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1 Mori, Kenshin Jutsu Update on Mon Feb 25, 2019 10:18 am

Kenshin

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2 Re: Mori, Kenshin Jutsu Update on Mon Mar 04, 2019 11:48 am

Fuyuko

Fuyuko

B-Rank
Kenshin wrote:
Arrow Gust:

Name: Wind Release: Arrow Gust Technique (Fuuton: Yaichijin no Jutsu)
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Element: Fuuton
Range: 5m
Specialty: Bukijutsu (Kyujutsu)
Duration: 2 posts
Cooldown: 4 posts
Description: Using the wind change in nature, the caster gathers chakra in the back of the arrow. Once the arrow is shot from the bow, the caster uses that chakra to create a gust of wind to enhance the speed of the arrow. The speed of these arrows are increased by 20m/s. After the first post it costs 5 chakra to maintain the jutsu. Up to 10 arrows can be enhanced with one use of this jutsu. This is stackable.


Name: Wind Release: Arrow Gust Technique (Fuuton: Yaichijin no Jutsu)
Origin: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Element: Futon
Range: 25m Radius
Specialty: Kyujutsu
Duration: 1 Post
Cooldown: 1 Post
Hand Seals: Bird, Tiger
Description: Using the wind change in nature, the caster gathers chakra in the back of the arrow. Once the arrow is shot from the bow, the caster uses that chakra to create a gust of wind to enhance the speed of the arrow. These speed of these arrows are increased by 40m/s. Up to 10 arrows can be enhanced with one use of this jutsu. This jutsu can stack with other speed buffs.



Arrow Redirection:

Name: Wind Release: Arrow Redirection Technique (Fuuton: Keirohenkouya)
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: 300m
Type: Supplementary
Element: Fuuton
Range: 300m
Specialty: Bukijutsu (Kyujutsu)
Duration: 1 posts
Cooldown: 5 posts (Twice per thread)
Description: By storing chakra in the arrows shot from their bows, Members of this clan can use that chakra to create a gust of wind to change the direction of arrows that have missed their target. These arrows can only be redirected once within the post, and cannot be controlled for more than a simple gust. (For instance, an arrow can be redirected to shoot northwest instead of southeast, but you can not redirect it again to shoot east.)  Each Rank is only allowed to manipulate a certain number of arrows per use. The C Rank version of this jutsu is only allowed to redirect 2 arrows at a time. with each rank this is multiplied by two. (B:4, A:8, S:16) This does not enhance the damage output of the arrow in any way. The arrows have a maximum degree they can turn per rank. The base is 45 degrees with an increase of 45 with each rank up.


Name: Wind Release: Arrow Redirection Technique (Fuuton: Keirohenkouya)
Origin: Custom
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Element: Futon
Range: 80m Radius
Specialty: Kyujutsu
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: 1 post
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: By storing chakra in the arrows shot from their bows, Members of this clan can use that chakra to create a gust of wind to change the direction of arrows that have missed their target. These arrows can only be redirected once within the post, and cannot be controlled for more than a simple gust. (For instance, an arrow can be redirected to shoot northwest instead of southeast, but you can not redirect it again to shoot east.) The user can redirect up to 15 arrows with this technique.



Bow Protection:

Name: 風遁・弓の保護 (Fūton: Yumi no hogo ~ Wind Release: Bow Protection
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D
Type: Defensive
Element: Fūton
Range: Extends 4 inches off the surface of the bow.
Specialty: Bukijutsu (Kyujutsu)
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: 3 posts
Description: By activating chakra stored in the bow that they use, the user activates a small aura of wind chakra around their bow. This effectively halves the damage done to the bow from a C-Rank attack once. This negates the damage done by a D-Rank attack once.


Name: 風遁・弓の保護 (Fūton: Yumi no hogo ~ Wind Release: Bow Protection
Origin: Custom
Rank: D
Type: Defensive
Element: Futon
Range: Extends 4 inches off the surface of the bow.
Specialty: Kyujutsu
Duration: 1 Post
Cooldown: 1 Post
Hand Seals: Bird, Ox, Hare
Description: By activating chakra stored in a bow, the user activates a small aura of wind chakra around their bow. This negates the damage done by a C-Rank attack or lower once.



Charged Arrow Strike:

Name: 雷遁・矢印の帯電ストライキ (Raiton: Yajirushi no taiden sutoraiki ~ Lightning Release: Charged Arrow Strike)
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Element: Raiton
Range: 50m meters
Specialty: Bukijutsu (Kyujutsu)
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: 3 posts
Description: Drawing an arrow, the user charges it with raiton chakra from their hand. The arrow is fired normally, and is not enhanced in speed or piercing power. Once the arrow connects with the target, the raiton chakra is released into their body, slowing them 25% for one post.


Name: 雷遁・矢印の帯電ストライキ (Raiton: Yajirushi no taiden sutoraiki ~ Lightning Release: Charged Arrow Strike)
Origin: Custom
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Element: Raiton
Range: 30m
Specialty: Kyujutsu
Duration: 1 Post
Cooldown: 1 Post
Hand Seals: Dragon
Description: Drawing an arrow, the user charges it with raiton chakra from their hand. The arrow is fired normally, and is not enhanced in speed or piercing power. Once the arrow connects with the target, the raiton chakra is released into their nerves, reducing their reaction timing by 1 tier. This costs an additional 10 chakra and leaves sunburns



Arc Restraint:

Name: Lightning Release: Arc Restraint (雷遁・弧拘束 ~ Raiton: Kokōsoku)
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Element: Raiton
Range: 10m
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: Maintainable (-5 chakra per post)
Cooldown: Duration + 3 posts
Description: The user expels raiton chakra in the form of blue/white ropes of light which shoot forth at 20m/s and wrap around the nearest part of the opponent’s body, making them unable to retreat or put distance between themselves and the user should they catch. The user can retract the rope to rapidly pull themselves and their opponent towards each other. These ropes can be cut by any chakra augmented weapon or jutsu of C rank or higher.


Name: Lightning Release: Arc Restraint (雷遁・弧拘束 ~ Raiton: Kokōsoku)
Origin: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Element: Raiton
Range: 40m
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 Post
Cooldown: 1 Post
Hand Seals: Boar, Ox, Ram, Rat
Description: The user gathers raiton chakra in the form of blue/white ropes of light which shoot forth at 40m/s and wrap around the nearest part of the opponent’s body. This makes them unable to retreat or put distance between themselves and the user. The user can retract the rope to rapidly pull themselves and their opponent towards each other at 40m/s. These ropes can be broken by a jutsu of equal rank, Strength of B rank, or a item of B rank.


First of, for all jutsu you can set the cooldown to N/A. They're currently only relevant for S-rank techniques. For all the jutsu that use "Specialty: Kyujutsu" that needs to be changed as well, since Kyujutsu is not a specialization.


Arrow Redirection
- Has too many values. It has two max values in the range and no hand seals. The effect that's happening is similar to homing and therefor counts at least as a mid effect, putting you over the values allowed.


Bow Protection
- Change imperial numbers to metric.


Charged Arrow Strike
- Wouldn't the range be self, seeing as the chakra is put into the arrow and then shot? Wherever the arrow lands is where the chakra discharges?
- Also why does this cost 10 chakra extra??
- The above thing would also solve the issue of having 2 max values. (Range and the debuff)


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3 Re: Mori, Kenshin Jutsu Update on Mon Mar 04, 2019 12:25 pm

Kenshin

Kenshin

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Fixed everything you touched on. Ready for moderation.


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4 Re: Mori, Kenshin Jutsu Update on Thu Mar 07, 2019 11:27 pm

Hika

Hika

C-Rank
Kenshin wrote:
Arrow Gust:

Name: Wind Release: Arrow Gust Technique (Fuuton: Yaichijin no Jutsu)
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Element: Fuuton
Range: 5m
Specialty: Bukijutsu (Kyujutsu)
Duration: 2 posts
Cooldown: 4 posts
Description: Using the wind change in nature, the caster gathers chakra in the back of the arrow. Once the arrow is shot from the bow, the caster uses that chakra to create a gust of wind to enhance the speed of the arrow. The speed of these arrows are increased by 20m/s. After the first post it costs 5 chakra to maintain the jutsu. Up to 10 arrows can be enhanced with one use of this jutsu. This is stackable.


Name: Wind Release: Arrow Gust Technique (Fuuton: Yaichijin no Jutsu)
Origin: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Element: Futon
Range: 25m Radius
Specialty: Kyujutsu
Duration: 1 Post
Cooldown: N/A
Hand Seals: Bird, Tiger
Description: Using the wind change in nature, the caster gathers chakra in the back of the arrow. Once the arrow is shot from the bow, the caster uses that chakra to create a gust of wind to enhance the speed of the arrow. These speed of these arrows are increased by 40m/s. Up to 10 arrows can be enhanced with one use of this jutsu. This jutsu can stack with other speed buffs.



Arrow Redirection:

Name: Wind Release: Arrow Redirection Technique (Fuuton: Keirohenkouya)
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: 300m
Type: Supplementary
Element: Fuuton
Range: 300m
Specialty: Bukijutsu (Kyujutsu)
Duration: 1 posts
Cooldown: 5 posts (Twice per thread)
Description: By storing chakra in the arrows shot from their bows, Members of this clan can use that chakra to create a gust of wind to change the direction of arrows that have missed their target. These arrows can only be redirected once within the post, and cannot be controlled for more than a simple gust. (For instance, an arrow can be redirected to shoot northwest instead of southeast, but you can not redirect it again to shoot east.)  Each Rank is only allowed to manipulate a certain number of arrows per use. The C Rank version of this jutsu is only allowed to redirect 2 arrows at a time. with each rank this is multiplied by two. (B:4, A:8, S:16) This does not enhance the damage output of the arrow in any way. The arrows have a maximum degree they can turn per rank. The base is 45 degrees with an increase of 45 with each rank up.


Name: Wind Release: Arrow Redirection Technique (Fuuton: Keirohenkouya)
Origin: Custom
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Element: Futon
Range: 80m Radius
Specialty: Kyujutsu
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: N/A
Hand Seals: Bird
Description: By storing chakra in the arrows shot from their bows, Members of this clan can use that chakra to create a gust of wind to change the direction of arrows that have missed their target. These arrows can only be redirected once within the post, and cannot be controlled for more than a simple gust. (For instance, an arrow can be redirected to shoot northwest instead of southeast, but you can not redirect it again to shoot east.) The user can redirect up to 15 arrows with this technique.



Bow Protection:

Name: 風遁・弓の保護 (Fūton: Yumi no hogo ~ Wind Release: Bow Protection
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D
Type: Defensive
Element: Fūton
Range: Extends 4 inches off the surface of the bow.
Specialty: Bukijutsu (Kyujutsu)
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: 3 posts
Description: By activating chakra stored in the bow that they use, the user activates a small aura of wind chakra around their bow. This effectively halves the damage done to the bow from a C-Rank attack once. This negates the damage done by a D-Rank attack once.


Name: 風遁・弓の保護 (Fūton: Yumi no hogo ~ Wind Release: Bow Protection
Origin: Custom
Rank: D
Type: Defensive
Element: Futon
Range: Self
Specialty: Kyujutsu
Duration: 1 Post
Cooldown: N/A
Hand Seals: Bird, Ox, Hare
Description: By activating chakra stored in a bow, the user activates a small aura of wind chakra around their bow. This negates the damage done by a C-Rank attack or lower once.



Charged Arrow Strike:

Name: 雷遁・矢印の帯電ストライキ (Raiton: Yajirushi no taiden sutoraiki ~ Lightning Release: Charged Arrow Strike)
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Element: Raiton
Range: 50m meters
Specialty: Bukijutsu (Kyujutsu)
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: 3 posts
Description: Drawing an arrow, the user charges it with raiton chakra from their hand. The arrow is fired normally, and is not enhanced in speed or piercing power. Once the arrow connects with the target, the raiton chakra is released into their body, slowing them 25% for one post.


Name: 雷遁・矢印の帯電ストライキ (Raiton: Yajirushi no taiden sutoraiki ~ Lightning Release: Charged Arrow Strike)
Origin: Custom
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Element: Raiton
Range: Self
Specialty: Kyujutsu
Duration: 1 Post
Cooldown: N/A
Hand Seals: Dragon
Description: Drawing an arrow, the user charges it with raiton chakra from their hand. The arrow is fired normally, and is not enhanced in speed or piercing power. Once the arrow connects with the target, the raiton chakra is released into their nerves, reducing their reaction timing by 1 tier. This leaves sunburns



Arc Restraint:

Name: Lightning Release: Arc Restraint (雷遁・弧拘束 ~ Raiton: Kokōsoku)
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Element: Raiton
Range: 10m
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: Maintainable (-5 chakra per post)
Cooldown: Duration + 3 posts
Description: The user expels raiton chakra in the form of blue/white ropes of light which shoot forth at 20m/s and wrap around the nearest part of the opponent’s body, making them unable to retreat or put distance between themselves and the user should they catch. The user can retract the rope to rapidly pull themselves and their opponent towards each other. These ropes can be cut by any chakra augmented weapon or jutsu of C rank or higher.


Name: Lightning Release: Arc Restraint (雷遁・弧拘束 ~ Raiton: Kokōsoku)
Origin: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Element: Raiton
Range: 40m
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 Post
Cooldown: N/A
Hand Seals: Boar, Ox, Ram, Rat
Description: The user gathers raiton chakra in the form of blue/white ropes of light which shoot forth at 40m/s and wrap around the nearest part of the opponent’s body. This makes them unable to retreat or put distance between themselves and the user. The user can retract the rope to rapidly pull themselves and their opponent towards each other at 40m/s. These ropes can be broken by a jutsu of equal rank, Strength of B rank, or a item of B rank.

Arrow Gust doesn't necessarily need the clause; jutsu buffs to m/s speed stack until they hit the global hard-cap of 200m/s. How is this a 25m radius jutsu when it activates when you shoot the arrow?

Bow Protection: How large is the aura? Specify that it protects against jutsu attacks, as well - don't want semantics arguments later on. (If it does rebuff physical assaults like weapons or taijutsu, how does it do so?)

Arrow Redirection and Charged Arrow Strike are Approved.


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5 Re: Mori, Kenshin Jutsu Update on Fri Mar 08, 2019 7:19 pm

Kenshin

Kenshin

Special Jounin
Updated and moved the approved ones.


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6 Re: Mori, Kenshin Jutsu Update on Thu Mar 21, 2019 9:03 am

Fuyuko

Fuyuko

B-Rank
Kenshin wrote:
Arrow Gust:

Name: Wind Release: Arrow Gust Technique (Fuuton: Yaichijin no Jutsu)
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Element: Fuuton
Range: 5m
Specialty: Bukijutsu (Kyujutsu)
Duration: 2 posts
Cooldown: 4 posts
Description: Using the wind change in nature, the caster gathers chakra in the back of the arrow. Once the arrow is shot from the bow, the caster uses that chakra to create a gust of wind to enhance the speed of the arrow. The speed of these arrows are increased by 20m/s. After the first post it costs 5 chakra to maintain the jutsu. Up to 10 arrows can be enhanced with one use of this jutsu. This is stackable.


Name: Wind Release: Arrow Gust Technique (Fuuton: Yaichijin no Jutsu)
Origin: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Element: Futon
Range: Self
Specialty: Kyujutsu
Duration: 1 Post
Cooldown: N/A
Hand Seals: Bird, Tiger
Description: Using the wind change in nature, the caster gathers chakra in the back of the arrow. Once the arrow is shot from the bow, the caster uses that chakra to create a gust of wind to enhance the speed of the arrow. These speed of these arrows are increased by 40m/s. Up to 10 arrows can be enhanced with one use of this jutsu.


Bow Protection:

Name: 風遁・弓の保護 (Fūton: Yumi no hogo ~ Wind Release: Bow Protection
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D
Type: Defensive
Element: Fūton
Range: Extends 4 inches off the surface of the bow.
Specialty: Bukijutsu (Kyujutsu)
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: 3 posts
Description: By activating chakra stored in the bow that they use, the user activates a small aura of wind chakra around their bow. This effectively halves the damage done to the bow from a C-Rank attack once. This negates the damage done by a D-Rank attack once.


Name: 風遁・弓の保護 (Fūton: Yumi no hogo ~ Wind Release: Bow Protection
Origin: Custom
Rank: D
Type: Defensive
Element: Futon
Range: Self
Specialty: Kyujutsu
Duration: 1 Post
Cooldown: N/A
Hand Seals: Bird, Ox, Hare
Description: By activating chakra stored in a bow, the user activates a small aura of wind chakra around their bow. This negates the damage done by a C-Rank jutsu or lower once. The aura stands 3cm off the bow.


Arc Restraint:

Name: Lightning Release: Arc Restraint (雷遁・弧拘束 ~ Raiton: Kokōsoku)
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Element: Raiton
Range: 10m
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: Maintainable (-5 chakra per post)
Cooldown: Duration + 3 posts
Description: The user expels raiton chakra in the form of blue/white ropes of light which shoot forth at 20m/s and wrap around the nearest part of the opponent’s body, making them unable to retreat or put distance between themselves and the user should they catch. The user can retract the rope to rapidly pull themselves and their opponent towards each other. These ropes can be cut by any chakra augmented weapon or jutsu of C rank or higher.


Name: Lightning Release: Arc Restraint (雷遁・弧拘束 ~ Raiton: Kokōsoku)
Origin: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Element: Raiton
Range: 40m
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 Post
Cooldown: N/A
Hand Seals: Boar, Ox, Ram, Rat
Description: The user gathers raiton chakra in the form of blue/white ropes of light which shoot forth at 40m/s and wrap around the nearest part of the opponent’s body. This makes them unable to retreat or put distance between themselves and the user. The user can retract the rope to rapidly pull themselves and their opponent towards each other at 40m/s. These ropes can be broken by a jutsu of equal rank, Strength of B rank, or a item of B rank.

Arrow Gust
- Approved.

Bow protection
- Approved.

Arc Restraint
- Approved.


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