•]S-Rank Technique Boost Speed, Reaction Time by 3-tier for 2 post.

    [•] Starts with +1 in speed & Reaction Time.


Drawbacks: With great power comes great risks by ampiflying the users attribute at the point of death or major injury the user becomes stronger for a permanent amount of time once that boost is gone the user goes threw a sequence known as Chakra Drain once the chakra burst is done the user will immediately feel his physical attributes depleting.

    [•]C-rank Technique Decreases Speed, Reaction Time by 1-tier for 3 post.

    [•]B-Rank Technique Decreases Speed, Reaction Time by 2-tier for 3 post.

    [•]A-Rank Technique Decreases Speed, Reaction Time by 2-tier for 2 post.

    [•]S-Rank Technique Decreases Speed, Reaction Time by 3-tier for 2 post.

    [•]Clan members must take the Hesitant Element specialization without balancing it.

    [•]Starts with -1 Strength & Endurance.



Last edited by Wrath on Sun Dec 17, 2017 8:46 am; edited 1 time in total

2 Re: Nisshoku Clan on Sun Dec 17, 2017 7:59 am

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okay, you need to explain when those drawbacks occur, also, how long can they hold this for? Also, you're going to need to rank cap these abilities to ninja ranks. A Genin getting +1 rank to 3 stats is ludicrous. Finally, you need to specify being hit 'directly by a technique, you can't expect to loose a nail and get +1 rank to 3 stats.

And even then im likely going to ask you to lower your values on those buffs to maybe 2 stats, and lower the max number to +3, not +4.

You have some balancing to do here, quite a sum of it.


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3 Re: Nisshoku Clan on Sun Dec 17, 2017 8:47 am

Itsuko

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4 Re: Nisshoku Clan on Mon Dec 18, 2017 8:11 pm

Kisei

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Hiya Wrath! I'll be stepping in for Ayakashi here for this instance of moddings. <3 You're clan idea fascinate me, however here's a few tweaks so that they can better fit with the guidelines.


~ KKG

- A minor detail here, you still have perception listed for the C-rank damage buff.

- As for the ability to withhold the benefits of the damage to use them in different threads, we can't really swing that here. However feel free to edit it to be able to delay the benefits for a post or two.

-  I don't really like the idea of these buffs stacking, they are kinda strong as they are already. Instead of being able to stack them, how about the ability to activate their KKG again once the cooldown period for their debuffs end.

- Also Ayakashi mentioned moving the benefits of this 'buff when damaged' ability to scale with ninja rank. (I.E. A chuunin will only be able to receive the C-rank benefits.) But a better idea would be to allow that clan members can only access the benefits of the KKG one rank higher than they are. So that genin can at least use the C-rank variant of the kekkei genkai.

    ~ Drawbacks

- 'With great power comes great risks by amplifying the users attribute at the point of death or major injury the user becomes stronger for a permanent amount of time'
  - I think you mean temporary. Because we wouldn't allow for a stacking permanent buff.


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