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1 Chikamatsu on Wed Feb 15, 2012 1:14 pm

Kanuga

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Clan: Chikamatsu

Kekkei Genkai: Progenitors of Puppetry

Elements: N/A

Specialization: Kugutsu

Location: Sunagakure

Clan History: The Puppet technique is one developed by a man called Monzaemon Chikamatsu who after settling in Sunagakure began to tinker on the idea of using Puppets as weapons during the First Shinobi Great War. Since then Monzaemon's teachings would be taught to shinobi of Sunagakure that were willing to succumb to the strenuous studies and learn the puppet technique. Since Monzaemon's death, the puppet technique would be passed down to families within Sunagakure in the hopes of securing Suna to time indefinite. Puppet-nin who have become true masters of the art, could later join a private organization known as the "Puppet Brigade" which is an association with some of the brightest minds in espionage, tactics, and ingenuity Suna has to offer.

Further enhancing their knowledge in mechanics and technology, the Chikamatsu have become the epitome of inventive nature within the Village Hidden in the Sand. Most still specialize in definite puppetry, while others may focus towards creating clever mechanisms and artillery.

Kekkei Genkai Description: Every ninja gets one free puppet of D-rank, along with the appropriate modifications. Since they specialize in puppetry, they are able to treat the Puppet Technique as if they were one rank higher than they are.

Drawbacks: Puppeteers from this clans can’t learn Taijutsu or Bukijutsu for any purpose. They are not very versed in close physical combat; all Taijutsu and Bukijutsu attacks, chakra-enhanced or not, executed within the reach of a weapon or a body (melee-range) gain +1 rank of effectiveness against the Chikamatsu. Members of this clan can only use jutsu requiring non-Kugutsu specializations at their own rank level.

Members:

Chikamatsu, Kikisu
Chikamatsu, Alexei

Kekkei Genkai Jutsu:

Name: Invisible Chakra Strings
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: C-A
Type: Supplementary
Element: N/A
Range: Range of the Puppet Technique.
Specialty:
Duration: Until the Puppet Technique ends.
Cooldown: Duration +2 posts
Description: This technique has a single purpose: it makes the strings from the Puppet Technique, or a similar maintainable jutsu that creates chakra threads, invisible to all those with Perception of tier-3 or lower (of this jutsu's rank). This technique requires no maintenance, as it is easy to keep the effect going as long as the affected jutsu is active and maintained. Chakra strings that are broken and reattached are no longer under the influence of this technique.



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2 Re: Chikamatsu on Fri Nov 07, 2014 1:33 am

Tenmei

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This is pretty okay. I just have few minor edits I want done here.

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Symbol: Might just be mebut this is missing and it needs to be replaced

Kekkei Genkai: I am sure someone can come up with a name for this KG

Kekkei Genkai Description: I would like this to be a bit more detailed so everyone who wants to join is clear on what exactly you are getting.
- Define what you mean when you say "they are already trained with it and it's weapons". Does this mean that you start with this at a higher rank? Do you know all the jutsu that you use with this? Or are you just saying that? Details please.
- Also, explain what +1 do you get.  Can you use +1 rank of jutsu? Are your skills +1 rank of puppetry you know? Again, please define this.
- Finally, please explain what the free scroll is for.

Drawbacks: Just a few things here
-Kenjutsu is no longer a seperate spec. It's bukijutsu so that needs to be changed.
- I would like one more minor drawback in addition to what's there.

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Once this is done, we will move on to the jutsu.

3 Re: Chikamatsu on Sat Jun 06, 2015 2:17 am

Taede

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Genin
All fixed/clarified.


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