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1Nakir [Revamp II] Empty Nakir [Revamp II] on Mon Jun 03, 2019 9:39 pm

Tomohiro

Tomohiro


B-rank
Symbol:
Nakir [Revamp II] BPoB9D6


Nakir [Revamp II] FAHfQ33
Clan Name: Nakir
Location: Kumogakure
Specialization: Ninjutsu
Elements: Katon


Nakir [Revamp II] HhU72Pp
Clan History: The Nakir Clan's first unified appearance was during the Third Shinobi World War. There had been rumors in and around Kumogakure for generations of a clan of monks that lived underground and practiced the art of the sword. This was partially true, save for the fact that this clan of monks lived amongst the lay people of Kumo and did not openly partake in the shinobi arts. They performed their ritualistic swordsmanship in dim, flame-lit caves and basements, hidden from the world, at extreme temperatures, and protected their Hidden Jutsu and their prized doujutsu, the Netsugan. To the outsider, this clan seemed like normal villagers who lived in Kumogakure and made their living by mining precious ores from the mountains around them. Though they did make a living by mining, the occupation also served as a way for the clan to carve out their ritual spaces and underground compounds.

However, when the Third Shinobi World War broke out, the younger members of the clan felt the nationalistic call of their village and wanted to fight against the evil forces of Konohagakure. Though against the wishes of the clan's elders, the younger members revealed their true identities and rushed off to join the war. They earned their name in one-on-one combat against the members of the Hidden Leaf Village and the prowess of their doujutsu was coveted by sensory shinobi world wide.

After the war, the Nakir clan resumed its unassuming presence in Kumo. They faded from the ranks of the shinobi in two short generations, as they resumed their hermit-like practice of their rituals. The Fourth Shinobi World War came and went but not one member of the Nakir clan partook in the fighting. Their hatred of Konohagakure prevented them from joining the ranks of the Allied Shinobi Force. After the war against the White Zetsu, the clan seemed to disappear back into rumor and legend. Some think it was because they felt the dishonor from not joining in the fight; others think it was something to do with their doujutsu. The truth: the clan has always been there, hidden amongst the people.

Members:
Nakir, Taka
Nakir, Tomohiro

Nakir [Revamp II] Y4syLuV
Kekkei Genkai Name: Netsugan
Kekkei Genkai Description:
The Nakir clan's hidden doujutsu is the result of generations of shinobi living underground and relying on their abilities with Katon jutsu to see. The unfortunate reality of clan-based inbreeding developed the first mutation of a child's eyes long before the spark of the Third Shinobi World War. The first Nakir to develop the Netsugan was able to perceive her surrounding by the level and intensity of heat as opposed to the visible spectrum of light. This doujutsu became revered in the clan though originally considered a curse. The eyes spread throughout the bloodlines after the first Netsugan user had activated. It revealed itself to shinobi that struggled against all odds in the oppressive heat and darkness of the caves that the clan inhabited and mined.

Eventually, the clan learned how to make the doujutsu appear in Nakir that were deemed worthy, not just through toil, but through ritualistic combat. Acts that were honorable and brought glory to the clan were recorded annually. The elders from the families would convene and select those members from each branch to receive the Netsugan. The rituals that were performed shortly after the selections were ones of intense heat, dim lighting, and rigorous combat. Such a strain awakened the Netsugan in those who did not possess it and strengthened the Netsugan in those who already did.


En Netsugan (Stage 1)
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The En Netsugan is the first form of the Netsugan that a Nakir can obtain.

  • During this mode, Perception (visual cues) and Dexterity of the Nakir is increased by a tier, meaning someone with Dexterity/Perception trained up to C-0 will have C-1 Dexterity/Perception.

  • Once the Netsugan is deactivated, the Nakir shinobi will have color blindness in addition to Perception (visual cues) and Dexterity that is decreased by a tier for 2 posts. (Ex. Nakir with Dexterity/Perception trained up to C-0 will have D-3 Dexterity/Perception.)

  • Consumes 5 chakra per post when active.


To obtain this level of Netsugan, these guidelines must be met to perform the ritual:
Code:

[b]Stage Being Trained:[/b] En Netsugan
[b]Minimum Shinobi Rank Required:[/b] Genin/D-rank
[b]Objective:[/b] Netsugan Training Nothing to D-rank through Ritual Combat
[b]Location:[/b] Underground (Basement, Cave, Etc.)
[b]Ryo Cost:[/b] 500
[b]Word Cost:[/b] 2000
[b]Training Details:[/b] The ritual for the Nakir must undergone in a place with low light and extreme heat. The light is required to be lit by fire. The ritual requires there to be at least 4 D-rank Nakir clansmen to be engaged against the individual training their Netsugan. The ritual may be performed with NPCs and the word count must be exceeded or met. The Nakir generally wear monk robes during the ritual. This is optional for the player.

[b]Name:[/b] Nameless Nakir NPC
[b]Age:[/b] 12-24
[b]General Appearance:[/b] Nakir robes. (Traditionally, black and/or red)
[b]Personality:[/b] Up to the writer.
[b]Goals:[/b] Wear out the opponent, without causing too much trauma.
[b]Abilities:[/b] All D-0 stats with C-rank Ninjutsu. C-rank Katon
[b]Items:[/b] E-rank Bokken or Various E-rank Training Swords (Great Swords, Nodachi, Wazikashi, Etc.)



Rain Netsugan (Stage 2)
Nakir [Revamp II] ExJa6Xim

The eyes take on a vertical split that is known as the Rain Netsugan. It is the second form of the Netsugan that a Nakir clansman can obtain. This is the stage of the Netsugan in which it begins to reveal its famed abilities.


  • During this mode, Perception (visual cues) and Dexterity of the Nakir is increased by a tier, meaning someone with Dexterity/Perception trained up to C-0 will have C-1 Dexterity/Perception.

  • The Nakir clansman is able to see thermal signatures of everything in the front 180 degree visual arc within 40m of them. These signatures are unrefined, therefore only show the Nakir a body of heat and not the specific level of heat or the fine details like individual fingers or a person's vascular/muscular system.

  • Due to the ability to see thermal signatures, Nakir shinobi with the Rain Netsugan are able to see through visual stealth techniques up to a D-Rank.

  • Once the Netsugan is deactivated, the Nakir shinobi will have color blindness in addition to Perception (visual cues) and Dexterity that is decreased by a tier for 2 posts. (Ex. Nakir with Dexterity/Perception trained up to C-0 will have D-3 Dexterity/Perception.)

  • Consumes 10 chakra per post when active.


To obtain this level of Netsugan, these guidelines must be met to perform the ritual:

Code:

[b]Stage Being Trained:[/b] Rain Netsugan
[b]Minimum Shinobi Rank Required:[/b] Chuunin/C-rank
[b]Objective:[/b] Netsugan Training D-rank to C-rank through Ritual Combat
[b]Location:[/b] Underground (Basement, Cave, Etc.)
[b]Ryo Cost:[/b] 1000
[b]Word Cost:[/b] 2500
[b]Training Details:[/b] The ritual for the Nakir must undergone in a place with low light and extreme heat. The light is required to be lit by fire. The ritual requires there to be at least 4 C-rank Nakir clansmen to be engaged against the individual training their Netsugan. The ritual may be performed with NPCs and the word count must be exceeded or met. The Nakir generally wear monk robes during the ritual. This is optional for the player.

[b]Name:[/b] Nameless Nakir NPC
[b]Age:[/b] 15-24
[b]General Appearance:[/b] Nakir robes or up to the writer.
[b]Personality:[/b] Up to the writer.
[b]Goals:[/b] Wear out the opponent, without causing too much trauma.
[b]Abilities:[/b] All C-0 stats with B-rank Ninjutsu. B-rank Katon
[b]Items:[/b] D-rank Bokken or Various E-rank Training Swords (Great Swords, Nodachi, Wazikashi, Etc.)




Baningu Netsugan (Stage 3)
Nakir [Revamp II] AVSTDBRm

The Baningu Netsugan is the third form of the Netsugan that a Nakir clansman can obtain. This is a more refined version of the Netsugan than the Rain Netsugan. The eyes of during the Baningu Netsugan begin to give off faint light that closely resembles a match.

  • During this mode, Perception (visual cues) and Dexterity of the Nakir is increased by a tier, meaning someone with Dexterity/Perception trained up to C-0 will have C-1 Dexterity/Perception.

  • The Nakir clansman is able to see thermal signatures of everything in the front 180 degree visual arc within 80m of them, and behind solid objects. These signatures are extremely refined, allowing for the Nakir to see individual blood veins and vessels within a body, as well as the differing levels of heat within their vision (black being the coldest, purple, blue, green, yellow, orange, red, white being the hottest).

  • Due to the ability to see thermal signatures, Nakir shinobi with the Rain Netsugan are able to see through visual stealth techniques up to a C-Rank.

  • Once the Netsugan is deactivated, the Nakir shinobi will have color blindness in addition to Perception (visual cues) and Dexterity that is decreased by a tier for 2 posts. (Ex. Nakir with Dexterity/Perception trained up to C-0 will have D-3 Dexterity/Perception.)

  • Consumes 15 chakra per post when active.


To obtain this level of Netsugan, these guidelines must be met to perform the ritual:

Code:

[b]Stage Being Trained:[/b] Baningu Netsugan
[b]Minimum Shinobi Rank Required:[/b] Sp. Jounin/B-rank
[b]Objective:[/b] Netsugan Training C-rank to B-rank through Ritual Combat
[b]Location:[/b] Underground (Basement, Cave, Etc.)
[b]Ryo Cost:[/b] 1500
[b]Word Cost:[/b] 3000
[b]Training Details:[/b] The ritual for the Nakir must undergone in a place with low light and extreme heat. The light is required to be lit by fire. The ritual requires there to be at least 4 B-rank Nakir clansmen to be engaged against the individual training their Netsugan. The ritual may be performed with NPCs and the word count must be exceeded or met. The Nakir generally wear monk robes during the ritual. This is optional for the player.

[b]Name:[/b] Nameless Nakir NPC
[b]Age:[/b] 17-30
[b]General Appearance:[/b] Nakir robes. (Traditionally, black and/or red)
[b]Personality:[/b] Up to the writer.
[b]Goals:[/b] Wear out the opponent, without causing too much trauma.
[b]Abilities:[/b] All B-0 stats with A-rank Ninjutsu. A-rank Katon
[b]Items:[/b] C-rank Bokken or Various C-rank Training Swords (Great Swords, Nodachi, Wazikashi, Etc.)



Iroaseta Netsugan (Stage 4)
Nakir [Revamp II] 3XTwlyAm

The faded, purple flame of the Iroaseta Netsugan is the final form of the Netsugan that a Nakir can obtain. The light from emanated from the Baningu Netsugan fades to a dull purple, though it does not change in intensity.

  • During this mode, Perception (visual cues) and Dexterity of the Nakir is increased by a tier, meaning someone with Dexterity/Perception trained up to C-0 will have C-1 Dexterity/Perception.

  • The Nakir can see the thermal signatures of everything in the front 180 degree visual arc within 200m of them, and behind solid objects. These signatures are extremely refined, allowing for the Nakir to see individual blood veins and vessels within a body, as well as the differing levels of heat within their vision (black being the coldest, purple, blue, green, yellow, orange, red, white being the hottest).

  • Due to the ability to see thermal signatures, Nakir shinobi with the Iroaseta Netsugan are able to see through visual stealth techniques up to a B-rank.

  • Once the Netsugan is deactivated, the Nakir shinobi will have color blindness in addition to Perception (visual cues) and Dexterity that is decreased by a tier for 2 posts. (Ex. Nakir with Dexterity/Perception trained up to C-0 will have D-3 Dexterity/Perception.)

  • Consumes 20 chakra per post when active.


To obtain this level of Netsugan, these guidelines must be met to perform the ritual:

Code:

[b]Stage Being Trained:[/b] Iroaseta Netsugan
[b]Minimum Shinobi Rank Required:[/b] Jounin/A-rank
[b]Objective:[/b] Netsugan Training B-rank to A-rank through Ritual Combat
[b]Location:[/b] Underground (Basement, Cave, Etc.)
[b]Ryo Cost:[/b] 2000
[b]Word Cost:[/b] 3500
[b]Training Details:[/b] The ritual for the Nakir must undergone in a place with low light and extreme heat. The light is required to be lit by fire. The ritual requires there to be at least 4 A-rank Nakir clansmen to be engaged against the individual training their Netsugan. The ritual may be performed with NPCs and the word count must be exceeded or met. The Nakir generally wear monk robes during the ritual. This is optional for the player.

[b]Name:[/b] Nameless Nakir NPC
[b]Age:[/b] 20-35
[b]General Appearance:[/b] Nakir robes. (Traditionally, black and/or red)
[b]Personality:[/b] Up to the writer.
[b]Goals:[/b] Wear out the opponent, without causing too much trauma.
[b]Abilities:[/b] All A-0 stats with S-rank Ninjutsu. S-rank Katon
[b]Items:[/b] B-rank Bokken or Various B-rank Training Swords (Great Swords, Nodachi, Wazikashi, Etc.)




Attributes:

  • Due to having a strong katon affinity, Nakir members receive a -25% word count requirement for learning Katon Techniques.


Drawbacks:

  • Must start with Katon as a primary element.
  • Regardless of specializations that are chosen, Ninjutsu is the permanent mandatory affinity.
  • Due to their reliance on their visual sight, Sensory techs that are not reliant on the eyes require +10% training increase.
  • Nakir members are weak against suiton. Suiton acts as if it’s a rank higher against them equal to that of the current damage value.
  • When the Netsugan is active (Rain Netsugan and above), every image beyond their seeing range is blurry and unclear.
  • Nakir clansmen are primarily swordsmen and must take Hesitant (Specialization) characteristic with no counter balance.


Other:

  • The power of the Nakir is contained within their Doujutsu. The Netsugan has multiple stages, with each stage unlocking additional abilities. You must keep track of your Netsugan level at the top of your Jutsu List.



Last edited by Tomohiro on Wed Jun 12, 2019 4:41 am; edited 1 time in total


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2Nakir [Revamp II] Empty Re: Nakir [Revamp II] on Wed Jun 12, 2019 2:21 am

Nova Makato

Nova Makato


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I know that the clan has undergone modding before and is just being updated to current rules, but the only thing im seeing that id like to be changed is for the rank up requirements for the dojutsu to be written in a mission-like format just to make it a little clearer. The rest looks good.


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3Nakir [Revamp II] Empty Re: Nakir [Revamp II] on Mon Jun 17, 2019 7:27 pm

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Approved!


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