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1abathor fights hina Empty abathor fights hina on Wed Apr 24, 2019 7:54 pm


Abathor ate, and drank very slowly. He often cast a look at a much younger girl that his old ass as if admiring her in a small way. Throughout this though, she kept silent waiting for this man to talk. It was a common practice for the younger generation to offer a gift of some sort when they wished for a favor, or find out information on another organization. In her case, she offered the man a drink and a meal. It was a small gesture, but it should she was willing to pay for whatever she wanted.

Finally, he wiped his mouth and looked at her again. "It is not often I get children buying me drinks. So I can only assume you are smarter, or more connected then most children your age." He looked at her raising an eye brow. The girl smiled and thought about her answer. "Both." She finally said. "Smarter, because I know what to look for, more connected because I have met and spoken with plenty of criminals. Or, at lease I know enough to know you are a shinobi."

Abathor suddenly got real stiff and real quiet. At what seemed to be an eternity, he put his hands in his lap. "Young one, I must know, how do you know this? I am a genin but I have done only one mission in my life." She let out a friendly giggle. "oh it is nice to meet some one who will humor me. But, I know you because I was the little girl who saw you sell out shinobi out to my father. Don't worry, I won't sell you out so easily. Though, unless you give me what I want, I might just sell you out to him and see if He will give me what I want. "

There was another long momentary pause. "You know how to play our game then? Then I am sure you will go and backstab us regardless of what I do?" he asked as if half interested. The little girl shook her head and pointed at his drink. "I bought this as a symbol of my honesty. Now, if you were listening," she said rather harshly. "I said if you didn't give me what I wanted, I would sell you down the river."

This got the mans interest long enough for him to pour himself another drink. "And, what sort of information may you be looking for. For I, I am nothing more then a lonely genin. What sort of information could a person like yourself not know that I would hmm?" Now many here would have been polite. "You can stick that garbage up your ass. I know you better then that. You know things that even God would be surprised about." this drew a chuckle from the elderly abathor. He nodded none the less.

"Aye, I might know something like that. but I must ask again, what is it you wish to know?" The little girl looked at him for a long time ignoring his God complex that this conversation seemed to have made. "I want you to train me." She said this while he was drinking. Anything this man had in his mouth sputtered out. He looked at her, then across the pub that seemed to have turn to his direction. Thinking quick, he bent lower toward her.

"You seek training? Why from me?" He asked quietly now, trying to suck in anything she said. "Aye, I seek for what must be found and I need a ninja to train me." He sat back in his seat and shook his head. "I’m too old.” A flashy smile came to the little girl’s lips. She took a cup and grabbed the drink she had bought for him and poured herself some. Brining it up to her lips, she said "you forget. I am a crafty one. I will complete any task I set before myself." with that, she would drain the cup and sit it back down on the table.

He looked at her clearly unsatisfied with her answer. "I suppose you are" he said to her his voice going quiet once more. "Though I guess it couldn't hurt to tell you what you would like to know. If at lease to keep my own neck safe. The best way to learn is to show you combat. Let me see if we can find someone for me to fight. It can not be that hard. Abathor knows many people to fight but he does not know many young ones. He thinks he can get Hina to fight him but he is not sure.

"Surly you have some idea of where a sparring partner is?" He nodded and thought about it for a second. He does not know where Hina lives but he knows where they met last. So he goes there and looks. He will look like a old man with a little girl trailing behind him. “Hina” he calls out every so often to people on guard duty. None of them respond and he is left feeling like a fool. He cannot be a teacher to this little girl unless he can find Hina and fight her right here and right this very minute.


2abathor fights hina Empty Re: abathor fights hina on Wed Apr 24, 2019 8:09 pm



After a long morning Hina had decided to take a breather at a tavern. She had spent all day going through the motions and selling her home and getting prepared for her next mission. She rarely had the time or the impulse to drink and today was no different. She had wracked her brain time and time again over the power and knowledge that was given to her about what doors might open when she finally went off on her own. If what she had been told was true then she wanted to develop her interest in jutsu and gain recognition for being a currently benevolent taiuser. She hoped that her subconscious wouldn’t have other intentions and she thought about whether or not someone in Konoha would help her develop her relationship with her subconscious. The young woman groaned and slouched over the countertop of a bar wishing she was old enough to enjoy drinking.

As she sat there, she wondered when she’d finally become renowned as a shinobi. She supposed she had to actually do something important with her powers which wasn’t something she’d done yet. Genjutsu had a sort of nasty air about it and nobody seemed to want to talk about it. She had no idea what it would be like in the future but she sincerely hoped that it would be more accepting of the chakra or related stuff.

She then thought about what she was leaving behind if she was going to become a chuunin. She had taken music lessons but her actual learning had been quite sparse since she always blew off her lessons to experiment on genjutsu. She had met a couple of colorful people that helped with her crafting ambitions but then again they had only met recently. Hina had yet to display any signs of being able to use her chakra or Aeva’s mark with any true proficiency and she was falling into a rut. She had been told by many that her time would come soon enough but it was not coming fast enough. Hina needed a change and a place to start over.

Her mom had once told her that true taijutsu goers would be able to feel the music in everything including the heat of battle. So far though she had not felt music anywhere except when she used the chakra and even then it wasn’t all the time. A half hour passed during which Hina drank slowly from her nonalcoholic beverage. It was much too much for her to finish by herself and she wondered why people even ordered this much. Maybe it was meant to be shared with another. With a glance to both her sides Hina spotted a hooded person sitting nearby without a drink so she scooched over to sit beside her or her.

“Hello,” she would open with, “I seem to have ordered too much juice. Would you care for some?”

The person turned to the shinobi and it was now apparent that this was a woman. Tears were welling up in her eyes and it was as if she wanted to burst out crying at that very moment. She shook her head no then said, “I’m much too distraught to drink right now. Can’t you see that?” Hina wasn’t sure what to say. she assumed if she was alright enough to make it here that she would be okay to drink. she poured a glass out for her regardless then introduced herself, “I’m Hina. What’s got you down miss?”

The woman finished her ale in one go, much to Hina’s confusion, then replied, “oh this and that. The man I fancied found another and they shut down the shop I work at. I’ll be alright but I just have to let these feelings out. Thank you for the drink,” she would say as she held up her glass for more. Hina obliged and poured more ale into the cup. That was when she started to feel something. she felt sad, except she wasn’t sad herself. she was quite happy to be here, in fact. These emotions were so conflicting that she herself wasn’t sure what was going on.

Hina made contact with the woman after pouring her drink and felt like she was in another world. Her ears started to twitch and every sob of the woman sounded beautiful to Hina. She picked up the rhythm and was mesmerized. Even the woman’s words sounded musical in Hina’s ears. She felt like notes consisting of many different colors was pulsating as the sounds moved on their own accord. Hina wasn’t exactly sure what she was experiencing, but this had to be some form of chakra. Just by looking into the woman’s eyes she could hear music from every part of this woman. Hina was thinking that the only explanation of this was genjutsu. She knew she had heard the music in everyday life before but this was something on a next level. Even when she stopped focusing on it it was impossible to ignore.

Hina promptly left the tavern and went back to the streets. She walked down the street and even her footsteps produced a steady rhythm that her ears couldn’t stop focusing on. Her footsteps clashed with the footsteps of everyone else. She heard so many rhythms that finally the beat within her stopped. She sighed with relief and pressed herself against a wall. She didn’t feel like her chakra was gone but this whole experience was mentally taxing. She didn't want to find out who was casting the genjutsu and at this point she didn't care. Deep breaths were the only things keeping Hina from letting her mind wander back to the footsteps. She thought that she just had to keep a mental hold of herself and she would be alright. Pretty soon she heard the calling of a somewhat familiar voice. Was that Abathor?

“Abathor! What brings you here? Is that your granddaughter?” It was nice to meet abathor under normal conditions instead of what had transpired before. They had met in some weirdo village one time and then another time when he had chased a criminal. It was nice to finally be in a spot where they could just relax.

WC: 1044

3abathor fights hina Empty Re: abathor fights hina on Tue Apr 30, 2019 5:19 pm


“Hina I need you to fight me so I can demonstrate my fighting ability to this little girl. She is not my granddaughter. She is a potential student of mine.”

Abathor thinks about the notion of having a granddaughter. He is old but that did not mean that he had settled down. He had no kids or grandkids. He goes to a nearby training field and hopes Hina will follow. If she does not then he will fight someone else.

Since that fatal day, when he had lost his companions, Abathor was no longer the same man. And it was only to say of the situation in which he was so much, mentally he had lost in consideration for his own being. Beside this fact, a thing had a little more disturbed the one we thought was unshakable like a reed. So to speak, the harm done by his mortal enemy and his band had hit him hard, right in the heart.

But even more, it was the loss of his loved ones that had almost completed the old man. For him, this was a sign of disobedience, of an act of treachery, or worse of an abandonment resulting from a sudden loss of confidence. It was his soul that was flying in shine, she who resounded. He even swore to hear a thousand and one voices telling him that he was no longer worthy of living a happy life. For a ninja to lose his soul was the same as to lose his dignity, his fighting spirit, his life.

And the height in all this is that Abathor does not even have the courage to be a teacher to this little girl. This is his chance to show off what he can do and get back into the swing of things.

This training place is known only from its bears. No need to worry because the bears were not dangerous unless you saw their cubs with them. The bears know to avoid this area or they usually get hit by kunai. He put himself in this forest training ground under this tree and looked to see if Hina came too. Torso bare and scarred he shivers from the wind. The world as he knew it, the history of this world. In the beginning the men were only farmers, and were already divided, between different ethnic and cultural groups. He carries his linage with him at all times.

When Abathor finds a partner to fight he tells his tiny student

“watch and learn. Then tell me if you really want to learn from me. I am not the best and I still do not understand why you want me of all people. Let your eyes see what they are asking for.”

Pieces of Abathor are conflicted. He wants to lose and win at the same time. He wants to also go home and sleep because he is already tired. Why did he of all people have to be selected by this girl as a mentor.


4abathor fights hina Empty Re: abathor fights hina on Tue Apr 30, 2019 5:54 pm



The first thing Hina thought when she saw Abathor and the little girl was that they were related. Apparently that was not the case. Hina sniffed and approached with her hands resting on her flat stomach. She couldn’t help but feel a little jealous that he was spending time with another girl, even though Hina didn’t have an ounce of desire for the old man. Abathor announced that he needed a sparring partner so Hina shrugged and said she would be down for that. She had seen Abathor in action before so she knew that they were probably around the same level. He was a genin after all, an old one at that. If she couldn’t beat an old man past his prime, then who else could she beat? As soon as Hina was within speaking distance of the little girl, Hina mumbled but said nothing more. Just enough to know Hina was near and to know who was the boss. Hina looked around and sighed loudly before turning toward the training grounds with a forced smile.

“Oh joy, the bear training grounds. That’s exactly where I want to fight.” It was sarcasm. She knew it was probably safe, but that didn’t mean it was impossible to run into some cubs and get your butt chased through the forest. Out of all the places to go, why here she wondered.

They started walking through the area, before long, the elderly man started definitively guiding the way. The trip was slow and relaxing, so they didn't have to do anything except enjoy the journey. And that's was all Hina did. The thought of being attacked by bears still left her feeling sick though, after a while that is, and like before when traveling to different minor nations, Hina was wondering what she would do if she got lost. Hina spent most of the time looking in the trees, imagining what it would be like when she finally got that promotion and would have some genin underneath her.

After an hour of wandering, the training grounds came into view, and Hina prepared myself for the next part of her commitment until Hina was finally home. Hina paced myself back and forth until she was able to stand on firm ground and listened to Abathor telling the little girl to watch closely. Hina leaped into the air a couple of times to get her blood flowing, not bothering to do any practice punches for now. She landed smoothly on the ground before walking away from Abathor to create some space.

Hina wasn’t scared, but tired she supposed. All she really wanted was to see whether Abathor had any tricks up his sleeves. He had never done anything with jutsu which reminded him a lot of herself. She also rarely used jutsu. It could only mean that he meant to fight her with his fists, and she was game for that any day.

WC: 489
Total: 1533

5abathor fights hina Empty Re: abathor fights hina on Tue Apr 30, 2019 6:31 pm


Abathor gives no warning when he decides to start the big fight. One second he is looking at the girl and smiling. The next second he runs at Hina and aims a blow right at her stomach. He performs handseals but they are for show he does this to hope Hina wastes time dodging.

The use of the chakra was tolerated because it was part of everyday life. Abathor does not care for chakra and has learned to fake it to make it. He thought chakra should consist only of an extension of its body or an improvement of a strike. Then time passed and he saw people be corrupted by the power of chakra and become uncontrollable. This is why the following question frequently came up: Was he still a ninja? Or had he become a hybrid being marrying perfectly the culture of what he thought things should be like and what he knows the village wants him to be like?

Abathor circles around Hina faster than an old man should be allowed to move. He ends with a leg sweep that he intends to drop her to the floor with. This is not a good idea and Abathor pushes his old body too far. He drops to the ground as well and takes a few moments to get back up. He does not expect to win against a young one like Hina but he does not want to win nececesarily he just wants to prove to the little girl that he still has what it takes to teach her. He does not know why he keeps thinking about wanting to impress her.

He wants to prove himself the reality was quite different, the release of the full potential of his nature had affected his body to the point that he nearly loses his will to fight. He knew it well and wish before starting that he is no great fighter. Thus he opted for a deep return to the sources, under the constraint of an error that proved to be fatal, it was necessary to admit that he can only do so much.

He chooses this remote place to hide himself from people that can look at him and make fun of him for trying os hard even though he is so old. The long days he spends in meditation were intense, to see insurmountable, his muscles tended and his skin cracked, during the first of this long training he wanted to die every time.

So much suffering for results that was not intended. Moreover, after a common agreement with those who had welcomed in these lands, he could only feed on the success of his missions. It was a nightmare, like running barefoot on barbed wire. But he did not want to give up the task as difficult as it was.

6abathor fights hina Empty Re: abathor fights hina on Tue Apr 30, 2019 7:10 pm



Abathor’s speed had been surprising for sure. She had gone boar hunting with him on a mission so she had seen how fast he could move but it still surprised her. The distance was closed before she could properly slip into her boxer’s stance and she just barely clenched her stomach muscles before the blow connected. She reached forward and tried to grab onto Abathor’s arm because he didn’t seem to have a follow up attack planned. But before she could actually grab hold, he pulled his arms away and started performing hand seals. Hina’s eyes went wide and she jumped backwards, intending to dodge some kind of jutsu. Nothing came at her that she could see and she could only assume she was in a genjutsu. She shouted “KAI” and tried to dispel a genjutsu that wasn’t there. What in the world had Abathor done? Had he not even used a jutsu?

Hina would be left wondering while Abathor circled around her and attacked her legs, her most vulnerable and undefended body parts. Hina fell, but was able to adjust herself before connecting with the ground. She landed right onto her palms and immediately rolled forwards and stood up. Hina turned to see that Abathor was laying on the ground and looking worse for wear. She looked at the little girl for a moment and then made her move. She ran forwards and tried punting the elderly genin right in the stomach to pay him back for the punch he had given her. This is what he wanted right? A real fight? Well if she was an enemy she would have been able to go straight for the head with a weapon. Luckily she wasn’t a murderous jerk and was happy to settle for the sucker blow, assuming Abathor didn’t have any tricks up his sleeve. If her attack had been successful she would back off and at least allow him to get up. There was no point in over doing it.

“You okay,” Hina asked Abathor as she backed up, “we can stop at any time, I hope you know that.” Hina wondered if his pride would even let him stop. Surely this wasn’t the first time that his age had gotten the better of him and he probably had ways of making up for it. She recalled how well he had handled the boar mission and that he had the tactics to match his age. There was a very good chance that Hina wouldn’t be walking away from this as a winner. She was glad that they were in the middle of an empty training grounds though. Whether she ended up beating up an old man or getting beaten by one, she didn’t think she wanted anyone to witness, the little girl excluded. What was her deal anyways? Did she just get pleasure out of watching old people fight? Hina honestly couldn’t even remember why she was here, only that she wasn’t related to Abathor.

WC: 498
Total: 2031

7abathor fights hina Empty Re: abathor fights hina on Wed May 01, 2019 5:43 pm


abathor gets kicked in the belly and howls in pain. He rolls over several times and stops only to cough up green spit. He had no tricks or fancy moves he just felt defeated. He stands up and looks at hina even though he knows he shouldn’t fight more he still decides to. He runs at hina as if he did not even get injured. It only made him hurt more but he was determined to impress this little girl.

“you will not defeat me so easily”

abathor runs past Hina and throws a rock at her after he passes. He wishes at this very moment to be able to call lightning from the sky to end the fight yet he stll knows no jutsus.

abathor picks up more rocks and throws them faster and faster out of desperation. He cannot risk having Hina hit him that hard again.

Despite the fatigue, he pushed his body, as he had learned in recent months, beyond its mere limits. It took him nearly a minute to run out of things to throw and after that he would be left weaponless and unable to walk properly. No, if he stopped, even for a second, he will get hit. He looks for more rocks frantically. He wishes for a spring brreze to cool him off. He decides to take off and run for a little.

Moving from tree to tree, his eyes revealed nothing more than a simple survival instinct. His pupils were moving at breakneck speed, searching eyes for possible hiding spots in the plentiful brush of the area while he was on the run from hina’s counter attack. His clothes got torn on some thorns. And he did not even care. His ragged clothes, under which his skin was severely tested, marked with a hundred scars, contracted muscles, bristles, all contributed to make him nothing more than a simple animal.
His habits bring him south-east, to a place he knew but he doubts he can get far. He remembers that this area has many bears so it is best to not run off too far. He noticies the little girl runs after him too, wondering why he is fleeng. He wants to tell her that this is part of fighting. Finding a hiding spot is important to counter attack. She will get in danger of bears abathor fears.

He stops running quickly and does a double take. He runs to the girl as a bear starts getting closer. He does not care about the fight he just wants to save her. He turns back and picks up the girl and climbs a tree and jumps from tree to tree to get out of danger.

“are you okay little one”

Abathor would be very sad if something had happened to her when he was not looking.


8abathor fights hina Empty Re: abathor fights hina on Wed May 01, 2019 5:51 pm



Hina wasn’t surprised by Abathor’s persistence. He had stood up to continue the fight but instead of straight up attacking her, he had ran past her and thrown a rock at her. There was nothing special about the attack and Hina caught the rock with ease. She would have thrown the rock right back at Abathor if it weren’t for the fact that he was definitely done fighting. He seemed more interested in running than continuing, although Hina supposed he was just trying to be tactical. She didn’t have much choice other than to follow, although she did feel wary of leaving the little girl behind. She took off after Abathor and she was able to notice that the little girl was following. That was good, now she wouldn’t be all on her own. Then, Abathor seemed to notice something Hina hadn’t. A bear was coming dangerously close to the girl. Hina didn’t know why Abathor turned back around and passed by her again, but she soon saw what he was trying to do.

Hina had no choice but to spring into action and give the bear a good kick, narrowly dodging its retaliation and sprinting up the tree again. The bear was mad now and started climbing but it was a lot easier from Hina to jump to another tree than it was for the bear to act again. It soon lost interest and Hina was able to chase after Abathor and the little girl again. “Stop running you old fart,” Hina shouted after him, “it’s safe now! We don’t have to fight anymore!” Honestly, why was he running when he was the one that wanted to fight? Did he not think she would know when to stop a fight? She would wait for them to stop and then take a seat to catch her breath. What was going on with those two?

WC: 314
Total: 2345

9abathor fights hina Empty Re: abathor fights hina on Wed May 01, 2019 5:53 pm


Abathor is happy Hina is done fighting. It lets him rest. Abathor looks at the little girl to see if she was satisfied. Her eyes were being wetted by her sadness. What was making her sad? Girls were too confusing for abathor even in his old age. He had given her what she wanted so why didn’t she look happy?

That moment, he feels out of breath, it was a good fight since he was there with only company, birds and fearful foxes. He could feel his pulse slowing down and his breathing getting heavier. A few strands of his damp hair stuck to his clothes. He resumes his position, like a lotus trying to hatch, but the heavy load that pounded his shoulders was too heavy.

He lost interest in the fight and dropped to his knees. He tried to feel, to perceive the different beings that constituted the fauna of this wonderful place. Minutes passed, a bird, a squirrel then ... Total nothingness, scrambled, flouted? He could not hear them. Sometimes his mind wandered and he suffered hallucinations. The hunger tormented him and his head was spinning unbearable, his thin body was so horrible that the gurgling sound of his stomach was almost frightening.

And the results came to make their effects. He could thus guess which of the two girls was coming to him, what was the sugar content of one of the fruits he ate and then determine a balanced dish based on root and what the forest could offer him. The little girl gave him the food and abathor wonders if she is happy.

“Do you still want me to teach you”

“Yes. You are perfect”

Abathor completely ignores hina now. He is so happy for reasons he cannot explain. His body seemed light. Like new armor.

“What do you want to learn”

“I want to learn summons.”

Abathor is shocked because he does not know how to summon. He can only do punches and kicks and strategy. He went through all this effort only to not be able to help this girl.

“Hina do you know how to summon”

Abathor wants the little girl to be happy. Even if he is not the teacher he thinks the girl has put him through enough trouble that she needs to be trained for his own mental health.


10abathor fights hina Empty Re: abathor fights hina on Wed May 01, 2019 5:57 pm



Hina noticed that Abathor seemed to be paying her no attention for the most part and was carrying a conversation with the little girl. Hina was sure there was some emotional development happening over there, but for the life of her she couldn’t feel like she was just a third wheel here. From what she could hear, Abathor had done all of this so that the little girl would see him worthy as a teacher. She didn’t see how sparring Hina and losing had ended up with the little girl being impressed, but what did Hina know. Their connection was probably too special for Hina to understand and she had learned a thing or two from the fight so she couldn’t call this a total waste of time. Performing handseals to pretend like you were using a jutsu. That was classic.

Hina walked up to the pair and knelt down so that she could talk to the little girl. “What is it you want to be trained by a shinobi for? Surely there’s a reason that you don’t want to join the academy.” Hina had half a mind to tell the girl not to push Abathor in his old age, but she refrained from doing so. “I want to become a summoner. The idea about summoning up your pets seems like a good idea to. One day I'll have an animal companion. Wild wolves or wild cats, I think, yes. What you think would be best Abathor? Cats, or wolves?” Hina couldn’t believe that this pipsqueak was talking about summoning. Summoning had nothing to do with taijutsu so why had they just had a taijutsu fight? Having pets and summoning wasn’t that unheard of for Genin, but it definitely wasn’t commonplace. Not many people had the time and patience to raise a pet properly let alone make a lifelong commitment to a summoning family.

“The first thing you have to know about summoning is that it uses Fuinjutsu,” Hina said, recalling her academy lectures, “it’s a specialty all in its own. Do you know anything about Fuinjutsu? What about Ninjutsu? You need to be good at that too!” Hina formed some seals and slammed her hands into the earth. She didn’t know any jutsu but she focused her chakra into the earth to make it move. The earth started to move and she ended up standing on top of a misshapen pillar of earth.

“I really need to work on smoothening the earth out when I get it to do this next time.” Brushing herself off a bit, Hina took note and stumbled off of her earth pillar as it collapsed. It wasn’t anywhere near sturdy enough to support her weight. This could be a good opportunity to build on her own skills. Hina's head hurt now though. She would let the little girl and abathor talk while she was on the lookout for more ways to improve that pillar she had just made, mostly by accident. She tried messing around with her chakra and the earth again but she accidentally triggered a little sling trap that had propelled a stone at her head and smacked her. Had she actually been facing the trap, this wouldn't have been a problem thanks to her head protector, but instead it'd hit the back of her head. What was a trap doing in the middle of this bear infested training area?

WC: 568
Total: 2913

11abathor fights hina Empty Re: abathor fights hina on Wed May 01, 2019 6:16 pm


The ground ruptured around abathor and the little girl as rock shot out into the air. The tired man, no longer kept captive by the little girl also shot out, dodging out of the way. He does not think hina did this on purpose but she could have let him demonstrate instead. He knows no jutsu but he can at least do better than that. He can make a sparkle appear in his hand if he tries hard enough but now does not even think of it so that the little girl does not get even more scared.

“take me home there are bears here and I am scared. Please abthor”

The little girl is so desperate to leave that she is crying now. Abathor cannot believe that he took them here of all places. He should have taken them somewhere less dangerous.

“Be careful Hina!”

Abathor knows he encouraged hina to be more experimental but this was too much especially with this little girl here. After the slab falls on the ground he sighs and makes sure the little girl is ok. Hina has a good point that the girl needs to learn lots if she wants to become a summon girl. Some were able to successfully able to get away, others were not so lucky. He knows that she cannot learn that information from him.

“I am sorry little one but I am not the one to teach this jutsu that you want. You have to find someone else. I do not think Hina can even teach it.”

He wishes he was a strong taijutsu user so that on the ground he could habe hefted up the slabs of earth and heaved them at a tree in anger. He was a chakra user skilled in the element of fire and he wanted to set fire to the forest. He has to calm down so he buries his head in the little girl’s hair who is crying because she wasted her whole day to find out that nobody could help her and she had to go to the academy. No shortcuts for this little girl.

Abathor cannot still believe that he was almost hit by the rocks that came out of the ground when Hina used ninjutsu for the first time that he has ever seen. he would internally wipe a bead of sweat from his brow, this seemed a lot harder than he had thought it was, the rocks were hot like they had gotten mutated when they were pulled ut of the ground. He rememberd a time when his body would flip and twist through the air as the rocks would pass by him but now he can only run away and not do anything fancy.

“I think a hippo will be a good summon for you because it is reckless like you.”

Abathor thinks it is necessary to insult hina for what she had just done. He hopes she will not take it seriously because that would be bad for their relationship.

“Okay little one let me take you home. Thank you for your knowledge Hina I am sure this one will go to the academy. I do not know any summoners who can teach her.”

Abathor leaves the bear training grounds and goes back to the village center so he can take the little one back home. He hopes she does not seek out other masters and just accepts the academy. Abathor went there a long time ago and it was not that bad. He thinks she can handle it.

"Anyway, I am glad you gave me something to do today I'll be leaving for now..."

Abathor interrupted his own train of thought, shaking his head in the process.  He frowned, thinking that he really should have helped her more before he left. His doubt in himself had actualy grown instead of shrunk after this day. He lost a fight and he found out he cannot help this girl. What a shame this day had become.

Abathor can think of nothing else to do to burn up his time than to go back to train some more. He still hurts greatly from getting hurt by Hina and then also having to run so fast from that bear. He thinks he should take up medicine so that he can treat himself. He does not trust these new age doctors. He must do everything himself. This is easier said than done because he does not think he will be able to care for himself for much longer. Abathor cries himself to sleep and considers quitting being a ninja and retiring for good this time.

777 / 3501

Train d-2 -> d-3 endurance
train d-0 -> d-3 dexterity

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12abathor fights hina Empty Re: abathor fights hina on Wed May 01, 2019 7:23 pm



Hina feels a bit abashed because she was scolded by Abathor. How could she know that a pillar of earth was going to rise when she hadn’t even learned her first earth jutsu? She was actually happy that something good had come out of this day. The fight turned out to be a little too easy to win but at least she had learned she was able to shape the earth. The only thing she had to worry about were some traps that had been set up. “okay, cya Abathor,” she called out as he left. She was going to shrug off the well deserved insult and give a smile to show that she didn’t care. Friends made fun of each other, after all. “Be careful on the way home! There are traps around here! Oh, and little girl, I hope you enjoy the academy! It really wasn’t that bad! Oh, and don’t be afraid to try new things! Maybe summoning isn’t the thing for you and you can find something else that you enjoy!” Hina wanted to keep shouting but they soon departed and there was no point causing any more of a ruckus.

With Abathor gone Hina could focus back on experimenting a little more with earth manipulation as well as disabling some of these traps. They weren’t nearly powerful enough to stop a bear, so why had they been set up in the first place? She stepped forwards and somehow got grazed by a shuriken. “Owwie!” she shouted as she felt the area of the injury and realized that it had caused at least a small amount of bleeding. With a groan she set out to look for more traps, this time determined to be more careful. Sure, none of the traps here were meant to be lethal, but they could give you a world of hurt, and like that shuriken, they could really sting. As she was just about to take another step, her foot snagged on a wire. her body froze, the trap not yet springing.

With a sigh of relief, she put her foot back down. she had every intention of springing the trap, as practicing a replacement technique with no imminent danger was simply boring, but she wanted it to be on her terms. she focused on the ground once more then tried to be more gentle with her arms as she raised them up a little more elegantly than last time. The earth lifted her more quickly this time and Hina grinned happily and thanked the ground for its assistance.

To her surprise, she didn't just hear a thump, or even a crash, but several loud thuds as she replaced himself. This bothered her, she didn't remember any multiple item traps in this area. she wandered back to where he'd sprung the trap, careful not to trip any others. Hina looked down and saw several fresh shuriken stuck in its bark. Clearly had she not been ready to act, she'd have been killed, or severely injured at the very least. This sight disturbed him. “Who'd bother to set a fresh trap like this out here? Especially one that was easily capable of killing someone?” To her knowledge, setting such dangerous traps where fellow shinobi frequented was a social taboo, especially if you weren’t going to disable them when you were done. Well, Hina made it out of this trap infested area and headed back home where she could get some well deserved rest. Who knows when the next time she would see Abathor would be.


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