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1Raiu Mizuki [Jutsu Revamp]  Empty Raiu Mizuki [Jutsu Revamp] on Sat Apr 20, 2019 7:49 am

Raiu Mizuki

Raiu Mizuki

Jounin
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Max value: -, homing (KKG, free max)
Mid values: damage, speed
Max benefit: negative SC
Max drawback: jutsu dependency (self, 20 chakra equivalent)
B rank - Laser Circus:

Name: Laser Circus
Origin: Canon
Rank: B-rank
Type: Offensive
Element: Ranton | Storm Release
Range: 40m
Specialty: KKG, Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: -
Hand Seals: Tiger, Dog, Snake, Dragon
Description:
After forming the hand seals, storm chakra is gathered around the user's hands as this technique is activated. Then the technique creates a halo of bright light around the user's hand from which the beam is shot out towards the enemy, hitting with pinpoint accuracy and easily bypassing obstacles or hostages held in close proximity of the target. Reaching 40 meters in less than a single second (65 m/s speed), the laser beam burns/pierces up to 3.5 cm deep.

If at least two shinobi use this technique at once, it also has the convenient side effect of blinding the opponent for its duration.

Storm KKG: Laser Circus is capable of autonomous homing, meaning it bypasses obstacles and hostages to reach its target without requiring line of sight or control.

Max values: multiple projectiles, duration (A+), homing (KKG, free max)
Max value: multi-strike (4+)
Max drawback: +10 chakra
A rank - Thunder Cloud Inner Wave:

Name: Thunder Cloud Inner Wave
Origin: Canon
Rank: A-rank
Type: Offensive
Element: Ranton | Storm Release
Range: 40m radius
Specialty: KKG, Ninjutsu
Duration: 3 post
Cooldown: -
Hand Seals: Tiger, Boar, Horse
Description:
The user generate a thick ring made of a dozen thunderclouds and electricity around them, defending themselves under the idea that 'offence is the best defence'. They can then use these clouds to fire powerful blasts of storm chakra at their enemies, effectively preventing them from getting closer. While the clouds gather to create a 15 meter radius fog effect, the bolts have an effective strike radius of a 40m in which they assault the enemies of the practitioner. These storm bolts move at 80m/s, cutting/burning for 4cm deep through unprotected flesh.

Storm KKG : While this technique is rumoured to be capable of recreating homing storm bolts, there is a price to pay. Only when the Storm user is willing to pour more chakra into it, in the form of an additional 10 chakra upon activation, the technique's slumbering power is revealed: every bolt will seek out its target, chase them within the radius, and bypass obstacles and hostages while doing so. Considering the multitude of bolts, opponents lingering within the radius of this technique may quickly find themselves trapped.


Max value: duration, +/- 1 rank interaction (A+)
Mid value: stat debuff
Mid drawback: +5 chakra
A rank - Weathering the Storms:

Name: Weathering the Storms
Origin: Custom
Rank: A-rank
Type: Supplementary
Element: Ranton | Storm Release
Range: 40m radius
Specialty: KKG, Ninjutsu
Duration: 3 post
Cooldown: -
Hand Seals: Snake, Dog, Snake, Bird, Dragon
Description: Forming the hand seals of this technique, the Storm user reveals why exactly they are the masters of weather control. Unleashing the chakra after activation creates thick, dark storm clouds in the skies. Within a 40m radius, visibility gets smothered when the sun's light is being covered by dark violence. Harsh winds pick up, a heavy downpour begins and the roaring thunder resonates between bright flashes.

Jutsu of the practitioner's choice counts as being one rank more effective for the purpose of interaction when activated within this technique's radius (and within its active duration, obviously).

Should the Storm user seek to increase the severity of this technique, they can do so at any time for an additional 5 chakra cost. This lowers the dexterity of all non-Storm users by 3 tiers when dealing with techniques originating from within this jutsu's radius as their techniques partially are camouflaged by the downpour of the storm. This penalty persists for the duration of this technique, falling away when the storm breaks.













Recovering:
1 B-rank (Voice of Susanoo)
1 C-rank (Voice of Susanoo)
1 D-rank (Lightning Redirection)



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2Raiu Mizuki [Jutsu Revamp]  Empty Re: Raiu Mizuki [Jutsu Revamp] on Sat Apr 20, 2019 7:52 am

Raiu Mizuki

Raiu Mizuki

Jounin
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B Rank - Laser Circus:

Name: Laser Circus (嵐遁・励挫鎖苛素, Ranton: Reizā Sākasu)
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Element: Ranton/Storm Release
Range: 50 meter
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: Instant
Cooldown:5 posts
Description:
After forming the hand seals (Tiger → Dog → Snake → Dragon), ranton chakra is gathered around the user's hands as this technique is activated. Then the technique creates a halo of bright light around the user's hand from which the beams are shot out towards the enemy, hitting with pinpoint accuracy and easily bypassing hostages held in close proximity. Reaching 50 meter range in a little more than a single second (30 m/s speed), the laser beams burn/pierce up to three inch deep (7,50 cm), potentially inflicting deadly wounds. The user can increase the number of beams to a dozen to pin down an enemy and is able to alter the beams' direction within a 180 degrees arc (though moving ever forward, never returning) without any trouble after being shot to take down multiple opponents.

If three shinobi or more use this technique at once, it also has the convenient side effect of blinding the opponent for two posts.
A Rank - Thunder Cloud Inner Wave:

Name: Thunder Cloud Inner Wave
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Element: Ranton/Storm Release
Range: 20m radius
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: Instant, 3 posts duration
Cooldown: 5 posts
Description:
The user generate a thick ring made of a dozen thunderclouds and electricity around him, defending himself under the idea 'offence is the best defence'. He can then use these clouds to fire powerful blasts of lightning at his enemies, and as an electrified perimeter, effectively prevent his enemies from getting close.

While the cloud is created in a 5 meter radius, all opponents within a 20m radius are assaulted by lightning strikes moving at 40m/s, effectively piercing right through unprotected bodies. While highly effective against clones, real shinobi may suffer deadly wounds as well if not being careful.

The thundercloud, being a cloud effect, requires A+ perception for every non-ranton user to even see the slightest of movement, while S+ perception may only see a blur within the clouds. Where the Byakugan suffers no hindrance, the Sharingan can only see a mass of chakra.
A Rank - Weathering the Storms:

Name: Mizuki Hiden - Weathering the Storms
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Element: Ranton
Range: 30m radius
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 post preparation, 3 posts duration
Cooldown: 10 posts
Description:
This form of weather control, a signature art of the Raiu clan, does more than just summon a storm in the area: it allows Mizuki to live the storm. After forming the handseals (Snake - Dog - Snake - Bird - Dragon) and clapping the hands together, the sound of a thunderclap is heard and the ranton chakra creates dark clouds laden with raindrops and voltaic energy (=round of preparation).

For the next three posts, rain pours down and offers an 'infinite' amount of natural water for all Suiton users in the area even though this water is chakra infused. Though everyone can use this water to fuel their own Suiton chakra, all Suiton jutsu making use of this chakra water other than those of Mizuki will have a -1 rank in effectiveness as the foreign chakra water is harder to work with.

Additionally, the air is laden with Mizuki's chakra, creating a discomforting pressure in the ears and granting Mizuki's next Raiton or Ranton jutsu a +1 in effectiveness. Naturally, this jutsu may serve as the base for other jutsu requiring the presence of stormclouds or the preparation of jutsu akin to this.

C Rank - Bubblegum:

Name: Suiton: Bubblegum
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Defensive
Element: Suiton
Range: Personal
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: Maintained, 5 chakra/post
Cooldown: Duration x1.5 posts
Description:
After performing the dog hand seal, the user blows a bubble of suiton chakra into existence similar in execution as blowing bubblegum into shape. The layer of chakra surrounds the user in a 3 meter radius wide bubble and moves with the user. The bubble is invisible to the naked eye, but every time it is hit by a weapon, the chakra briefly becomes visible where it was struck, revealing a continued flow of water.

The continued flow of suiton chakra prevents all projectiles, thrown with a strength of B rank or lower, from getting through the bubble (counts for both directions). Chakra infused projectiles follow the basic rules of clashing against defensive jutsu, but non-weapon jutsu will not be blocked by this ability.

As for perceptive matters, all but sound-based sensory jutsu will remain unaffected. Since water generally distorts sounds of all kind, the flowing suiton chakra distorts sound-based detections by imposing a -1 rank to its effectiveness but does otherwise little to prevent detection.
The sharingan will not be able to see the user as the layer of chakra completely surrounds him in a globe, but tracking the chakra signature remains otherwise not the hardest of tasks. The byakugan, known to suffer some trouble with barriers, will be able to see the user through the chakra with a -1 tier penalty to perception.

C Rank - Senbon, Adrenaline:

Name: Raiton: Adrenaline Senbon
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Element: Raiton/Lightning
Range: 40 meters
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 2 posts
Cooldown: 4 posts
Description: The user charges a senbon with raiton and throws it at either the upper or lower body of a person, or stabs themselves with it. This increases the reaction time if the senbon hits the upper body, and speed if it hits the lower body by 1 tier, (D-3 goes up to C and so forth).
The effects wear off in two posts, and decrease the speed or reaction speed of the target by 1 tier for one post after the effects wear off. The speed of the jutsu is dependent upon the speed of the senbon thrown. If the senbon goes further than 40 meters, the jutsu is considered null.
C Rank - Senbon, Shielding:

Name: Raiton: Shielding Senbon
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Element: Raiton/Lightning
Range: 20 meters
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 3 posts
Cooldown: 6 posts
Description: The user charges a senbon with Raiton chakra and throws it either at the front or back of an ally. The user can also stab them self with it in order to create a raiton barrier capable of blocking 1 B rank jutsu, 2 C rank jutsu, or 3 D rank or lower jutsu before dissipating. This jutsu has a range of twenty meters, and is considered null if it hits out further than 20 meters. The speed is reliant upon the senbon thrown. The raiton barrier extends out 1 inch further than the target's skin, and crackles with electricity.



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Raiu Mizuki wrote:OLD VERSIONS POST BELOW

Max value: 1st sensory
Mid value: half hand seals, range
A rank - Kagura Shingan:

Name: Kagura Shingan (神楽心眼 - "Mind's Eye of the Kagura")
Origin: Canon
Rank: A-rank
Type: Sensory
Element: -
Range: 350m
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: -
Hand Seals: [Half] Bird
Description: Sensory Technique: Chakra
By opening the mind's eye, the practitioner is able to find and track an individual's chakra over a vast distance of 350m. Focusing on that particular chakra, the user can perceive the target's exact position, their movement and the surrounding area they are in with great detail.

This ability grants them the capability to perceive a person's chakra flow, and discover any form of fluctuations made when a person is lying or if that person (could be the practitioner themselves), is under a genjutsu, chakra poison or other form of chakra disruption.

Max values: Paralysis, no hand seals
Max drawback: values one rank lower, +5 chakra
B rank - Paralysing Shout:

Name: Kiaido: Paralysing Shout
Origin: Custom
Rank: B-rank
Type: Supplementary
Element: -
Range: 25m
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: -
Hand Seals: -
Description: 25 chakra
Molding chakra in the lungs and vocal chords, the voice of the user becomes laced with power. By unleashing their chakra-laden kiai, a single target within 25m becomes effectively completely paralysed (25 m/s delay).

Max values: defence, no hand seals (A-rank)
A rank - Voice of Susanoo:

Name: Kiaido: Voice of Susano'o
Origin: Custom
Rank: A-rank
Type: Defensive
Element: -
Range: 80m
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: -
Hand Seals: -
Description: Unleashing a powerful kiai against a single incoming jutsu up to S-rank, the chakra-laden shout completely eradicates its opposition. While this kiaido is intended for short range use, it is capable of affecting abilities up to 80m away from the practitioner in a single second or less (80 m/s).

Max value: damage, piercing (Chidori)
B rank - Chidori:

Name: Chidori
Origin: Canon, EP Reward
Rank: B-rank
Type: Offensive
Element: Raiton | Lightning Release
Range: Touch
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: -
Hand Seals: Ox, Rabbit, Monkey
Description: The user draws all the raiton chakra in their body to the palm of their hand creating a singular point of raiton chakra between their fingers with an echoing noise that sounds like 1000 chirping birds as the lightning arcs violently from the user's hand in a potent display of chakra.

Upon impact with an opponent the Raiton chakra cuts 3" deep almost impaling the victim on the user's hand with a direct hit, cauterizing the wound and delivering minor 3rd degree electrical burns to the point of impact and severe second degree burns both internally and across the surface of the hit portion of the body (arm, torso, etc.) in long streaks.

Piercing: Should this technique come into contact with another jutsu or item of its rank and lower, it functionally ignores/bypasses the first instance of an item or jutsu in its path, effectively hewing it in two.




DISINTEGRATE, former scaling jutsu. Principle/template is the same for all new versions
Mid values: hand seals, damage
C rank - Disintegrate:

Name: Disintegrate
Origin: Custom
Rank: C-rank
Type: Offensive
Element: Raiton | Lightning Release
Range: See below
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: -
Hand Seals: [Half] Snake, Tiger
Description: "Unlimited Power!"

This jutsu is deadly efficient in its simplicity. After forming the requiring handseals, a single hand is all that is required for the user to shock a target within 25m range (25 m/s) with blue lightning tendrils. Upon contact, the lightning inflicts major first degree burn wounds. The raw power channelled through this jutsu might not always be enough to kill, but its murderous intent is sure to leave its target without doubt about its purpose.
B rank - Disintegrate:

Name: Disintegrate
Origin: Custom
Rank: B-rank
Type: Offensive
Element: Raiton | Lightning Release
Range: See below
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: -
Hand Seals: [Half] Snake, Tiger
Description: "Unlimited Power!"

This jutsu is deadly efficient in its simplicity. After forming the requiring handseals, a single hand is all that is required for the user to shock a target within 40m range (50 m/s) with blue lightning tendrils. Upon contact, the lightning inflicts major second degree burn wounds. The raw power channelled through this jutsu might not always be enough to kill, but its murderous intent is sure to leave its target without doubt about its purpose.

High value: damage
mid values: hand seals, speed
A rank -  Disintegrate:

Name: Disintegrate
Origin: Custom
Rank: A-rank
Type: Offensive
Element: Raiton | Lightning Release
Range: See below
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: -
Hand Seals: [Half] Snake, Tiger
Description: "Unlimited Power!"

This jutsu is deadly efficient in its simplicity. After forming the requiring handseals, a single hand is all that is required for the user to shock a target within 80m range (100 m/s) with blue lightning tendrils. Upon contact, the lightning inflicts minor fourth degree burn wounds. The raw power channelled through this jutsu might not always be enough to kill, but its murderous intent is sure to leave its target without doubt about its purpose.




L. REDIRECTION, former scaling jutsu. Principle/template is the same for all new versions
Max value: none specific
C rank - Lightning Redirection:

Name: Mizuki Hiden - Lightning Redirection
Origin: Custom
Rank: C-rank
Type: Offensive, Defensive
Element: Ranton | Storm Release
Range: Special
Specialty: Ninjutsu, KKG
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: -
Hand Seals: Specific movement (see description).
Description: KKG. Kinjutsu.

This jutsu returns a single offensive Raiton or Ranton ninjutsu technique of equal or lower rank back to the sender without loss of power. This jutsu doesn't copy an opponent's jutsu. Rather, it returns the raw offensive power. Damage, range, speed... remain the same as the received technique.

Mizuki willingly endures the incoming jutsu to execute this technique, meaning the damage can't be dodged or deflected. By making use of the suiton nature of her storm chakra she allows the hostile chakra to course through her body before redirecting the attack in question. She does this by extending her right index and middle finger like an antennae to attract the incoming raiton/ranton jutsu, pulling back her hand as it hits and then extending her left index and middle finger to serve as the 'exit' for the hostile energy. As the jutsu reaches the exit point, the raiton chakra of her KKG's nature refills any missing power the hostile jutsu may have suffered so as to be able to return the attack in equality.

While such mastery of her chakra is an amazing sight to behold, it comes at a high price. Allowing hostile chakra to course through the user's body doesn't happen harmlessly: the user still suffers damage but it is lowered by 1 rank.

C Rank -> D Rank
D Rank -> E Rank
B rank - Lightning Redirection:

Name: Mizuki Hiden - Lightning Redirection
Origin: Custom
Rank: B-rank
Type: Offensive, Defensive
Element: Ranton | Storm Release
Range: Special
Specialty: Ninjutsu, KKG
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: -
Hand Seals: Specific movement (see description).
Description: KKG. Kinjutsu.

This jutsu returns a single offensive Raiton or Ranton ninjutsu technique of equal or lower rank back to the sender without loss of power. This jutsu doesn't copy an opponent's jutsu. Rather, it returns the raw offensive power. Damage, range, speed... remain the same as the received technique.

Mizuki willingly endures the incoming jutsu to execute this technique, meaning the damage can't be dodged or deflected. By making use of the suiton nature of her storm chakra she allows the hostile chakra to course through her body before redirecting the attack in question. She does this by extending her right index and middle finger like an antennae to attract the incoming raiton/ranton jutsu, pulling back her hand as it hits and then extending her left index and middle finger to serve as the 'exit' for the hostile energy. As the jutsu reaches the exit point, the raiton chakra of her KKG's nature refills any missing power the hostile jutsu may have suffered so as to be able to return the attack in equality.

While such mastery of her chakra is an amazing sight to behold, it comes at a high price. Allowing hostile chakra to course through the user's body doesn't happen harmlessly: the user still suffers damage but it is lowered by 1 rank.

B Rank -> C Rank
C Rank -> D Rank
D Rank -> C Rank
A rank - Lightning Redirection:

Name: Mizuki Hiden - Lightning Redirection
Origin: Custom
Rank: A-rank
Type: Offensive, Defensive
Element: Ranton | Storm Release
Range: Special
Specialty: Ninjutsu, KKG
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: -
Hand Seals: Specific movement (see description).
Description: KKG. Kinjutsu.

This jutsu returns a single offensive Raiton or Ranton ninjutsu technique of equal or lower rank back to the sender without loss of power. This jutsu doesn't copy an opponent's jutsu. Rather, it returns the raw offensive power. Damage, range, speed... remain the same as the received technique.

Mizuki willingly endures the incoming jutsu to execute this technique, meaning the damage can't be dodged or deflected. By making use of the suiton nature of her storm chakra she allows the hostile chakra to course through her body before redirecting the attack in question. She does this by extending her right index and middle finger like an antennae to attract the incoming raiton/ranton jutsu, pulling back her hand as it hits and then extending her left index and middle finger to serve as the 'exit' for the hostile energy. As the jutsu reaches the exit point, the raiton chakra of her KKG's nature refills any missing power the hostile jutsu may have suffered so as to be able to return the attack in equality.

While such mastery of her chakra is an amazing sight to behold, it comes at a high price. Allowing hostile chakra to course through the user's body doesn't happen harmlessly: the user still suffers damage but it is lowered by 1 rank.

A Rank -> B Rank
B Rank -> C Rank
C Rank -> D Rank
D Rank -> E Rank




Polarity Shield series: all three follow the same concept/template.
Max value: defence
Mid value: duration, elemental cycle
Mid drawback: cooldown, +5 cost
C rank - Polarity Shield, Lesser:

Name: Lesser Polarity Shield
Origin: Custom
Rank: C-rank
Type: Defensive
Element: Raiton | Lightning Release
Range: Self
Specialty: KKG, Ninjutsu
Duration: 2 posts
Cooldown: 2 posts
Hand Seals: Snake
Description:
With a single Snake hand seal, the user manifests a layer of raiton chakra that continuously flows around them at a 0.5 meter distance, creating a 0.5 meter layer of defence (end point thus being at 1m). The barrier of chakra is invisible to the naked eye but emits a distinct, soft humming sound. Opponents walking through the barrier may feel a slight sense of harmless discomfort.

Being electrical energy, the raiton chakra alternates its rotation every few seconds to ensure its defensive efficiency, granting it the ability to defend against two techniques of equal rank, but none of higher rank.

The chakra nature of this technique can be changed between raiton and ranton once/per post if the user pays 5 chakra.
B rank - Polarity Shield:

Name: Polarity Shield
Origin: Custom
Rank: B-rank
Type: Defensive
Element: Raiton | Lightning Release
Range: Self
Specialty: KKG, Ninjutsu
Duration: 2 posts
Cooldown: 2 posts
Hand Seals: Snake
Description:
With a single Snake hand seal, the user manifests a layer of raiton chakra that continuously flows around them at a 0.5 meter distance, creating a 0.5 meter layer of defence (end point thus being at 1m). The barrier of chakra is invisible to the naked eye but emits a distinct, soft humming sound. Opponents walking through the barrier may feel a slight sense of harmless discomfort.

Being electrical energy, the raiton chakra alternates its rotation every few seconds to ensure its defensive efficiency, granting it the ability to defend against two techniques of equal rank, but none of higher rank.

The chakra nature of this technique can be changed between raiton and ranton once/per post if the user pays 5 chakra
A rank - Polarity Shield, Greater:

Name: Greater Polarity Shield
Origin: Custom
Rank: A-rank
Type: Defensive
Element: Raiton | Lightning Release
Range: Self
Specialty: KKG, Ninjutsu
Duration: 2 posts
Cooldown: 2 posts
Hand Seals: Snake
Description:
With a single Snake hand seal, the user manifests a layer of raiton chakra that continuously flows around them at a 0.5 meter distance, creating a 0.5 meter layer of defence (end point thus being at 1m). The barrier of chakra is invisible to the naked eye but emits a distinct, soft humming sound. Opponents walking through the barrier may feel a slight sense of harmless discomfort.

Being electrical energy, the raiton chakra alternates its rotation every few seconds to ensure its defensive efficiency, granting it the ability to defend against two techniques of equal rank, but none of higher rank.

The chakra nature of this technique can be changed between raiton and ranton once/per post if the user pays 5 chakra


Oceanic Current series: all three follow the same concept/template.
Max value: defence
Mid value: duration, elemental cycle
Mid drawback: cooldown, +5 cost
C rank - Oceanic Current, Minor:

Name: Minor Oceanic Current
Origin: Custom
Rank: C-rank
Type: Defensive
Element: Suiton | Water Release
Range: Self
Specialty: KKG, Ninjutsu
Duration: 2 posts
Cooldown: 2 posts
Hand Seals: Dog
Description:
With a single Dog hand seal, the user breathes out a brief cloud of raindrops that settles around their body. While looking as if it only wets the body, the chakra effectively grants a layer of solid suiton chakra which continuously flows around them and leaves behind a clammy, humid feeling.

Much like natural water, even a thin body of water is enough to soak a massive impact, allowing this jutsu to block two techniques of equal rank, but none of higher rank.

The chakra nature of this technique can be changed between suiton and ranton once/per post if the user pays 5 chakra
B rank - Oceanic Current:

Name: Oceanic Current
Origin: Custom
Rank: B-rank
Type: Defensive
Element: Suiton | Water Release
Range: Self
Specialty: KKG, Ninjutsu
Duration: 2 posts
Cooldown: 2 posts
Hand Seals: Dog
Description:
With a single Dog hand seal, the user breathes out a brief cloud of raindrops that settles around their body. While looking as if it only wets the body, the chakra effectively grants a layer of solid suiton chakra which continuously flows around them and leaves behind a clammy, humid feeling.

Much like natural water, even a thin body of water is enough to soak a massive impact, allowing this jutsu to block two techniques of equal rank, but none of higher rank.

The chakra nature of this technique can be changed between raiton and ranton once/per post if the user pays 5 chakra
A rank - Oceanic Current, Great:

Name: Great Oceanic Current
Origin: Custom
Rank: A-rank
Type: Defensive
Element: Suiton | Water Release
Range: Self
Specialty: KKG, Ninjutsu
Duration: 2 posts
Cooldown: 2 posts
Hand Seals: Dog
Description:
With a single Dog hand seal, the user breathes out a brief cloud of raindrops that settles around their body. While looking as if it only wets the body, the chakra effectively grants a layer of solid suiton chakra which continuously flows around them and leaves behind a clammy, humid feeling.

Much like natural water, even a thin body of water is enough to soak a massive impact, allowing this jutsu to block two techniques of equal rank, but none of higher rank.

The chakra nature of this technique can be changed between raiton and ranton once/per post if the user pays 5 chakra




Recovering:
1 B-rank (Voice of Susanoo)
1 C-rank (Voice of Susanoo)
1 D-rank (Lightning Redirection)

Mind's Eye of the Kagura is approved.

Paralyzing Shout is approved.

Kiaidō: Voice of Susano'o needs some sort of size for the voice to travel in. Is it meant to be a cone? A radius around the user?

Chidori is approved.

Disintegrate is approved at all ranks.

Lightning Redirection has the Max Value of Defensive/Offensive, and has the drawback of self-harm to keep the damage from the redirected jutsu intact. Approved.

Polarity Shield yet has cooldowns. Otherwise approved at all ranks.

Ditto for Oceanic Current.


My nature as a human somehow led me to miss these two. Cooldowns currently don't count as a drawback, and they need proper ones for their 2-post durations.


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Raiu Mizuki

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Was updated as I spoke with Fuyuko.
Voice of Susanoo update included


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C-Rank
Raiu Mizuki wrote:OLD VERSIONS POST BELOW

Max values: defence, no hand seals (A-rank)
A rank - Voice of Susanoo:

Name: Kiaido: Voice of Susano'o
Origin: Custom
Rank: A-rank
Type: Defensive
Element: -
Range: 80m
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: -
Hand Seals: -
Description: Unleashing a powerful kiai affecting a 135° arc in front of the user, a single incoming jutsu up to S-rank gets unravelled as the chakra-laden shout completely eradicates its opposition. While this kiaido is intended for short range use, it is capable of affecting abilities up to 80m away from the practitioner in a single second or less (80 m/s).


max value: defence
mid value: duration
mid drawback: stat debuff
Trade: mid-elemental channel, +5 chakra
☯ C rank - Oceanic Current, Minor:

Name: Minor Oceanic Current
Origin: Custom
Rank: C-rank
Type: Defensive
Element: Suiton | Water Release
Range: Self
Specialty: KKG, Ninjutsu
Duration: 2 posts
Cooldown: -
Hand Seals: Dog
Description:
With a single Dog hand seal, the user breathes out a brief cloud of raindrops that settles around their body. While looking as if it only wets the body, the chakra effectively grants a layer of solid suiton chakra which continuously flows around them and leaves behind a clammy, humid feeling.

Much like natural water, even a thin body of water is enough to soak a massive impact, allowing this jutsu to block two techniques of equal rank, but none of higher rank. While this technique is active, movement is rendered more difficult; a -1 tier to speed is suffered.

The chakra nature of this technique can be changed between suiton and ranton once/per post if the user pays 5 chakra
☯ B rank - Oceanic Current:

Name: Oceanic Current
Origin: Custom
Rank: B-rank
Type: Defensive
Element: Suiton | Water Release
Range: Self
Specialty: KKG, Ninjutsu
Duration: 2 posts
Cooldown: -
Hand Seals: Dog
Description:
With a single Dog hand seal, the user breathes out a brief cloud of raindrops that settles around their body. While looking as if it only wets the body, the chakra effectively grants a layer of solid suiton chakra which continuously flows around them and leaves behind a clammy, humid feeling.

Much like natural water, even a thin body of water is enough to soak a massive impact, allowing this jutsu to block two techniques of equal rank, but none of higher rank. While this technique is active, movement is rendered more difficult; a -2 tier to speed is suffered.

The chakra nature of this technique can be changed between raiton and ranton once/per post if the user pays 5 chakra

Max value: defence, duration
Trade: mid-elemental channel, +5 chakra
☯ A rank - Oceanic Current, Great:

Name: Great Oceanic Current
Origin: Custom
Rank: A-rank
Type: Defensive
Element: Suiton | Water Release
Range: Self
Specialty: KKG, Ninjutsu
Duration: 2 posts
Cooldown: 3 posts
Hand Seals: Dog
Description:
With a single Dog hand seal, the user breathes out a brief cloud of raindrops that settles around their body. While looking as if it only wets the body, the chakra effectively grants a layer of solid suiton chakra which continuously flows around them and leaves behind a clammy, humid feeling.

Much like natural water, even a thin body of water is enough to soak a massive impact, allowing this jutsu to block two techniques of equal rank, but none of higher rank.

The chakra nature of this technique can be changed between raiton and ranton once/per post if the user pays 5 chakra

max value: defence
mid value: duration
mid drawback: stat debuff
Trade: mid-elemental channel, +5 chakra
☯ C rank - Polarity Shield, Lesser:

Name: Lesser Polarity Shield
Origin: Custom
Rank: C-rank
Type: Defensive
Element: Raiton | Lightning Release
Range: Self
Specialty: KKG, Ninjutsu
Duration: 2 posts
Cooldown: -
Hand Seals: Snake
Description:
With a single Snake hand seal, the user manifests a layer of raiton chakra that continuously flows around them at a 0.5 meter distance, creating a 0.5 meter layer of defence (end point thus being at 1m). The barrier of chakra is invisible to the naked eye but emits a distinct, soft humming sound. Opponents walking through the barrier may feel a slight sense of harmless discomfort.

Being electrical energy, the raiton chakra alternates its rotation every few seconds to ensure its defensive efficiency, granting it the ability to defend against two techniques of equal rank, but none of higher rank. While this technique is active, the humming makes sound detection more difficult; a -1 tier to perception is suffered.

The chakra nature of this technique can be changed between raiton and ranton once/per post if the user pays 5 chakra.
☯ B rank - Polarity Shield:

Name: Polarity Shield
Origin: Custom
Rank: B-rank
Type: Defensive
Element: Raiton | Lightning Release
Range: Self
Specialty: KKG, Ninjutsu
Duration: 2 posts
Cooldown: -
Hand Seals: Snake
Description:
With a single Snake hand seal, the user manifests a layer of raiton chakra that continuously flows around them at a 0.5 meter distance, creating a 0.5 meter layer of defence (end point thus being at 1m). The barrier of chakra is invisible to the naked eye but emits a distinct, soft humming sound. Opponents walking through the barrier may feel a slight sense of harmless discomfort.

Being electrical energy, the raiton chakra alternates its rotation every few seconds to ensure its defensive efficiency, granting it the ability to defend against two techniques of equal rank, but none of higher rank. While this technique is active, the humming makes sound detection more difficult; a -2 tier to perception is suffered.

The chakra nature of this technique can be changed between raiton and ranton once/per post if the user pays 5 chakra

Max value: defence, duration
Trade: mid-elemental channel, +5 chakra
☯ A rank - Polarity Shield, Greater:

Name: Greater Polarity Shield
Origin: Custom
Rank: A-rank
Type: Defensive
Element: Raiton | Lightning Release
Range: Self
Specialty: KKG, Ninjutsu
Duration: 3 posts
Cooldown: -
Hand Seals: Snake
Description:
With a single Snake hand seal, the user manifests a layer of raiton chakra that continuously flows around them at a 0.5 meter distance, creating a 0.5 meter layer of defence (end point thus being at 1m). The barrier of chakra is invisible to the naked eye but emits a distinct, soft humming sound. Opponents walking through the barrier may feel a slight sense of harmless discomfort.

Being electrical energy, the raiton chakra alternates its rotation every few seconds to ensure its defensive efficiency, granting it the ability to defend against two techniques of equal rank, but none of higher rank.

The chakra nature of this technique can be changed between raiton and ranton once/per post if the user pays 5 chakra


















Recovering:
1 B-rank (Voice of Susanoo)
1 C-rank (Voice of Susanoo)
1 D-rank (Lightning Redirection)
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