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1Raiu Mizuki [Jutsu Revamp]  Empty Raiu Mizuki [Jutsu Revamp] on Sat Apr 20, 2019 7:49 am

Raiu Mizuki

Raiu Mizuki

Retired
OLD
A rank - Kagura Shingan:

Name: Kagura Shingan (神楽心眼 - "Mind's Eye of the Kagura")
Origin: Canon
Rank: A-rank
Type: Sensory
Element: -
Range: 350m
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: -
Hand Seals: [Half] Bird
Description: Sensory Technique: Chakra
By opening the mind's eye, the practitioner is able to find and track an individual's chakra over a vast distance of 350m. Focusing on that particular chakra, the user can perceive the target's exact position, their movement and the surrounding area they are in with great detail.

This ability grants them the capability to perceive a person's chakra flow, and discover any form of fluctuations made when a person is lying or if that person (could be the practitioner themselves), is under a genjutsu, chakra poison or other form of chakra disruption.


NEW
Rules indicate A-rank sensory can have two types, or 1 type + a max value.
max value: duration, stealth (A+, 1st sensory max), range (A+, 2nd sensory max)
A rank - Kagura Shingan:

Name: Kagura Shingan
(神楽心眼 - "Mind's Eye of the Kagura")
Origin: Canon
Rank: A-rank
Type: Sensory
Element: -
Range: 350m
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 3 posts
Cooldown: -
Hand Seals: Bird
Description: Sensory Technique: Chakra
By opening the mind's eye, the practitioner is able to find and track an individual's chakra over a vast distance of 500m. Focusing on that particular chakra, the user can perceive the target's exact position, their movement and the surrounding area they are in with great detail.

This ability grants them the capability to perceive a person's chakra flow, and discover any form of fluctuations made when a person is lying or if that person (could be the practitioner themselves), is under a genjutsu, chakra poison or other form of chakra disruption.



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2Raiu Mizuki [Jutsu Revamp]  Empty Re: Raiu Mizuki [Jutsu Revamp] on Sat Apr 20, 2019 7:52 am

Raiu Mizuki

Raiu Mizuki

Retired
Recovered:

A-rank: Closer to the Stars
C-rank: Moonlight Bow
C-rank: Starlight Katana
D-rank (Lightning Redirection)



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3Raiu Mizuki [Jutsu Revamp]  Empty Re: Raiu Mizuki [Jutsu Revamp] on Thu May 02, 2019 5:25 pm

Hika

Hika


D-rank
Raiu Mizuki wrote:OLD VERSIONS POST BELOW

Max value: 1st sensory
Mid value: half hand seals, range
A rank - Kagura Shingan:

Name: Kagura Shingan (神楽心眼 - "Mind's Eye of the Kagura")
Origin: Canon
Rank: A-rank
Type: Sensory
Element: -
Range: 350m
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: -
Hand Seals: [Half] Bird
Description: Sensory Technique: Chakra
By opening the mind's eye, the practitioner is able to find and track an individual's chakra over a vast distance of 350m. Focusing on that particular chakra, the user can perceive the target's exact position, their movement and the surrounding area they are in with great detail.

This ability grants them the capability to perceive a person's chakra flow, and discover any form of fluctuations made when a person is lying or if that person (could be the practitioner themselves), is under a genjutsu, chakra poison or other form of chakra disruption.

Max values: Paralysis, no hand seals
Max drawback: values one rank lower, +5 chakra
B rank - Paralysing Shout:

Name: Kiaido: Paralysing Shout
Origin: Custom
Rank: B-rank
Type: Supplementary
Element: -
Range: 25m
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: -
Hand Seals: -
Description: 25 chakra
Molding chakra in the lungs and vocal chords, the voice of the user becomes laced with power. By unleashing their chakra-laden kiai, a single target within 25m becomes effectively completely paralysed (25 m/s delay).

Max values: defence, no hand seals (A-rank)
A rank - Voice of Susanoo:

Name: Kiaido: Voice of Susano'o
Origin: Custom
Rank: A-rank
Type: Defensive
Element: -
Range: 80m
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: -
Hand Seals: -
Description: Unleashing a powerful kiai against a single incoming jutsu up to S-rank, the chakra-laden shout completely eradicates its opposition. While this kiaido is intended for short range use, it is capable of affecting abilities up to 80m away from the practitioner in a single second or less (80 m/s).

Max value: damage, piercing (Chidori)
B rank - Chidori:

Name: Chidori
Origin: Canon, EP Reward
Rank: B-rank
Type: Offensive
Element: Raiton | Lightning Release
Range: Touch
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: -
Hand Seals: Ox, Rabbit, Monkey
Description: The user draws all the raiton chakra in their body to the palm of their hand creating a singular point of raiton chakra between their fingers with an echoing noise that sounds like 1000 chirping birds as the lightning arcs violently from the user's hand in a potent display of chakra.

Upon impact with an opponent the Raiton chakra cuts 3" deep almost impaling the victim on the user's hand with a direct hit, cauterizing the wound and delivering minor 3rd degree electrical burns to the point of impact and severe second degree burns both internally and across the surface of the hit portion of the body (arm, torso, etc.) in long streaks.

Piercing: Should this technique come into contact with another jutsu or item of its rank and lower, it functionally ignores/bypasses the first instance of an item or jutsu in its path, effectively hewing it in two.




DISINTEGRATE, former scaling jutsu. Principle/template is the same for all new versions
Mid values: hand seals, damage
C rank - Disintegrate:

Name: Disintegrate
Origin: Custom
Rank: C-rank
Type: Offensive
Element: Raiton | Lightning Release
Range: See below
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: -
Hand Seals: [Half] Snake, Tiger
Description: "Unlimited Power!"

This jutsu is deadly efficient in its simplicity. After forming the requiring handseals, a single hand is all that is required for the user to shock a target within 25m range (25 m/s) with blue lightning tendrils. Upon contact, the lightning inflicts major first degree burn wounds. The raw power channelled through this jutsu might not always be enough to kill, but its murderous intent is sure to leave its target without doubt about its purpose.
B rank - Disintegrate:

Name: Disintegrate
Origin: Custom
Rank: B-rank
Type: Offensive
Element: Raiton | Lightning Release
Range: See below
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: -
Hand Seals: [Half] Snake, Tiger
Description: "Unlimited Power!"

This jutsu is deadly efficient in its simplicity. After forming the requiring handseals, a single hand is all that is required for the user to shock a target within 40m range (50 m/s) with blue lightning tendrils. Upon contact, the lightning inflicts major second degree burn wounds. The raw power channelled through this jutsu might not always be enough to kill, but its murderous intent is sure to leave its target without doubt about its purpose.

High value: damage
mid values: hand seals, speed
A rank -  Disintegrate:

Name: Disintegrate
Origin: Custom
Rank: A-rank
Type: Offensive
Element: Raiton | Lightning Release
Range: See below
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: -
Hand Seals: [Half] Snake, Tiger
Description: "Unlimited Power!"

This jutsu is deadly efficient in its simplicity. After forming the requiring handseals, a single hand is all that is required for the user to shock a target within 80m range (100 m/s) with blue lightning tendrils. Upon contact, the lightning inflicts minor fourth degree burn wounds. The raw power channelled through this jutsu might not always be enough to kill, but its murderous intent is sure to leave its target without doubt about its purpose.




L. REDIRECTION, former scaling jutsu. Principle/template is the same for all new versions
Max value: none specific
C rank - Lightning Redirection:

Name: Mizuki Hiden - Lightning Redirection
Origin: Custom
Rank: C-rank
Type: Offensive, Defensive
Element: Ranton | Storm Release
Range: Special
Specialty: Ninjutsu, KKG
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: -
Hand Seals: Specific movement (see description).
Description: KKG. Kinjutsu.

This jutsu returns a single offensive Raiton or Ranton ninjutsu technique of equal or lower rank back to the sender without loss of power. This jutsu doesn't copy an opponent's jutsu. Rather, it returns the raw offensive power. Damage, range, speed... remain the same as the received technique.

Mizuki willingly endures the incoming jutsu to execute this technique, meaning the damage can't be dodged or deflected. By making use of the suiton nature of her storm chakra she allows the hostile chakra to course through her body before redirecting the attack in question. She does this by extending her right index and middle finger like an antennae to attract the incoming raiton/ranton jutsu, pulling back her hand as it hits and then extending her left index and middle finger to serve as the 'exit' for the hostile energy. As the jutsu reaches the exit point, the raiton chakra of her KKG's nature refills any missing power the hostile jutsu may have suffered so as to be able to return the attack in equality.

While such mastery of her chakra is an amazing sight to behold, it comes at a high price. Allowing hostile chakra to course through the user's body doesn't happen harmlessly: the user still suffers damage but it is lowered by 1 rank.

C Rank -> D Rank
D Rank -> E Rank
B rank - Lightning Redirection:

Name: Mizuki Hiden - Lightning Redirection
Origin: Custom
Rank: B-rank
Type: Offensive, Defensive
Element: Ranton | Storm Release
Range: Special
Specialty: Ninjutsu, KKG
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: -
Hand Seals: Specific movement (see description).
Description: KKG. Kinjutsu.

This jutsu returns a single offensive Raiton or Ranton ninjutsu technique of equal or lower rank back to the sender without loss of power. This jutsu doesn't copy an opponent's jutsu. Rather, it returns the raw offensive power. Damage, range, speed... remain the same as the received technique.

Mizuki willingly endures the incoming jutsu to execute this technique, meaning the damage can't be dodged or deflected. By making use of the suiton nature of her storm chakra she allows the hostile chakra to course through her body before redirecting the attack in question. She does this by extending her right index and middle finger like an antennae to attract the incoming raiton/ranton jutsu, pulling back her hand as it hits and then extending her left index and middle finger to serve as the 'exit' for the hostile energy. As the jutsu reaches the exit point, the raiton chakra of her KKG's nature refills any missing power the hostile jutsu may have suffered so as to be able to return the attack in equality.

While such mastery of her chakra is an amazing sight to behold, it comes at a high price. Allowing hostile chakra to course through the user's body doesn't happen harmlessly: the user still suffers damage but it is lowered by 1 rank.

B Rank -> C Rank
C Rank -> D Rank
D Rank -> C Rank
A rank - Lightning Redirection:

Name: Mizuki Hiden - Lightning Redirection
Origin: Custom
Rank: A-rank
Type: Offensive, Defensive
Element: Ranton | Storm Release
Range: Special
Specialty: Ninjutsu, KKG
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: -
Hand Seals: Specific movement (see description).
Description: KKG. Kinjutsu.

This jutsu returns a single offensive Raiton or Ranton ninjutsu technique of equal or lower rank back to the sender without loss of power. This jutsu doesn't copy an opponent's jutsu. Rather, it returns the raw offensive power. Damage, range, speed... remain the same as the received technique.

Mizuki willingly endures the incoming jutsu to execute this technique, meaning the damage can't be dodged or deflected. By making use of the suiton nature of her storm chakra she allows the hostile chakra to course through her body before redirecting the attack in question. She does this by extending her right index and middle finger like an antennae to attract the incoming raiton/ranton jutsu, pulling back her hand as it hits and then extending her left index and middle finger to serve as the 'exit' for the hostile energy. As the jutsu reaches the exit point, the raiton chakra of her KKG's nature refills any missing power the hostile jutsu may have suffered so as to be able to return the attack in equality.

While such mastery of her chakra is an amazing sight to behold, it comes at a high price. Allowing hostile chakra to course through the user's body doesn't happen harmlessly: the user still suffers damage but it is lowered by 1 rank.

A Rank -> B Rank
B Rank -> C Rank
C Rank -> D Rank
D Rank -> E Rank




Polarity Shield series: all three follow the same concept/template.
Max value: defence
Mid value: duration, elemental cycle
Mid drawback: cooldown, +5 cost
C rank - Polarity Shield, Lesser:

Name: Lesser Polarity Shield
Origin: Custom
Rank: C-rank
Type: Defensive
Element: Raiton | Lightning Release
Range: Self
Specialty: KKG, Ninjutsu
Duration: 2 posts
Cooldown: 2 posts
Hand Seals: Snake
Description:
With a single Snake hand seal, the user manifests a layer of raiton chakra that continuously flows around them at a 0.5 meter distance, creating a 0.5 meter layer of defence (end point thus being at 1m). The barrier of chakra is invisible to the naked eye but emits a distinct, soft humming sound. Opponents walking through the barrier may feel a slight sense of harmless discomfort.

Being electrical energy, the raiton chakra alternates its rotation every few seconds to ensure its defensive efficiency, granting it the ability to defend against two techniques of equal rank, but none of higher rank.

The chakra nature of this technique can be changed between raiton and ranton once/per post if the user pays 5 chakra.
B rank - Polarity Shield:

Name: Polarity Shield
Origin: Custom
Rank: B-rank
Type: Defensive
Element: Raiton | Lightning Release
Range: Self
Specialty: KKG, Ninjutsu
Duration: 2 posts
Cooldown: 2 posts
Hand Seals: Snake
Description:
With a single Snake hand seal, the user manifests a layer of raiton chakra that continuously flows around them at a 0.5 meter distance, creating a 0.5 meter layer of defence (end point thus being at 1m). The barrier of chakra is invisible to the naked eye but emits a distinct, soft humming sound. Opponents walking through the barrier may feel a slight sense of harmless discomfort.

Being electrical energy, the raiton chakra alternates its rotation every few seconds to ensure its defensive efficiency, granting it the ability to defend against two techniques of equal rank, but none of higher rank.

The chakra nature of this technique can be changed between raiton and ranton once/per post if the user pays 5 chakra
A rank - Polarity Shield, Greater:

Name: Greater Polarity Shield
Origin: Custom
Rank: A-rank
Type: Defensive
Element: Raiton | Lightning Release
Range: Self
Specialty: KKG, Ninjutsu
Duration: 2 posts
Cooldown: 2 posts
Hand Seals: Snake
Description:
With a single Snake hand seal, the user manifests a layer of raiton chakra that continuously flows around them at a 0.5 meter distance, creating a 0.5 meter layer of defence (end point thus being at 1m). The barrier of chakra is invisible to the naked eye but emits a distinct, soft humming sound. Opponents walking through the barrier may feel a slight sense of harmless discomfort.

Being electrical energy, the raiton chakra alternates its rotation every few seconds to ensure its defensive efficiency, granting it the ability to defend against two techniques of equal rank, but none of higher rank.

The chakra nature of this technique can be changed between raiton and ranton once/per post if the user pays 5 chakra


Oceanic Current series: all three follow the same concept/template.
Max value: defence
Mid value: duration, elemental cycle
Mid drawback: cooldown, +5 cost
C rank - Oceanic Current, Minor:

Name: Minor Oceanic Current
Origin: Custom
Rank: C-rank
Type: Defensive
Element: Suiton | Water Release
Range: Self
Specialty: KKG, Ninjutsu
Duration: 2 posts
Cooldown: 2 posts
Hand Seals: Dog
Description:
With a single Dog hand seal, the user breathes out a brief cloud of raindrops that settles around their body. While looking as if it only wets the body, the chakra effectively grants a layer of solid suiton chakra which continuously flows around them and leaves behind a clammy, humid feeling.

Much like natural water, even a thin body of water is enough to soak a massive impact, allowing this jutsu to block two techniques of equal rank, but none of higher rank.

The chakra nature of this technique can be changed between suiton and ranton once/per post if the user pays 5 chakra
B rank - Oceanic Current:

Name: Oceanic Current
Origin: Custom
Rank: B-rank
Type: Defensive
Element: Suiton | Water Release
Range: Self
Specialty: KKG, Ninjutsu
Duration: 2 posts
Cooldown: 2 posts
Hand Seals: Dog
Description:
With a single Dog hand seal, the user breathes out a brief cloud of raindrops that settles around their body. While looking as if it only wets the body, the chakra effectively grants a layer of solid suiton chakra which continuously flows around them and leaves behind a clammy, humid feeling.

Much like natural water, even a thin body of water is enough to soak a massive impact, allowing this jutsu to block two techniques of equal rank, but none of higher rank.

The chakra nature of this technique can be changed between raiton and ranton once/per post if the user pays 5 chakra
A rank - Oceanic Current, Great:

Name: Great Oceanic Current
Origin: Custom
Rank: A-rank
Type: Defensive
Element: Suiton | Water Release
Range: Self
Specialty: KKG, Ninjutsu
Duration: 2 posts
Cooldown: 2 posts
Hand Seals: Dog
Description:
With a single Dog hand seal, the user breathes out a brief cloud of raindrops that settles around their body. While looking as if it only wets the body, the chakra effectively grants a layer of solid suiton chakra which continuously flows around them and leaves behind a clammy, humid feeling.

Much like natural water, even a thin body of water is enough to soak a massive impact, allowing this jutsu to block two techniques of equal rank, but none of higher rank.

The chakra nature of this technique can be changed between raiton and ranton once/per post if the user pays 5 chakra




Recovering:
1 B-rank (Voice of Susanoo)
1 C-rank (Voice of Susanoo)
1 D-rank (Lightning Redirection)

Mind's Eye of the Kagura is approved.

Paralyzing Shout is approved.

Kiaidō: Voice of Susano'o needs some sort of size for the voice to travel in. Is it meant to be a cone? A radius around the user?

Chidori is approved.

Disintegrate is approved at all ranks.

Lightning Redirection has the Max Value of Defensive/Offensive, and has the drawback of self-harm to keep the damage from the redirected jutsu intact. Approved.

Polarity Shield yet has cooldowns. Otherwise approved at all ranks.

Ditto for Oceanic Current.


My nature as a human somehow led me to miss these two. Cooldowns currently don't count as a drawback, and they need proper ones for their 2-post durations.


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4Raiu Mizuki [Jutsu Revamp]  Empty Re: Raiu Mizuki [Jutsu Revamp] on Thu May 02, 2019 5:58 pm

Raiu Mizuki

Raiu Mizuki

Retired
Was updated as I spoke with Fuyuko.
Voice of Susanoo update included


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5Raiu Mizuki [Jutsu Revamp]  Empty Re: Raiu Mizuki [Jutsu Revamp] on Fri May 03, 2019 12:59 am

Hika

Hika


D-rank
Raiu Mizuki wrote:OLD VERSIONS POST BELOW

Max values: defence, no hand seals (A-rank)
A rank - Voice of Susanoo:

Name: Kiaido: Voice of Susano'o
Origin: Custom
Rank: A-rank
Type: Defensive
Element: -
Range: 80m
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: -
Hand Seals: -
Description: Unleashing a powerful kiai affecting a 135° arc in front of the user, a single incoming jutsu up to S-rank gets unravelled as the chakra-laden shout completely eradicates its opposition. While this kiaido is intended for short range use, it is capable of affecting abilities up to 80m away from the practitioner in a single second or less (80 m/s).


max value: defence
mid value: duration
mid drawback: stat debuff
Trade: mid-elemental channel, +5 chakra
☯ C rank - Oceanic Current, Minor:

Name: Minor Oceanic Current
Origin: Custom
Rank: C-rank
Type: Defensive
Element: Suiton | Water Release
Range: Self
Specialty: KKG, Ninjutsu
Duration: 2 posts
Cooldown: -
Hand Seals: Dog
Description:
With a single Dog hand seal, the user breathes out a brief cloud of raindrops that settles around their body. While looking as if it only wets the body, the chakra effectively grants a layer of solid suiton chakra which continuously flows around them and leaves behind a clammy, humid feeling.

Much like natural water, even a thin body of water is enough to soak a massive impact, allowing this jutsu to block two techniques of equal rank, but none of higher rank. While this technique is active, movement is rendered more difficult; a -1 tier to speed is suffered.

The chakra nature of this technique can be changed between suiton and ranton once/per post if the user pays 5 chakra
☯ B rank - Oceanic Current:

Name: Oceanic Current
Origin: Custom
Rank: B-rank
Type: Defensive
Element: Suiton | Water Release
Range: Self
Specialty: KKG, Ninjutsu
Duration: 2 posts
Cooldown: -
Hand Seals: Dog
Description:
With a single Dog hand seal, the user breathes out a brief cloud of raindrops that settles around their body. While looking as if it only wets the body, the chakra effectively grants a layer of solid suiton chakra which continuously flows around them and leaves behind a clammy, humid feeling.

Much like natural water, even a thin body of water is enough to soak a massive impact, allowing this jutsu to block two techniques of equal rank, but none of higher rank. While this technique is active, movement is rendered more difficult; a -2 tier to speed is suffered.

The chakra nature of this technique can be changed between raiton and ranton once/per post if the user pays 5 chakra

Max value: defence, duration
Trade: mid-elemental channel, +5 chakra
☯ A rank - Oceanic Current, Great:

Name: Great Oceanic Current
Origin: Custom
Rank: A-rank
Type: Defensive
Element: Suiton | Water Release
Range: Self
Specialty: KKG, Ninjutsu
Duration: 2 posts
Cooldown: 3 posts
Hand Seals: Dog
Description:
With a single Dog hand seal, the user breathes out a brief cloud of raindrops that settles around their body. While looking as if it only wets the body, the chakra effectively grants a layer of solid suiton chakra which continuously flows around them and leaves behind a clammy, humid feeling.

Much like natural water, even a thin body of water is enough to soak a massive impact, allowing this jutsu to block two techniques of equal rank, but none of higher rank.

The chakra nature of this technique can be changed between raiton and ranton once/per post if the user pays 5 chakra

max value: defence
mid value: duration
mid drawback: stat debuff
Trade: mid-elemental channel, +5 chakra
☯ C rank - Polarity Shield, Lesser:

Name: Lesser Polarity Shield
Origin: Custom
Rank: C-rank
Type: Defensive
Element: Raiton | Lightning Release
Range: Self
Specialty: KKG, Ninjutsu
Duration: 2 posts
Cooldown: -
Hand Seals: Snake
Description:
With a single Snake hand seal, the user manifests a layer of raiton chakra that continuously flows around them at a 0.5 meter distance, creating a 0.5 meter layer of defence (end point thus being at 1m). The barrier of chakra is invisible to the naked eye but emits a distinct, soft humming sound. Opponents walking through the barrier may feel a slight sense of harmless discomfort.

Being electrical energy, the raiton chakra alternates its rotation every few seconds to ensure its defensive efficiency, granting it the ability to defend against two techniques of equal rank, but none of higher rank. While this technique is active, the humming makes sound detection more difficult; a -1 tier to perception is suffered.

The chakra nature of this technique can be changed between raiton and ranton once/per post if the user pays 5 chakra.
☯ B rank - Polarity Shield:

Name: Polarity Shield
Origin: Custom
Rank: B-rank
Type: Defensive
Element: Raiton | Lightning Release
Range: Self
Specialty: KKG, Ninjutsu
Duration: 2 posts
Cooldown: -
Hand Seals: Snake
Description:
With a single Snake hand seal, the user manifests a layer of raiton chakra that continuously flows around them at a 0.5 meter distance, creating a 0.5 meter layer of defence (end point thus being at 1m). The barrier of chakra is invisible to the naked eye but emits a distinct, soft humming sound. Opponents walking through the barrier may feel a slight sense of harmless discomfort.

Being electrical energy, the raiton chakra alternates its rotation every few seconds to ensure its defensive efficiency, granting it the ability to defend against two techniques of equal rank, but none of higher rank. While this technique is active, the humming makes sound detection more difficult; a -2 tier to perception is suffered.

The chakra nature of this technique can be changed between raiton and ranton once/per post if the user pays 5 chakra

Max value: defence, duration
Trade: mid-elemental channel, +5 chakra
☯ A rank - Polarity Shield, Greater:

Name: Greater Polarity Shield
Origin: Custom
Rank: A-rank
Type: Defensive
Element: Raiton | Lightning Release
Range: Self
Specialty: KKG, Ninjutsu
Duration: 3 posts
Cooldown: -
Hand Seals: Snake
Description:
With a single Snake hand seal, the user manifests a layer of raiton chakra that continuously flows around them at a 0.5 meter distance, creating a 0.5 meter layer of defence (end point thus being at 1m). The barrier of chakra is invisible to the naked eye but emits a distinct, soft humming sound. Opponents walking through the barrier may feel a slight sense of harmless discomfort.

Being electrical energy, the raiton chakra alternates its rotation every few seconds to ensure its defensive efficiency, granting it the ability to defend against two techniques of equal rank, but none of higher rank.

The chakra nature of this technique can be changed between raiton and ranton once/per post if the user pays 5 chakra


















Recovering:
1 B-rank (Voice of Susanoo)
1 C-rank (Voice of Susanoo)
1 D-rank (Lightning Redirection)
All jutsu here are approved!


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6Raiu Mizuki [Jutsu Revamp]  Empty Re: Raiu Mizuki [Jutsu Revamp] on Wed Jun 05, 2019 6:17 pm

Chigetsu Hōzuki

Chigetsu Hōzuki


A-rank
Raiu Mizuki wrote:OLD VERSIONS [x]


Max value: -, homing (KKG, free max)
Mid values: damage, speed
Max benefit: negative SC
Max drawback: jutsu dependency (self, 20 chakra equivalent)
☯ B rank - Laser Circus:

Name: Laser Circus
Origin: Canon
Rank: B-rank
Type: Offensive
Element: Ranton | Storm Release
Range: 40m
Specialty: KKG, Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: -
Hand Seals: Tiger, Dog, Snake, Dragon
Description:
After forming the hand seals, storm chakra is gathered around the user's hands as this technique is activated. Then the technique creates a halo of bright light around the user's hand from which the beam is shot out towards the enemy, hitting with pinpoint accuracy and easily bypassing obstacles or hostages held in close proximity of the target. Reaching 40 meters in less than a single second (65 m/s speed), the laser beam burns/pierces up to 3.5 cm deep.

If at least two shinobi use this technique at once, it also has the convenient side effect of blinding the opponent for its duration.

Storm KKG: Laser Circus is capable of autonomous homing, meaning it bypasses obstacles and hostages to reach its target without requiring line of sight or control.

Max values: multiple projectiles, duration (A+), homing (KKG, free max)
Max value: multi-target (4+)
Max drawback: +10 chakra
☯ A rank - Thunder Cloud Inner Wave:

Name: Thunder Cloud Inner Wave
Origin: Canon
Rank: A-rank
Type: Offensive
Element: Ranton | Storm Release
Range: 40m radius
Specialty: KKG, Ninjutsu
Duration: 3 post
Cooldown: -
Hand Seals: Tiger, Boar, Horse
Description:
The user generate a thick ring made of a dozen thunderclouds and electricity around them, defending themselves under the idea that 'offence is the best defence'. They can then use these clouds to fire powerful blasts of storm chakra at their enemies, effectively preventing them from getting closer. While the clouds gather to create a 15 meter radius fog effect, the bolts have an effective strike radius of a 40m in which they assault the enemies of the practitioner. These storm bolts move at 80m/s, cutting/burning for 4cm deep through unprotected flesh.

Storm KKG : While this technique is rumoured to be capable of recreating homing storm bolts, there is a price to pay. Only when the Storm user is willing to pour more chakra into it, in the form of an additional 10 chakra upon activation, the technique's slumbering power is revealed: every bolt will seek out its target, chase them within the radius, and bypass obstacles and hostages while doing so. Considering the multitude of bolts, opponents lingering within the radius of this technique may quickly find themselves trapped.

Max value: duration, +/- 1 rank interaction (A+)
Mid value: stat debuff
Mid drawback: +5 chakra
☯ A rank - Weathering the Storms:

Name: Weathering the Storms
Origin: Custom
Rank: A-rank
Type: Supplementary
Element: Ranton | Storm Release
Range: 40m radius
Specialty: KKG, Ninjutsu
Duration: 3 post
Cooldown: -
Hand Seals: Snake, Dog, Snake, Bird, Dragon
Description: Forming the hand seals of this technique, the Storm user reveals why exactly they are the masters of weather control. Unleashing the chakra after activation creates thick, dark storm clouds in the skies. Within a 40m radius, visibility gets smothered when the sun's light is being covered by dark violence. Harsh winds pick up, a heavy downpour begins and the roaring thunder resonates between bright flashes.

Raiton or ranton jutsu of the practitioner's choice counts as being one rank more effective for the purpose of interaction when activated within this technique's radius (and within its active duration, obviously).

Should the Storm user seek to increase the severity of this technique, they can do so at any time for an additional 5 chakra cost. This lowers the dexterity of all non-Storm users by 3 tiers when dealing with techniques originating from within this jutsu's radius as their techniques partially are camouflaged by the downpour of the storm. This penalty persists for the duration of this technique, falling away when the storm breaks.

Max value: stat check, duration (drawback)
Max drawback: stat check (against user)
☯ C rank - Bubblegum:

Name: Bubblegum
Origin: Custom
Rank: C-rank
Type: Supplementary
Element: Suiton | Water Release
Range: Self
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 3 post
Cooldown: -
Hand Seals: Dog
Description:
After performing the dog hand seal, the user blows a bubble of suiton chakra into existence similar in execution as blowing bubblegum into shape. The layer of chakra surrounds the user in a 3 meter radius wide bubble and moves with the user. The bubble is invisible to the naked eye, but every time it is hit by a projectile, the chakra briefly becomes visible where it was struck, revealing a continued flow of water.

The continued flow of suiton chakra prevents all non-chakra projectiles and thrown weapons, fired with a dexterity of B-0 or lower, from getting through the bubble (counts for both directions).

Mid value: stat, duration
☯ C rank - Adrenaline Senbon:

Name: Lin Hiden - Adrenaline Senbon
Origin: Custom
Rank: C-rank
Type: Supplementary
Element: Raiton | Lightning Release
Range: Touch
Specialty: Iryojutsu
Duration: 2 posts
Cooldown: -
Hand Seals: Snake
Description: [requires a senbon]
The user charges a senbon with raiton and targets either the upper body (to boost dexterity) or lower body (to boost speed) of a person - they may target their own body as well. Upon injecting the chakra within the system of the target, they are granted a +1 tier bonus to the chosen stat as the raiton briefly stimulates their physique.

The range and speed of the senbon is dependent the dexterity of the shinobi, as per Item rules.

Max value: defensive
☯ C rank - Shielding Senbon:

Name: Lin Hiden - Shielding Senbon
Origin: Custom
Rank: C-rank
Type: Defensive
Element: Raiton | Lightning Release
Range: Touch
Specialty: Iryojutsu
Duration: 1 posts
Cooldown: -
Hand Seals: Snake
Description: [requires a senbon]
The user charges a senbon with raiton chakra and throws it either at an ally or targets their own body. Upon injection of the raiton chakra into the body, the aura seemingly solidifies to create a protective barrier extending about 1 inch from the target's skin. This barrier is capable of blocking a single B-rank or lower technique.

The range and speed of the senbon is dependent the dexterity of the shinobi, as per Item rules.








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max value: duration
☯ E rank - Celestial Empowerment:

Name: Astral Technique - Celestial Empowerment
Origin: Custom
Rank: C-rank
Type: Supplementary
Element: Ranton | Storm Release
Range: Touch
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 3 posts
Cooldown: -
Hand Seals: Snake
Description: [requires a weapon]
This jutsu simply coats a held weapon with ranton chakra, converting the weapon's default damage output into an equivalent tissue damage (burning) while changing the weapon's colour to a vibrant purple light. This jutsu doesn't add or lower to the weapon's damage potential in any way, nor does it protect the coated weapon against jutsu.

Ex: If a weapon cuts 2 cm deep, this jutsu makes it burn 2 cm deep instead.

Max values: homing (KKG, free)
Mid values: damage, multiple projectiles (3)
☯ B rank - Shooting Stars:

Name: Astral Technique - Shooting Stars (Kōsei Ryū - Nagareboshi)
Origin: Custom
Rank: B-rank
Type: Offensive
Element: Ranton | Storm Release
Range: As per weapon
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: -
Hand Seals: Horse - Hare - Bird
Description: [requires a B+ rank bow]
Creating two clones with the help of the hand seals, the practitioner as well as the clones are each granted a single ranton arrow to knock upon their bow (totalling 3 projectiles). Each ranton arrow is capable of piercing 3.5 cm deep. The range and velocity of the arrows is determined by the bow's abilities.

KKG: once fired, each arrow is capable of finding its target autonomously. It will bypass obstacles and hostages while doing so.

Max values: damage (2 types), multiple projectiles (A+), homing (KKG, free)
☯ A rank - Shooting Stars:

Name: Astral Technique - Shooting Stars (Kōsei Ryū - Nagareboshi)
Origin: Custom
Rank: A-rank
Type: Offensive
Element: Ranton | Storm Release
Range: As per weapon
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: -
Hand Seals: Horse - Hare - Bird
Description: [requires an A+ rank bow]
Creating two clones with the help of the hand seals, the practitioner as well as the clones are each granted a single ranton arrow to knock upon their bow (totalling 5 projectiles). Each ranton arrow is capable of piercing 5 cm deep while inflicting major 3rd degree incineration tissue damage at the point of impact. The range and velocity of the arrows is determined by the bow's abilities.

KKG: once fired, each arrow is capable of finding its target autonomously. It will bypass obstacles and hostages while doing so.

Max values: damage
☯ C rank - Starlight Extinction:

Name: Astral Technique - Starlight Extinction
Origin: Custom
Rank: A-rank
Type: Offensive
Element: Raiton | Lightning Release
Range: As per weapon
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: -
Hand Seals: Specific action
Description:
One hand held in front, the other hand holding tight onto the arm as a support, raiton chakra is gathered into a dangerously concentrated ball of energy that fits comfortable in one hand. The practitioner unleashes this cataclysmic burst of energy into a 10m radius in less than a second (25m/s), leaving minor 2nd degree burn wounds on all those caught in the explosion.

mid value: speed, range
☯ D rank - Celestial Step, Blur of the Milky Way:

Name: Astral Technique - Celestial Step: Blur of the Milky Way
Origin: Custom
Rank: D-rank
Type: Supplementary
Element: Raiton | Lightning Release
Range: As per weapon
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: -
Hand Seals: Snake
Description:
Infusing chakra within their feet, the practitioner is granted a bonus in their movement speed equal to +20 m/s, allowing them a faster-than-normal rush spanning a 15m distance at most.

Max value: stat debuff
☯ D rank - Hazy Moon:

Name: Astral Technique - Hazy Moon (Kōsei Ryū - Oboro Tsuki)
Origin: Custom
Rank: D-rank
Type: Supplementary
Element: Suiton | Water Release
Range: As per weapon
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: -
Hand Seals: Dog
Description: [Requires a melee weapon]
An improvement in purpose from the Item Reinforcing Technique, the user coats their weapon in Suiton energy with a simple Dog hand seal. The weapon, and by extend the wielding arm of the user, gains a fog-like shroud. Parrying/dodging the user's attacks becomes harder as the fog masks the actual position of the weapon, resulting in a -1 tier perception for the opponent when dealing with that weapon.




Trading:
S-rank: Shooting Stars -> S-rank Hummingbird [approved jutsu]

Recovering:
C-rank: Moonlight Bow
C-rank: Starlight Katana
A-rank: Closer to the Stars

All: Approved!


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7Raiu Mizuki [Jutsu Revamp]  Empty Re: Raiu Mizuki [Jutsu Revamp] on Sat Jun 08, 2019 1:46 am

Chigetsu Hōzuki

Chigetsu Hōzuki


A-rank
Raiu Mizuki wrote:OLD VERSIONS: [x]
- Sparrow's Song, post below


Max value: damage
☯ C rank - Heaven Sword Style, Heaven Decree:

Name: Heaven Sword Style - Heaven Decree
Origin: Custom
Rank: C-rank
Type: Offensive
Element: Raiton | Lightning Release
Range: Touch
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: -
Hand Seals: Snake
Description:
This technique is delivered either through touch or by weapon proxy (parry/deflection) after forming the proper hand seals. The invoked raiton chakra singes the arm(s) that were struck directly (touch/pressure point) or the hand(s) which held onto the weapon that was parried/deflected. This singeing causes minor second degree burn wounds to the affected limbs.

Max values: 'defence' (shield razing)
☯ B rank - Heaven Sword Style, Heaven Event Horizon:

Name: Heaven Sword Style - Heaven Event Horizon
Origin: Custom
Rank: B-rank
Type: Supplementary
Element: Non-element
Range: Touch
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: -
Hand Seals: Specific action.
Description: [requires a katana]
Considered a 'shield razing technique', Heaven Event Horizon has only one purpose: to eliminate defensive techniques that would prevent the close quarter specialist from properly fighting its opponent. As such, Heaven Event Horizon is not capable of inflicting any kind of damage but it is capable of razing any single B-rank or lower technique (includes defensive techs).

The technique is executed with a traditional iaijutsu move. Having a katana ready for drawing, then resting a hand upon the pommel to channel chakra through it, the technique activates with one quick draw of the blade.

Max value: duration
☯ B rank - Heaven Sword Style, Heaven Reflected:

Name: Heaven Sword Style - Heaven Reflected
Origin: Custom
Rank: B-rank
Type: Supplementary
Element: Raiton | Lightning Release
Range: 10m radius
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 3 posts
Cooldown: -
Hand Seals: Tiger
Description:
Infusing the katana or hands with a short but powerful surge of (lightning) chakra, the user briefly deprives nearby opponents within a 10m radius of one of their senses (sight or sound) for three post as the chakra either emits a bright flash of light or an ear-shattering roar.

max value damage, duration
☯ A rank - Heaven Sword Style, Heaven Torn Asunder:

Name: Heaven Sword Style - Heaven Torn Asunder
Origin: Custom
Rank: A-rank
Type: Offensive
Element: Raiton or Non-element
Range: Touch
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 3 post
Cooldown: -
Hand Seals: Tiger - Horse - Seal of Confrontation
Description:
Based on the principle of thunder and lightning, this technique mimics nature's violence by bolstering the capabilities of a katana or their hands with raiton chakra. The effects of the technique last for three posts but depend upon the type of chakra that has been used upon activation.

  • Non-element: mimicking the thunder, every basic strike is followed up by an invisible echo strike that inflicts the same damage (basic, non-chakra) and applies on-hit effects. The echo strikes at the same spot as the original strike. In effect, every basic strike is doubled.
  • Raiton: mimicking the lightning, the damage output has been enhanced. This allows basic strikes to cut or slash right through flesh, muscle and bone for proper dismembering of their target.


max value: duration
☯ C rank - Heaven Sword Style, Heaven Yielding:

Name: Heaven Sword Style - Heaven Yielding
Origin: Custom
Rank: C-rank
Type: Supplementary
Element: Raiton | Lightning Release
Range: Touch
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 3 posts
Cooldown: -
Hand Seals: Snake
Description:
This technique is delivered either through touch or by weapon proxy (parry/deflection) after forming the proper hand seals. The invoked raiton chakra singes the arm(s) and hand(s) that were either struck directly (touch/pressure point) or which held onto the weapon that was parried/deflected. This singeing causes a numbing sensation within the affected limbs and renders them unable to form hand seals or hold items for three posts.

max value: duration, stats (drawback)
max drawback: stats
☯ C rank - Heaven Sword Style, Tenchi no kamae:

Name: Heaven Sword Style - Tenchi no kamae
Origin: Custom
Rank: C-rank
Type: Supplementary
Element: Non-element
Range: Self
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 3 posts
Cooldown: -
Hand Seals: Stance
Description:
"Stance of Heaven and Earth" - Based on the philosophy of the 'no-blade', the user draws back a human's natural reliance on the sight perception in favour of a balanced use of all senses, including the mystical sixth sense. This 'all-sense' allows the user to ignore perceptive handicaps (such as blindness, deafness, numbness...) to the senses they may suffer, to some degree.

This technique does not remove the effects that disable the senses. Rather, the remaining unaffected senses will work harder to substitute those perception forms that have fallen away - physically, mentally or illusory tricks, it matters not how the drawbacks to the senses were applied. It compensates perception stat penalties by granting a bonus to the other perceptions instead (up to a total of +2 tiers). All the while, the practitioner's speed stat is reduced by -2 tiers as it is much harder to move around at full speed without a full perceptive spectrum available.

Ex: If blindness is suffered, the other remaining senses function with a +2 perception bonus.
Ex: If sound causes a -4 penalty to hearing perception, the other senses compensate by functioning as if they had a +2 bonus.

max value: duration, stats
☯ A rank - Heaven Sword Style, Tenchu no kamae:

Name: Heaven Sword Style - Tenchu no kamae
Origin: Custom
Rank: A-rank
Type: Supplementary
Element: Non-element
Range: Self
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 3 posts
Cooldown: -
Hand Seals: Stance
Description:
"Stance of Heaven's Wrath" - Embodying the power to change the world with winds, thunder and lightning, the martial artist takes on a more daunting stance aimed towards devastating power. This stance grants a +4 tier increase to strength, and all 'Heaven Sword Style' techniques gain a +1 rank interaction bonus. At the same time, all their other known techniques suffer a -1 rank interaction while this stance remains active.

Affected 'Heaven Sword Style' techniques are:

  • Heaven Decree
  • Heaven Event Horizon
  • Heaven Reflected
  • Heaven Torn Asunder
  • Heaven Yielding








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☯ B rank - Suzume Seishin, Sparrow's Flight:

Name: Suzume Seishin - Sparrow's Flight
Origin: Custom
Rank: B-rank
Type: Supplementary
Element: Raiton | Lightning Release
Range: Touch
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 3 posts
Cooldown: -
Hand Seals: Bird
Description: [requires a bow]
Channelling raiton chakra into the bow of choice, knocked projectiles have their velocity boosted by +50 m/s upon being fired. Merely 'sparking' the arrow's enhanced flight speed, the arrows fired off do not gain the raiton element.

max: multiple projectiles
☯ B rank - Suzume Seishin, Sparrow's Shadow:

Name: Suzume Seishin - Sparrow's Shadow
Origin: Custom
Rank: B-rank
Type: Supplementary
Element: Non-element
Range: Touch
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 3 posts
Cooldown: -
Hand Seals: Bird
Description: [requires a bow]
Channelling chakra into the bow of choice, knocked projectiles gain two shadow clones, allowing the marksman thus to fire three arrows at a time. The shadow arrows are solid in nature similar to the kage bunshin, are perfect copies of the original and have the same damage output. Upon being cut down, blocked, hitting their mark or at the end of the post, the shadow arrows vanish without trace. This arrow replication ability persists for three posts.

max: damage, piercing (chidori, free)
☯ B rank - Suzume Seishin, Sparrow's Song:

Name: Suzume Seishin - Sparrow's Song
Origin: Custom
Rank: B-rank
Type: Supplementary
Element: Raiton | Lightning Release
Range: Touch
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: -
Hand Seals: Bird
Description: [requires a bow, requires chidori]
Channelling raiton chakra through the bow of their choosing, the enchantment grants a single knocked arrow the ability to inflict minor 3rd degree burn wounds on top of the arrow's standard damage, while the legendary properties of chidori grant it the ability to pierce through the first armour/jutsu it comes in contact with. While in flight, the arrows seems to whistle on the wind.

  • Ability: Chidori - This jutsu is able to cut through, effectively ignoring the first Jutsu / armor they come into contact with of the technique's rank or lower. This ability is only expended when piercing a technique or armor equal to the technique's rank.


max: duration, multi-target (4+), no hand seals (senjutsu)
☯ A rank - Songbird's Allure:

Name: Songbird's Allure
Origin: Custom
Rank: A-rank
Type: Supplementary
Element: Ranton | Storm Release
Range: Self | 40m radius effect
Specialty: Ninjutsu, Senjutsu [Noblesse]
Duration: 3 post
Cooldown: -
Hand Seals: Bird
Description:
Internal flow, activated with the bird hand seal. Saturating the aura with Storm chakra, the Raiu emits an enthralling auric light as if the gods themselves had blessed them with supernatural attraction. All standing within a 40m radius around the practitioner will have their attention drawn towards the origin of this 'light', drawn in like moths to a flame, and suffer the 'One-Track Mind' negative SC for three posts with the practitioner of this technique as their focus. Those who leave the radius do not have the effects removed as they persist for the full duration of this technique.

People with the 'Focus' positive SC instead lose its associated benefits, while those who already suffer from the One-Track Mind negative SC will find themselves enthralled to such a point they remain stunned for the remainder of this jutsu's duration.

Senjutsu: if the Noblesse Sage form is active, this technique may be activated without the need for hand seals.




Trading:
Recovered B-rank Voice of Susanoo for B-rank Sparrow's Song
Recovered C-rank Voice of Susanoo in compensation for forced rank-up of C-rank Heaven Reflected.

All: Approved, except...

Heaven Sword Style - Heaven Torn Asunder: The ability to channel two separate elements through a jutsu like this is considered a mid effect. Given you have two max effects and a mid effect here, you'll need to either balance this by adding a drawback or something or something else like t hat.


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8Raiu Mizuki [Jutsu Revamp]  Empty Re: Raiu Mizuki [Jutsu Revamp] on Wed Jun 12, 2019 2:46 pm

Daremo




S-rank
Raiu Mizuki wrote:
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max value damage, duration
mid value: element channel
mix drawback: cost
☯ A rank - Heaven Sword Style, Heaven Torn Asunder:

Name: Heaven Sword Style - Heaven Torn Asunder
Origin: Custom
Rank: A-rank
Type: Offensive
Element: Raiton or Non-element
Range: Touch
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 3 post
Cooldown: -
Hand Seals: Tiger - Horse - Seal of Confrontation
Description: 30 chakra activation cost
Based on the principle of thunder and lightning, this technique mimics nature's violence by bolstering the capabilities of a katana or their hands with raiton chakra. The effects of the technique last for three posts but depend upon the type of chakra that has been used upon activation.

  • Non-element: mimicking the thunder, every basic strike is followed up by an invisible echo strike that inflicts the same damage (basic, non-chakra) and applies on-hit effects. The echo strikes at the same spot as the original strike. In effect, every basic strike is doubled.
  • Raiton: mimicking the lightning, the damage output has been enhanced. This allows basic strikes to cut or slash right through flesh, muscle and bone for proper dismembering of their target.










Old Version
C Rank - Hidden Mist Technique:

Name: Water Release: Hiding in Mist Technique (水遁・霧隠れの術 ~ Suiton: Kirigakure no Jutsu)
Origin: Library
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Element: Suiton
Range: 10m radius
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 3 posts
Hand Seals: Ox - Snake - Ram
Description: Hiding in Mist is a Water Release technique that requires 1-post of preparation and higher cost (20 chakra) to cast. The user exhales a plume of dense mist from their mouth, completely covering a 10-meter radius at 10m/s. Either looking into or looking out of this mist visually impairs both the target and user alike, blocking sight from the naked eye as well as Dojutsu that detect chakra via sight.


New Version

max values: duration, stat check
max drawback: stat check (user)
☯ C Rank - Hidden Mist Technique:

Name: Water Release: Hiding in Mist Technique (水遁・霧隠れの術 ~ Suiton: Kirigakure no Jutsu)
Origin: Canon
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Element: Suiton
Range: 10m radius
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 3 posts
Hand Seals: Ox - Snake - Ram
Description: A signature technique of Kirigakure's shinobi. By forming the hand seals and exhaling, suiton chakra creates a mist bank which covers a 10m radius with a 25 m/s velocity. The mist bank effectively blocks line of sight by denying any form of visual perception that goes in, through or out the mist unless this occurs with a B-0 rank or higher perception stat. While useful as a brief form of respite or to oppose controlled homing, the downside is that the mist does not discriminate in its targets; meaning the practitioner is not exempt from requiring a solid pair of eyes to deal with this technique.
Heaven Sword Style - Heaven Torn Asunder: 1/2 approved
Water Release: Hiding in Mist Technique - Not approved. Stat check should be removed, and a drawback added.

9Raiu Mizuki [Jutsu Revamp]  Empty Re: Raiu Mizuki [Jutsu Revamp] on Thu Jun 13, 2019 6:31 pm

Chigetsu Hōzuki

Chigetsu Hōzuki


A-rank
Daremo wrote:
Raiu Mizuki wrote:
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max value damage, duration
mid value: element channel
mix drawback: cost
:yin_yang: A rank - Heaven Sword Style, Heaven Torn Asunder:

Name: Heaven Sword Style - Heaven Torn Asunder
Origin: Custom
Rank: A-rank
Type: Offensive
Element: Raiton or Non-element
Range: Touch
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 3 post
Cooldown: -
Hand Seals: Tiger - Horse - Seal of Confrontation
Description: 30 chakra activation cost
Based on the principle of thunder and lightning, this technique mimics nature's violence by bolstering the capabilities of a katana or their hands with raiton chakra. The effects of the technique last for three posts but depend upon the type of chakra that has been used upon activation.

  • Non-element: mimicking the thunder, every basic strike is followed up by an invisible echo strike that inflicts the same damage (basic, non-chakra) and applies on-hit effects. The echo strikes at the same spot as the original strike. In effect, every basic strike is doubled.
  • Raiton: mimicking the lightning, the damage output has been enhanced. This allows basic strikes to cut or slash right through flesh, muscle and bone for proper dismembering of their target.










Old Version
C Rank - Hidden Mist Technique:

Name: Water Release: Hiding in Mist Technique (水遁・霧隠れの術  ~ Suiton: Kirigakure no Jutsu)
Origin: Library
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Element: Suiton
Range: 10m radius
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 3 posts
Hand Seals: Ox - Snake - Ram
Description: Hiding in Mist is a Water Release technique that requires 1-post of preparation and higher cost (20 chakra) to cast. The user exhales a plume of dense mist from their mouth, completely covering a 10-meter radius at 10m/s. Either looking into or looking out of this mist visually impairs both the target and user alike, blocking sight from the naked eye as well as Dojutsu that detect chakra via sight.


New Version

max values: duration, stat check
max drawback: stat check (user)
:yin_yang: C Rank - Hidden Mist Technique:

Name: Water Release: Hiding in Mist Technique (水遁・霧隠れの術  ~ Suiton: Kirigakure no Jutsu)
Origin: Canon
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Element: Suiton
Range: 10m radius
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 3 posts
Hand Seals: Ox - Snake - Ram
Description: A signature technique of Kirigakure's shinobi. By forming the hand seals and exhaling, suiton chakra creates a mist bank which covers a 10m radius with a 25 m/s velocity. The mist bank effectively blocks line of sight by denying any form of visual perception that goes in, through or out the mist unless this occurs with a B-0 rank or higher perception stat. While useful as a brief form of respite or to oppose controlled homing, the downside is that the mist does not discriminate in its targets; meaning the practitioner is not exempt from requiring a solid pair of eyes to deal with this technique.
Heaven Sword Style - Heaven Torn Asunder: 1/2 approved
Water Release: Hiding in Mist Technique - Not approved. Stat check should be removed, and a drawback added.

Heaven Sword Style - Heaven Torn Asunder: Approved


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